Hmmm... Not too bad. I make movie montages myself, so I'm familiar with this kind of stuff. What video editing software did you use? I'm just a bit curious. Also, I was wondering where you got the scene that started at 2:13 from. I don't recognize it. In general though, it was a pretty well made video. Nothing fancy, but it's acceptable. Your song choice was a bit weird (I'm not a big fan of rap), but it didn't bother me too much. I have to say, it could be better, but I've seen worse, so props to you for that. Good job overall. Hopefully you don't think I'm too harsh. I'm not trying to be. I'm just trying to give you some friendly advice. But nice job anyway!