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Okay I will tell you my favorite pairings: Shinichi Kudo - Ran Mouri(Obviously ) Saguru Hakuba - Shiho Miyano (It'll be disappointing if Haibara ended up with no one , so I guess Saguru and Shiho would make a good pair ) Yusaku Kudo - Yukiko Fujimane (I don't know, but they look so amusing !) Heiji Hattori - Kazuha Toyama (umm... I like how the way they quarrels all the time ) Akako Koizumi - (I'll update this when I post chapter 2 of 'The Best Moments', because it'll give a spoiler to my story... ) Shuuichi Akai - Jodie Starling (I'd prefer Akemi if she is still alive ) Genta Kojima - Ayumi Yoshida (they look fantastic together... I feel sorry for Genta since he's not popular with girls... Ayumi should sympathy with him and give her life to feed him! Yohohohoh, yeah I know... I'm EVIL!) Mitsuhiko Tsubaraya - ->I forgot her name-< (Hehehe... sorry...) Eisuke Hondou - Keiko [from Magic Kaito] (I don't know... it just popped out in my head for no reason...) Kaoko Arai - ... (Eh... what! )
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Wow! You're going to writ a fan-fic? I want to read it! I saw the teaser in Maurice's profile... and boy, it looks so interesting!
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Haha, if I made Ran die, you wouldn't cry . And that's what I wanted the most... to make my readers cry ... their house in flood of tears... struggling in tragedy... die in pain ... Yohohohoho ! But I doubt that anyone will cry anyway... since it's only a fan-fic. And my writings aren't very touching *sob**sob*... But I'll be sure to give it my best shot! Please look forward to it !
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YO! Thanks for reading my fan-fic one again Not telling¬ you would have to wait and see it yourself because if I told you now, it wouldn't be a surprise anymore. Keep reading my stories on and on! I promise you would never get bored!
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Thank you so much Akai-san for your hard word during my absence! I wrote a fan-fic in the stories section... please read it and give me your opinon!
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Yes I'm on the side of Shuu=Scar... But... I really love this picture Ohohohohoh !
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Wow, that's sad! *sob**sob* ->wiping tears<- No, I'm not ShinxRan fan. I'm just following the series, but I'm not a fan of it... but I aslo don't complain about it. But ShinxShiho is also amazing! I like to read Shi-Shiho pairings in Fan-Fiction though~
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*Wink* *wink*, ^,^ But, you don't mind Tragedy, right? One of them is going to die...
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Why, thank you Tacticwolf-chan! You have no idea how happy I am to see you! But whats with the Professor, diet and stuff? o_0 As to let you know, I'm working on ShihoxShinichi fan-fic. It's romantic and very tragic... One of the reasons I'm making it was because of you~ It's very touching and sad~ I'm just about to finish it. It's only One-Shot!
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Chapter 1: The Invitation Authorās Note: Hello everyone! Hehe⦠some lousy thief stealing internet wires in town. We ended up without internet. Without any connections, I decided I would write a Fan-Fic continuing the storyline of āAfter the Battleā⦠and here! I wrote this the best as I could. It may not be perfect but itās worth reading ~ My English may not be that good, so you will naturally find some mistakes, grammatical errors and some others⦠but at least its understanding. I changed my writing style a bit⦠it got more details, more action, more talking, and the chapter is quite long. Lot of characters would be involved (see āCharactersā below)⦠I tried to make them in character as hard as possible! If you hadnāt read my Fan-Fic āAfter the Battleā, I suggest you read that one first before this. So youāll have more details about what happened. Thereād be a romance about Shihoās love life. Iāll