I posted my thoughts on the talkpage over there, but I'll copy and paste them over here, too.
My thoughts, as follows:
* The "Okiya and Akai are both left handed" could look nicer, possibly in a bullet-format?
* The first mention of the characters should be wikilinked.
* In general, some of the personal speculation (IE. "This is a terrible excuse; Conan cannot be serious) sounds very un-encyclopedic. "Some believe that this is a terrible excuse, and that Conan cannot possibly be serious." is a better fit. On Wikipedia, they would argue that "some" is very "weasel word-ish", but we are not Wikipedia, so no problems with that here.
* The Gundam points are very interesting. Never thought about that.
IMO, it looks perfectly fine. What I'm wondering is how you're gonna put it into the article. You want it as its own article? That could work, but in the style that Wikipedia does it (In that its linked in Okiya's article, and a small summary of that page is on Okiya's actual page, as well,) IMO.