Kiel95
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practice brings you closer to perfect
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@Mochi: See? new nickname ^^ buahahahahahah
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Savior, you make the weirdest comments...
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I'm just trying to have fun.
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True. Except your definition of fun is different from mine.
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no clue how you came up with it but...
Mocci ^^ you're nickname is Mochi ^^
because you start with Mo, and you have c h and i in your username ^^ and, as i was looking at it, i first thought... mocci... then i made it japanese ^^
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kaoko~chan... ok sorry, i just re-read it cuz i'd even forgotten what it was about... but i find the exchange between them off a bit... i feel she should still be all mature, and not act too surprised... like when she gets the room... she should look around without any hint of a smile, then slowly a slight grin spreads across her face as she whispers, "It's not that bad." She isn't the type to have an embarrassing convos with shinichi like that i think she's more likely to smirk and say, "Why Shin~chan, I'm so glad you're my little brother now. You get to call me onee-san now <3" of course she's joking around with him, so she's not in her personality at this moment, other than the fact that she's making fun of him like usual... he should turn a little red at this, but be saved when he gets a call about a case... as he leaves... she sees her family in the night sky or stars... or wherever... and then a tear rolls down her face which she quickly wipes away. then with a face full of resolve, she sets off on her own adventure of a lifetime ^^
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you do realise, that if you kill ai and don't make it aicon, i will hunt you down, find you, and burn you alive right? *angelic face with a hidden evil intent*
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AICON! I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER IF IT'S AICON!
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happy birthday <3 so, hows it feel to be a two months and 6 days older than me? XD
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stupid project... i have to do a freakin history project today... then i have to write an essay on it in class... i also have to present an english project tomorrow... and if i remember correctly, i have to turn in a packet i haven't started... kill me now
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hahaha...yep, it was the name i gave Kaoko. I can't believe it that she didn't know that such thing like Donkey Kong exists until I told her
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hahaha wooooow XD
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L. O. L! Haha!
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@PoPo: Dishonest enemies, i wouldn't trust them to begin with! @GRTD: *shrug* no clue
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that's what i said... i'd prefer dishonest enemies... i wouldn't trust enemies to begin with...
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O. Dishonest allies = recipe for trouble.
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exactly ^^
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i dunno... i may not have.. i've been a bit preoccupied with studying for tests and doing all these stupid retarded projects >w< i haven't updated your blog yet cuz i haven't had time to post my stories there >w< i will soon though! i promise!
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PoPo! that is final! unless you change your username again...
anyways, you are PoPo, the critic police!
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for practice, i suggeset writing different fanfics at the same time. it helps improve your own writing style... you don't always have to publish them, as some will not come out correctly, but as time goes on, those mistakes will help you improve and become a much better writer ^^ good luck! can't wait to read more
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well.. its has a few grammatical errors which make it slightly confusing... and i guess the wording doesn't necessarily fit the characters... and youre missing a bit in the beginning... but other than that i think it'll be a pretty good story and i can't wait to read more ^^
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no prob ^^ sorry it took so long to reply back, me and my computer were having some issues, me and my dad ended up having to completely restore teh whole thing...
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ok, what happens is, you go to where someone has commented, and you can click on a little green plus at the bottom right of their comment, there is one on each comment... clicking on it gives reputation
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humble? honey, i'm anythin but humble- i've just learned ,that in high school, nobody looks at the inside, everyones focused on the outside... so don't worry bout it
believe me, i know i'm fat and ugly ^^ i'm gonna work on it (basically i needto start using acne cream and actually trying to excercise in gym)