try to make it romantic and dramatic as much as possible. Just read and find out yourself whoād she will end up with~ donāt expect it to be with Shinichi! Read it on Fan-Fiction (it's more recognized and well formated): http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6373955/1/ Disclaimer: I donāt own Detective Conan, neither itās characters⦠only the plot here is mine Characters: Shinichi Kudo, Saguru Hakuba, Kaito Kuroba, Heiji Hattori, Shiho Miyano, Yukiko Kudo, Ran Mouri, Kazuha Toyama, Aoko Nakamouri, Akako Koizumi, Hiroshi Agasa, Shizuka Hattori, Tomoyaki Araide, Shuuichi Akai, etc. Genre: Drama, Romance, General, Action, Humor (not really), Thrill, Hurt/Comfort, etc. Summary: Invitation party⦠unbelievable characters are all invited! What would they say when they will see each other for one of the first time? Romance developing⦠between who? Read and find out yourself! ~oOo~ England ā London Hakbaās residence March, Friday 19th - 07:10 AM āSaguru-kun! If you donāt hurry, youāll be missing the flightā¦!ā called Miss White from downstairs. Anne White is a housekeeper of the Hakubaās household; she waited patiently for Saguru 8 minutes ago. āYes, Iām coming,ā Yelled back Saguru Hakuba from upstairs. He was fixing up his suit. Saguru was getting ready for his flight to Japan. He had some important matter to attend there, and he will be away from England for some time. As he finished fixing his suit, Saguru looked around the room for the last time, to see if he would miss or forget anything. Okay, all done, he thought. He picked up his little suitcase and ran down the stairs. āWhat took you so long?ā remarked the house keeper impatiently. āAh, sorry, Anne⦠my brown suit was a bit dirty and got one of the buttons missing. So I had to change it with this black suit. I think itās a lot better than the brown one-ā āJust that for 10 minutes? Anyway, the car is waiting; if you donāt hurry you might miss the flight to Japan.ā āThe time I took was only 00:07:55 secondsā¦ā corrected Saguru grinning, āand besides, thereās still time before the flight. Thereās no need to rush.ā āThere might be a traffic on the way, and-ā āYou worry too much,ā said Saguru, āanyway, Iāll be missing you Anne.ā āMe too, young master⦠Iāll miss you greatly.ā She said. Tears ran down her cheeks. She had feelings for Saguru, as he always treated her kindly and politely. Even though she knew that he was only going for awhile, she couldnāt help but feel sad about it. She then embraced him. āGot to go!ā said Saguru letting go of her, and hurriedly walked toward the main door. He went through the yard and then outside the gate. āTake care!ā yelled Miss White from beside the door. She wiped her tears with the handkerchief. āYes, you too,ā yelled back Saguru, from inside the car, through the open window. The car then begins to move and slowly drove of to the distance. ~oOo~ Japan ā Tokyo Beika, District 2 ā Kudoās residence March, Sunday 21st ā 06:46 PM (A/N: Just to let you know in case you didnāt read the Fan-Fiction before this [After the Battle]). There was a battle between the organization and the FBI including Shinichi Kudo. It was a tough battle⦠cornered by Gin, Shinichi had no means of escape. Shiho Miyano (aka Ai Haibara) came for his aid and was shot in his place. Injured badly, Shiho was sent to the hospital. After surviving from the terrible incident, she was adopted by the Kudo family⦠and she now lives with them. ~oOo~ āIām home!ā greeted Shinichi as he entered the house. He had just returned from MPD (Metropolitan Police Department). He had run into a case again, and ended up solving it as usual. He found his mother at the library. She was sweeping off the dust from the books and shelves. The woman noticed her son popping in the room, āWelcome home, Shin-chan.ā Yukiko welcomed her son warmly. āWelcome Kaa-san.ā He replied politely. He looked around, but no one except his mother was there, āWhereās Shiho?ā āAh, she went to Professorās house to help him out with the house. His house had just been fixed and sheās there to help him out from the mess the workers had done. Why do you want her for?