Kiel95
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i won't kill you ^^ i don't kill... i maim and annihalate, but i don't kill ^^ annihalation doesn't necessarily mean kill either
it may mean utterly destroy... but there are different respects as to what can be destroyed... like reputation XD but don't worry, me won't annihalate or kill or harm you in any way... for the time being ;D -
oi... if you're going to have a conversation with someone else do it on their profile not mine >w< its like spamming my email...
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hmm, pretty good. i find it quite interesting (even if when an author inserts themselves ticks me off... you'rs is good) ^^ can't wait to read more!!!
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haha, thanks ^^ well, i haven't been on writer's cafe in a while... but my whole story is posted here and on deviantart... my username is the same there as well ^^
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yaaay mochi~kun <3
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nonononono, he's MOCHI~KUN ^^ either that or Mo~chan
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hahaha, well i don't know exactly when it will be pposted, but i'm hopin within the next fewdays ^^
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same here... today at school i'ma be working on a drawin for Japan.... i'll be postin it on deviant art since i'm drawing both me and a friend on it ^^
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doin pretty good ^^ thanks for asking...
i haven't had much time to be on this website since i've been preoccupied with other things...
anyways, how've you been?
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you mean Mochi-kun?
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tsk, tsk, tsk, his name is Mochi! XD
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hmm, i'm loving this already, yay shinshi <3 now then, what others have pointed out a really good things that could help improve your writing... yeah, the tenses are a bit screwed up, but if you get someone to edit before posting, all the better right? You can have someone show you your mistakes and possibly help explain went wrong... so try to find a trustworthy editor, that's always a plus ah yes, and i do believe that he would call shiho Miyano, or Haibara as well... i don't think he'll be able to easily overcome the habit of just using the family name with no honorifics... and he would most likely call her Haibara... just because he's used to it.... even after time it won't exactly to be easy to change what you call someone... oh yes, i just remembered something... when it comes to third person, there are two types... i remember that one was called omniscent... but i forgot the other one (damn me and my forgetfulness) anyways, you could either go by mainly one character, where the reader only knows what they're thinking and not what others are thinking, or you could let the reader know what everyone in the story is thinking (or at least multiple people) so, don't forget to find an editor, and if your trying to make it so they seem a bit closer, i understand! good luck and i can't wait to read more! <3<3<3 SHINSHI-CONAI FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hahaha, well, even if you're not conai i usually try to read the stories, but i was mainly put off since it was diary format and you spoke like a little kid from first person point of view... i'm not a huge fan of first person. i prefer third person.... and when dates are put up there i get confused
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probably no one cares, but i was just playing harvest moon on my ds, and i couldn't help but draw my fav character of all.... NAMI!!!!!!!!!!!! so yeah... i drew her... and colored her... much better than my usual work.. but... yeah... i liked it ^^ that's all... just felt like telling someone
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well, this is a detective conan site... mines a fanpic for a harvest moon game >w<
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Nice to kno.
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You can post it in the Off-Topic section under games.
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urgh.. sorry don't like the diary format... and even though it's coming from a little kid... the format put me off.... i could barely read it.. i had to skim sorry... not a huge fan.. especially cuz it isn't conai.. but that isn't the only reason...
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nope, never read either of those oh well, i did write a valentines day and halloween fanfic (two seperate ones of course) the valentines day one though, that's a two part, the first part is for the shinrans, if you were an aicon you'd read the first and second part... anyways, good luck in your writings!
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hahaha, iz ok most people wouldn't know unless they checked my profile or have seen me say it somewhere
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erm... in this case, i'm actually 'the woman' ^^
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well, i only read the second part... sorry, not a shinran fan, and since in the beginning you said it could turn aicon (even if you yourself will never believe it) i decided to read only the ending i think it's pretty good... umm ai and hattori being there isn't that random... i mean, they're the only ones who really could understand conan on anything since they're two of hte few people who knows his true identity... well anyways, i loved it, and i intened to dream up a conai ending for this story XD lol anywyas, great job ^^
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haha alright XD
