Officer Kaoko

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Ah, no, no ~ I've just heard news that Belmotto had just escaped from jail killing two guards... Anyway, let's hand Sherry over to Detective Gin... I'm so sorry Sherry... but if we don't hand you over we all would be in danger... sorry for betraying you... Detective Kaoko: Detective Gin! Here's Sherry as promised... I hope you pay me a good cash for this...! Oh, yeah, Detective Gin... Sherry has gotten a bit overweighted over these past few months...

Oww...! I actually thought the exact same thing! I knew you were trying to show off Haibara drinking infront of Ran¬ It was easy to predict that you were up to that, you know!

Haha, okay... It's time I give a review of the second chapter... Cool! A battle in the forest? I never thought of that! It's so amazing...! And WOW, so Haibara decided to change back? The parts I think it's a bit off is: When the FBI lets Ran on the van. I think that's a bit unrealistic. Come on, do you think they'd let an ordinary citizen to join them just like that? It'd be better if you made Ran notices them (but didn't confront them). And then she follows them serectly... like, make her have her own car, or a motorcycle. She follows them secretively and suspiciously... And, it'd be more realistic if you made Haibara drink the antidote in the house rather than in the car. I think she wouldn't have liked everyone to witness her changing back (to Shiho). And... huh?! What! Shinichi just killed someone? Woh! That just made him a murderer! And I noticed that you made Shinichi so sarcastic towards Ran... very cold indeed! But I loved the way you put action into the battle! It was so amazing and I can imagine them in my head! I'm not good in doing that¬ haha! I don't like Ran here... she is too annoying and noisy! Well, I guess you made her like that... Ohohohohoho! Okay, next chapter¬

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Okay, I'll start first . Indonesia: Since I've been to Indonesia when I was a kid, I had lived there for about a couple of years. I went to nursery and grade one there . School, friends, family, neighbor, etc. Arabic: I had to go there for family business,. From there I went to grade one again, and with friends and school, I've come to know the language. Native friends. School. English: I was born in England... I was small there so I don't remember anyhting. I learned English from various occasions: My parents speak to each other in English. School and friends. Too much reading books! Associating. Japanese: Well, I'm studying Japanese ... so it's still in progress... but I can speak and understand some. I learn Japanese from: Anime and manga (obviously). I have a neighbor who is actually Japanese. She wanted me to teach her Arabic and in exchange she teaches me Japanese. So yes... I had some lessons with her. Although she is not a very good teacher, I learned a lot from her! I ask her on occasions when I don't understand something, and she explains them pretty good. But she has become very busy lately, so I hadn't the chance to study with her anymore... and so, I study by myself once again . I learn by myself most of the time, though. Yes, from websites, especially that from Tim Akamatsu, Japanese About, Japanesepod101, etc. That's it for me! And I know how to write and read all of the following languages (except most of the kanji [in Japanese language])~

I would like to start off a topic... for we, DCW members to tell each other what kind of laguages we know and understand or are capable of . So what languages do all of you speak... and are capable of? Haha! And tell us how you have learned the language and how you had become influent in it ...

Woh! New section, Studio? Amazing! It looked so cool and it's so awesome ... I love it! Thank you Maurice-san ! I should really be enjoying this !

Oww, that was awesome review Tacticwolf-chan! Thank you for standing in for me ! *sob**sob*, you are so nice and adorable , I <3 you...! Yes, this story was done in a rush. I wanted to edit it before posting it. But I thought it would be better to post it now before the connection is to cut off again. I think I should have reread it, exmaine and correct the mistakes again before posting it on the web . Oh my goodness, I couldn't wait for you folks to see it, so yeah... I should had been patient next time. And about the story... What? You'd preffer Shiho to die? Why? Okay... next time I write a tragic story, it would be for Shiho to die. Well, yes Shinichi never shows it, because he only views her as a good partner and maybe one of best friends. Yeah, it's more like a one-sided love... but I like it that way! It's just like in 'Naruto', a one-sided love. Hinata loves Naruto, but Naruto never realise this, he'd only liked Sakura, and Sakura loves Sasuke... and Sasuke doesn't respond to her love for him. And I loved the part when Hinata confessed her love to Naruto when she was protecting him from Pain... that was so touching! Ran had died not long before, and Shinichi had lost all hope to live... he'd had been desperate to avenge her... the hastiness had led him like that. Shiho was really sad for his loss... and had sympathy towards him... No, you are wrong, Shiho will show it, just look forward for the next part! I'd be a big funeral in Tokyo¬ Sometimes, I just liked one-sided love... because, it's sometimes kind of touching and very sad (only some I know of). Oh, really, Tacticwolf-chan? Would you like to edit this story (grammar) for me? Oh I couldn't thank you enough ! I'll be sending you the file later by mail. You write better than me, so I would be delighted having my story edited by you! Thank you again! No, I wouldn't mind you adding things in the story... like more details, more action, and more thrill! Aww, and I thought you had gived up on that story! Thank you Tacticwolf-chan... I love you even more now! I could not wait to see it! Thank you! *Hugs*

Akai-kun ! Yeah, you got the point . BUT, I'm not very familiar with some of the members here ... it would be rude if I just spout of and 'yell' at them like that... I know you quite well now ... so hehehe ... Thank you for your comment. But it didn't help me that much though. All I know is that it's 'Pretty Good'. 'Pretty Good' my face !

Oh yeah! Thank you for correcting me Tacticwolf-chan! Yes, I mean skating~ I'll edit it right away~

EVIL! I knew you were up to something... but, what kind of flashback ?