ā āAh, no.ā he said, āSchool is starting next week; I wanted to know if she would like to register or not.ā āOh yes. School would start in April the 1st. Why, itās still more than a week ahead. Thereās no need to rush, is there?ā āMmm⦠yes⦠you got the pointā¦ā āIf you want your dinner, I will prepare it after half an hour.ā Yukiko said taking the ladder to the next bookshelf. āAnd Shiho-chan said she will have dinner at Agasaās place.ā āOh, really?ā said Shinichi a bit surprised, āand whereās Tou-san?ā āHe said he had some business with his old acquaintance,ā Yukiko answered, āHe took the train to Kyoto this evening. He said he wonāt be back for awhile.ā āAh, I remembered!ā Yukiko recalled, she almost fall of the ladder she was on. āWhat is it?ā Shinichi raised a brow. āI got an invitation party. And itās really fabulous you see--! It said I can bring some acquaintance of mine⦠and-ā āPass~!ā Said Shinichi plainly, āIād rather stay at home. You can take Shiho or maybe Professor Agasa with you. But Iām not going⦠ā āOh come on~~!ā insisted Yukiko. āThereād be lots of lavish meals, Magic performance⦠some of famous actors and actresses through out Japan would b present⦠other famous people too, as Minami Takayama, Mai Kuraki, Miho Komatsuā¦! And the most amazing of all, a BALL!! Thereād be a ball like one in the Los Angles. Well, not quite as romantic as that one though⦠well Shin-chan, doesnāt it sound interesting?!ā Shinichi wasnāt interested at all; he would rather stay at home reading books or watch detective dramas. But seeing his motherās puppy-eyes he couldnāt smoothly refuse, āFINE thenā¦!ā Shinichi finally said with ignorant eyes. āYAY!!ā yelled Yukiko cheerfully. āSince you accept I think Iāll call Ran tooā¦ā āYou better not,ā said Shinichi, āshe caught fever and is staying on bed. Although her temperature is very high.ā āEh, really?ā āYes, I just visited her awhile ago; I stopped by on my way home. And she was looking so pale, her forehead looks like a burning pot. Eri-obaa-san is also there, taking care of her.ā āThatās too bad then,ā Said Yukiko sympathetically. She was planning something, but to hear Ran was ill, she would have to let it go. āDid you tell Shiho and Agasa about the party?ā āUmm⦠not yetā¦ā said his mother humming while she waved the brush at the books, āwhile you are here now Shin-chan. Can you help me with the cleaning for a bit?ā āO-okay⦠sureā¦ā muttered Shinichi. ~oOo~ Japan ā Tokyo Kurobaās residence March, Sunday 21st ā 07:01 PM DING⦠DONG⦠Aoko Nakamouri stood excitedly beside the door waiting for someone to open it. She brought something amazing to show it to Kaito and his mother! Iām sure they would be delighted, she thought. DING⦠DONG⦠No answer⦠Thereās a light coming from Kaitoās room window. But why isnāt he answering? DING⦠DONG⦠DING⦠DONG⦠She rang the bell again, but with no avail⦠DING⦠DONG⦠DING DONG⦠DING DONG DING DONG DING⦠DONG! She was ready to smash the bell as she heard someone approaching her from behind. āAra, Aoko-chan?ā said a familiar woman voice. She turned around as to see Kaitoās mother, Chikage Kuroba with some shopping bags in her hands. āKaitoās motherā¦!ā exclaimed Aoko, āsorry, I didnāt know that you werenāt at home.ā āBut Kaito should be,ā said Chikage, āwhy he isnāt answering?ā she wondered. Chikage took the key from her purse, opened the main door and entered the house. She offered Aoko to come in, as whom then apologized for the trouble. āKaito!ā called his mother from downstairs. She called him three times. But no answer⦠only some strange noises was heard. āHe is probably testing his new magic tricks,ā said Chikage crossly, āit gets on my nerves when he does thisā¦!ā āJust leave that lousy jerk alone,ā said Aoko angrily, she was annoyed of how many times she had to ring the bell while waiting outside in the dark, cold, and freezing to death. āSo what do you want with Kaito?ā asked Chikage kindly, āI can deliver him your message when I see him.ā āAh thank you,ā said Aoko thankfully, ābut I donāt really need that magic nerd to tag along with usā¦ā she said it out loud, enough for someone upstairs to hear. āEh?