Kiel95

which is probably why i popped in to comment ^^ AiCoN/ShInShI FTW!!!! colorful no?

mmk

sure i can help you with things you're having trouble on just send it to me in a message, or post which one you'd like me to look over onto my profile i can check em out and tell you what i see (but i guarantee you, me and tenses hate each other... i can do ok with them, but somehow, they always want to stab me in the back when i least expect it -.-)

conanshinichi? huh? are you saying he's a narcissistic person who loves himself waaaay too much? oh and partially a pedophile since half of him is in love with his child half?!?

hrm... well at least you guys believe in true love... i don't... i want to... and i even would consider myself a hopeless romantic... but ironically, i don't believe true love exists -shrug- some things just don't make sense to me, and love is one of those things... i just don't see how it can be real

well... me and my computer have been having to fight it out with lots of viruses ... umm i still went on the stories forum since there was less to look at... and i just didn't have much time on the computer when i found time i could spare

rgh... that i completely understand >///<

Don't worry, most of us are here to help I usually only browse the stories forum since i love to read other stories and see other writing styles... and i also like to help those in need... sure i can't spend every waking moment helping ppl improve, and i'm not the best with grammar myself (i'm getting a B in english ... and tenses piss me off) but i can usually help at least a little bit with other people's stories... and i don't mind helping if you need it so, good luck, and keep writing, you'll definitely get better! Age has nothing to do with it, it all depends on practice and experience

i feel like a lot of theories are being repeated *sigh* oh well, it happens anyways, i really hope there was no sort of relationship between the two, cuz if there are, i'm going to personally have to dispose of Gin... i'm a hardcore ShinShi, if there was anything between Gin and Sherry, I am SOOOOOO ending it!

i still think it's yamamura's granny... i don't know, it's just one of those random things no one would suspect yet could easily be true

geez... it seems shinran's have dominated this topic recently... i just haven't felt up to looking at the general section... well then... here i goooooo aicon/shinshi ftw!!!

just so you know, i did find quite a few grammatical errors which bugged me... like when you were talking about their ages you said what should have been said is "She looked to be the same age as him." the way you phrased it was quite odd. anyways, this story is quite interesting, but i'm not sure if i'll continue... i've never had much interest in stories where people other than conan and ai have been shrunk... i don't like the idea of it... well, that about sums up what i had to say... and your signature kind of goes against how you said not to flame too hard since you're 14, and then your signature says to not treat you like a kid... well... most people flame others, whether you're a kid or not, age doesn't matter, the best you can hope for would be constructive criticism, so i suggest changing what you said in the beginning and say : "Please do not flame, but all CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is encouraged and helpful" You don't need to throw out your age, as it's also in you're signature anywyas, good luck with your story, hope it turns out for the best

heeey, well i read that it wasn't a conai... made me sad, but since it wasn't a shinran i'm ok aaaaanywaaaaays, even tho the words were mashed it was quite easy to read, and pleasant as well ^^ I really liked it! i didn't see too many errors (i would list them but they are so minor i forgot where they are) i definitely think this should go on fanfiction. You're work is quite amazing, and i like your descriptive detail. You're doing a great job! I can't wait to read more and i'm glad you broke ShinRan up even tho you are one and i actually don't mind it ending heishin, but personally... KaiShin is waaaaay better than HeiShin KYAAAAAA~ <3 (whoops... fangirl mode... sorry XD)

sadly that's true... but i usually stay on the stories section, so i usually see more AiCons than ShinRans... and besides... we have so many ppl on this forum, it really depends on how many are online... its really hard to estimate unless someone asked every single member (and somehow got a reply from the dormant members)

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yeah, i understand what you mean... i can no longer see a shinran ending, even if i know it'll happen, i just can't imagine it.. >///<

yaaaaay cuz this was epic, and you're a good writer and i'd love to read more <3

not bad ^^ wondering if this will turn into a longer story, or if this was where it ended.. i think it'd be cool to have a bit more going on afterwards... you could write your own ending for the syndicate for us all to read i bet tons of ppl would be happy to get the chance to see another alternate ending thought up by another fellow... err... dc fan XD anywyas, I'D LOVE TO READ MORE! so do think about it <3 and this was amazing