ā āYou see,ā began Aoko, āmy father just got this marvellous invitation party. It said we can at least bring 4 of our acquaintance⦠thereād be lot of delicious meals, MAGIC performance⦠anyway; the best thing of all⦠thereād be a BALL! Imagine? A ball! Oh my god, Iāve always have dreamed about this! My father didnāt want to go; he said he is so busy so he couldnāt come. So, Chikage-san⦠I would like you to come to the party with me. Would you like to come?ā āMe?ā said Chikage twinkling, āof course! I would love too~!ā Aoko smiled as to see Chikage delighted face, āI invited two of my friends from school, Keiko and Akako. Akako accepted but Keiko couldnāt come⦠and the party would be held the day after tomorrow, on Tuesdayā" āWhatās this all about?ā asked a cheeky voice from nowhere. Chikage and Aoko turned around as to see Kaito just appeared behind them, grinning broadly. He took an invitation card from somewhere in his body and said, āHo~ an invitation party? You came all this way here just for this?ā Aoko was surprised to see the invitation card in Kaitoās hand. Kaito and his magic again! She thought. āGive it back!ā Aoko declared. āAh, not interested~ā he hand the card back to Aoko. āWho said I was going to invite you anyway?ā said Aoko annoyed. āMy guessā¦ā he said grinning. Then Chikage thought for a second, invitation⦠Aoko⦠a ball⦠Kaito⦠of course! āMy, my⦠do you really donāt want to go, my dear Kaito?ā said Chikage to her son with a sly smile. āNo, not interestedā¦ā Kaito said briefly. āBut Iāll be going to the party⦠I wonder who will cook your dinner.ā āMmm⦠Ah⦠ehā¦?!ā āI just bought some fish, squids, crabs, crown, and some shrimps⦠I was intending to enjoy it for myself when you are not around⦠but I guess Iāll let you have them since Iāll be enjoying myself at the party⦠before I go, Iāll write you a note of how to cook the dish⦠andā" āEh- what? fishā¦! Ah, AAAAAHHHHH~~~~~~~~!!ā ~oOo~ Japan ā Osaka Hattoriās residence March, Sunday 21st ā 07:44 PM āAn invitation party?ā repeated Heiji. Heiji Hattori was eating dinner with his family when his mother, Shizuka Hattori mentioned about some party being held up on Tuesday. āYes,ā said Shizuka, āitād be held in Tokyo, Yokohama on Tuesday. Are you going?ā Going to Tokyo he might get the chance to meet up with Kudo, and he need to discuss something very important with him in private. As for the party⦠he would like to scoff in some delicious meals⦠āOkay, Iāll go,ā he finally decided, he slurped a spoonful of soup. āAh, thatās good! So I, Kazuha-chan, and youāll be goingā¦ā said his mother pleased. āEh, whatāā Heji spew out the soup from his mouth at the mentioning of Kazuha. āYes,ā said his mother, annoyed at Heijiās outburst, āyou can dance with her you knowā¦ā āWhaāwhat!ā Heji blushed at the thought. āHa-ha-ha!ā laughed Shizuka, āyou have the same expression when I mentioned her the exact same thing.ā She couldnāt help to hide her laugh, ended up snorting. āHey Baa-san, stop playing around,ā said Heiji irritated. āWell, why not?ā said his mother merrily, āyou would look lovely with Kazuha on the ball. And I canāā āYou want to tape it and add it to your stupid collections, right?ā presumed Heiji with irritable looking face. āAh, you got that right!ā exclaimed his mother cheerfully. āCanāt you for onceāā āCAN WE AT LEAST HAVE SOME QUITE DINNER!!ā shouted Hejiās father, Henzo Hattori. Heiji and Shizuka were so startled that Heiji dropped his bowl of soup. Henzo had been having a lot of headaches since his return form headquarters. And now the talk about party really digs him in. āS-scaryā¦!ā murmured Heiji to himself. ~oOo~ Japan ā Tokyo Beika, District 2 ā Kudoās residence 07:49 PM āWhat about Shiho?ā asked Shinichi, gulping a forkful of spaghetti. He was having a dinner alone with his mother that night in the luxurious dining room. āWell, you see,ā began Yukiko uneasily, āsheās a good girl, and she is very helpful and well-manneredā¦ā āAnd?ā āBut somehow⦠thereās something that makes me worryā¦ā āWhy is that?ā said Shinichi confused. He hardly sees Yukiko with a troubled face before. In fact, it was so unusual! āIām not really sure,ā she said, āWhenever I see her, she has some look in her face that makes me worry⦠itās like sheās not happyā¦ā āSheās always like that,ā said Shinichi, slurping the spaghetti, āLike wearing a mask to hide her true self.ā āAh, could only be me imaginatins,ā she said at last, feeling so foolish at the sudden, āare you going to Professorās house later?ā āI guess soā¦ā said Shinichi as he wasnāt really sure, āmaybe Iāll help him a bit with the houseā¦ā āSo, could you tell them about the party?ā āThatās your job,ā said Shinichi munching his meal. āIām afraid Shiho-chan would refuse, and itād be hard for me to convince her,ā she said, ālast time when I wanted to take her to the mall to buy her some clothes⦠it was so hard as to persuade her to go with me! ā¦Itās like she is afraid of going outā¦ā āYou got the point,ā sighed Shinichi, āI think she is afraid of the Men in Black who is still on the run.ā āMmm⦠itās not good to be stuck in the house all the time,ā said Yukiko, āso I want you to convince her to go to the party⦠do anything for her till she accepts.ā āFineā¦ā Shinichi didnāt want to argue any further. Yukiko sighed, and then smiled. ~oOo~ Agasaās house 08:16 PM āHakase, where should I put this?ā Shiho was carrying a box full of Agasaās junk-inventions. āJust put it in the basementā¦!ā the professor yelled from the next room. DING DONG⦠Someone rang the bell. āAi-kun, can you please open the door?ā āHai~! She replied lazily. Walking up to the door, Shiho gently unlocked the chain, and turned up the knob. A teenage boy stood up beside the door, he grinned at her. āAh, itās youā¦ā said Shiho plainly. āMay I come in?ā Shinichi asked politely. āWell, of course,ā she said, letting him inside the house. āWould you like something to drink?ā she offered. āN-no, thank you⦠by the way, whereās Hakase?ā āHe is in the basement.ā āWhatās with you?ā asked Shinichi suspiciously, āyou looked upset.ā āNo, Iām fine,ā she said simply, ājust tired of all the housework and stuff.ā āHee~ā The house didnāt look messy as Shinichi would have expected. It looked clean and it smells of a nice odour. āSo, what business do you have here?ā Shiho asked curiously. āErr⦠actuallyā¦ā began Shinichi uneasily. How would he tell her⦠the task wasnāt easy as he predicted. If she refused, how should he convince her⦠umm⦠think, think, THINK! āShinichi-kun!ā interrupted Agasa. āYo, Hakase!ā said Shinichi trying to run away from Shihoās glare. āMay I help you with the cleaning?ā āI appreciated your concern,ā said Agasa smiling, ābut donāt mind, because thereās nothing for you to do anyway⦠we were just about to finishā¦ā āEeeh~ā āDonāt tell me you came all this way just for that?ā said Shiho sarcastically. āHehe⦠well actuallyā¦ā stuttered Shinichi, āmy mother just got this amazing party invitation letterā¦ā he faked that, āshe said you guys could come if you want⦠it said thereād be delicious meals, magic performance, and thereād be a luxurious ball she saidā¦. She asked me to ask you if you would like to come. The party will be held on Tuesday evening.ā As Agasa heard the word ādelicious mealā, he was delighted. āReally, Shinichi-kun!?ā āYes, she said she would love you guys to attend. You are very welcome.ā āOf course, Iāll goā¦! If you donāt mindā¦!ā said Agasa eagerly. He thought of the delicious meal the party would serve. After all the hard work he did since morning⦠he deserve some good food to fill his big stomach⦠āPass~ā said a stubborn voice coming out from Shihoās mouth. Shinichi knew she would say that. Why does she always have to be so difficult? He thought. āCome on~ā he said, āBeing always stuck up in the house, itās so unlike you.ā āSay what you want,ā said Shiho rudely, āIām not interested, and Iām not going.ā āWhy is that you donāt want to go?ā āBecause I donāt want to.ā āAre you afraid being out?ā āT-thatās not itā¦ā āAre you afraid that the bad guys who are on the run will see your faceā¦? Are you afraid they might target you again? Is that itāā āWhy are you so convincing?ā she said annoyed and irritated. Her face looked like she could hit Shinichi at anytime. āI donāt want to go out because I feel itās --dangerous⦠couldnāt you understand? You shouldnāt be carefree eitherā¦! Some of them are still out there⦠they would want their revenge⦠they might even be targeting us right nowā¦! They might ambush us at anytime! Not just us⦠but everyone around us too would be in dangerā¦!ā Shihoās heart beat fast⦠she was really furious. She lost her cool. Why did she flare up like that? She was worried, but she shouldnāt have expressed it that way⦠Shinichi was nervous too, but still kept his cool. Also, why is he doing this? Itās not like he cares anyway⦠maybe he cares a little⦠but to extent as to quarrel⦠thatās really not his style. āAlrightā¦ā he said, sounding calm, āIām sorry that I talked like that all of the sudden⦠but Shiho, believe me⦠trapping yourself in fear inside the house would only make you suffer even more. Why not just act like a regular teenage girl would do? Hanging out with family and friends, going on vocation, making new friends⦠I understand you being cautious, but to extent to lock yourself up⦠thatās so unlike you. And about the syndicate, the FBI already transferred them to the U.S prison. Imagine⦠on the other side of the world. And itās the most secure prison in America. The most dangerous criminals are held there⦠criminals that are waiting for their execution, or having a life imprisonmentā¦ā he paused for a moment, āas for the guys who are on the run⦠they wouldnāt dare to come near us. We are connected to police, arenāt we? So targeting us would be the last thing they would want to do.ā It was only a theory, he wasnāt sure himself, but he only said it to comfort her. Shiho stared blankly at the floor⦠Shinichi placed his hand on her shoulder. She still didnāt look at him. She didnāt know what to say or how to face him. He took a hold of her chin and turned up her face to meet his. But her eyes were looking the other way. He went on, āAnd believe meā¦ā he said with a calm, gentle voice, āIf anything went wrong⦠Iāll definitely think for something⦠I will never let anything harm you⦠I will protect you⦠whatever it costs.ā She looked at him; their eyes met. Shinichi had a smile on his face. It was gentle, calm and it was⦠a kind one. It looked so promising. Shiho blushed. Shinichi let go of her chin. āI- I apologize too,ā she said uneasily, āI lost my temper back then⦠I-- Iām sorry⦠I didnāt mean to yell at you⦠like thatā¦ā āDonāt be,ā he said. āIām the one at fault. I shouldnāt have interfered if you would like to go or not in the first place. You should decide for yourself. Iām not going to force you. But I really think going out once in awhile will help you refresh your mood.ā Shiho didnāt say anything. Shinichi turned to Agasa who stood there silently. He had been watching all the time. His heart was pounding as he watched the two quarrels. As an old man he is, he likes being at peace. He sighed a sigh of relief when it was over. And he was thankful to Shinichi for what heād had done to Shiho. She would rest her mind at ease for now. āMy mom said to give you this,ā said Shinichi to Agasa, he handed him a bag containing something; āyou had lost it somewhere didnāt you?ā āAhhh~~~ā exclaimed Agasa more relieved then ever as he saw the thing inside, āIāve been searching for it all over the house! How did you find it?ā āTsk, tsk, tsk,ā he said grinning, waving his index finger, āitās elementary, Hakase-kun!ā With that he walked towards the door intending to leave, āOkay, Iām done here. If you need any help, just call me from next door.ā āSure, and thank you Shinichi-kun,ā āNo⦠donāt mention it,ā he said simply, he looked at Shiho who then turned away nervously. āGood night,ā he said, almost in a whisper. āWaitā!ā she said as Shinichi was about to step outside. He turned around. āI⦠I will goā¦ā she stammered, āto the⦠partyā¦ā Shinichi smiled, āIām happy to hear it,ā he said. āSee you tomorrow!ā With that, he closed the door and disappeared to his house. ~oOo~ Kudoās House 08:37 PM āHow did it go?ā asked Yukiko as her son went in the house. āYou better owe me for this,ā Shinichi said, āYeah⦠they accepted. I had some trouble with Shiho though.ā āThank you,ā she said gratefully. āN-no, donāt mention it,ā he said hastily. Shinichi was tired. It had really been such a day! He wanted to read some new novel heād bought, and then go to bed. ~oOo~ Akakoās Haunted Mansion March, Sunday 21st ā 11:12 PM It was cold dark and freezing outside. Dead leaves falling from its lifeless trees. It was so quite, aside from the blowing wind. As Akako raised herself from her seat, she stood at the mirror in front her. Saying some weird sayings, she raised her arms and shouted out loud, āMirror, mirror on the wall, whose the most beautiful of them all!?ā āYou Miss Akako, you are the most beautiful woman of allā said the mirror (lying), āall the men on the planet should be your slave...ā āWell then,ā she said smirking, āMirror, mirror on the wall, with whom shall I dance with at the ball!?ā āYou will dance with a boyā¦ā said the mirror, rather plainly. She threw a crystal ball at the mirror, āOf course I will dance with a boy, you stupid mirror, but who?!ā āThat I canāt tell you,ā it said, ābut you will meet him for the first time⦠he is smart, good looking⦠and quite the gentleman⦠youāll fall with him the first sight⦠he has spectacles⦠handsome face⦠good to be your future husband⦠I think you will look good together⦠he may cure your heart of evilnessā¦ā Akako took a chair and threw it with a full force at the mirror, breaking it into small, sharp pieces. āUseless thing,ā she hissed at the scattering pieces. END OF CHAPTER ONE! (N/A): Phew, at last! I finished it in a week! I didnāt take all my time writing this though⦠I find some free times and I add to the story little by little. Sorry if the plot wasnāt very good~ and please review if you have time, it means a lot to me! If you find any mistakes please inform me, so Iāll correct them and learn from it⦠I donāt mind criticism, but just donāt use harsh words Iāll try to post Chapter 2 in a short period of time. Donāt expect it to be too soon though. Because Iām not a free person as it seems :| PS. About the title, I didnāt really know what to put⦠so I just figured it out that āThe Best Momentsā would be good⦠but if you know any good titles for the story I would be delighted to see it. If I think itās great Iāll change to it. And⦠I wonder if I should make Shinichi die in this Fan-Ficā¦
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Ow thank you Rose! Wow, we are actually the same age! Just a couple of days older than you

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I did put it on the Facebook website (for info) ... but I can;t remember posting it on the wall ...
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I'm confused now for the time being... until everything is fixed up, by then I'll return...
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I'm confused now...
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Error by Shuu...
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174 Hohohohohoh ! Let's do it Jodie-senpai (senpai from now on~)
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Where's the proof? I saw her name at the bottom...
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180 I saw it! I don't have any proof because it's gone now... Jodie-sensei! Help me out!
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I think he just edited it ... Ah well... 183
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Akai mad an error... 184 + 5 = 189
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185 Hohohohohoh ! Detective Kaoko loves to see Akai-san and monsipogi809203-san's loosing face ...
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192 Detective Kaoko is back after a short investigation ... Kaoko: sorry Jodie-sensei, Shinichi-kun~ Some case happened and I need to investigate it ... eh, what!? The thief is dead !?? OMG!! I- I didn't mean it...! It was self defense as Jodie-sensei says! Okay... in the name of justice I'll give myself in ...