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  1. Okay I will tell you my favorite pairings: Shinichi Kudo - Ran Mouri(Obviously ) Saguru Hakuba - Shiho Miyano (It'll be disappointing if Haibara ended up with no one , so I guess Saguru and Shiho would make a good pair ) Yusaku Kudo - Yukiko Fujimane (I don't know, but they look so amusing !) Heiji Hattori - Kazuha Toyama (umm... I like how the way they quarrels all the time ) Akako Koizumi - (I'll update this when I post chapter 2 of 'The Best Moments', because it'll give a spoiler to my story... ) Shuuichi Akai - Jodie Starling (I'd prefer Akemi if she is still alive ) Genta Kojima - Ayumi Yoshida (they look fantastic together... I feel sorry for Genta since he's not popular with girls... Ayumi should sympathy with him and give her life to feed him! Yohohohoh, yeah I know... I'm EVIL!) Mitsuhiko Tsubaraya - ->I forgot her name-< (Hehehe... sorry...) Eisuke Hondou - Keiko [from Magic Kaito] (I don't know... it just popped out in my head for no reason...) Kaoko Arai - ... (Eh... what! )
  2. Wow! You're going to writ a fan-fic? I want to read it! I saw the teaser in Maurice's profile... and boy, it looks so interesting!

  3. Haha, if I made Ran die, you wouldn't cry . And that's what I wanted the most... to make my readers cry ... their house in flood of tears... struggling in tragedy... die in pain ... Yohohohoho ! But I doubt that anyone will cry anyway... since it's only a fan-fic. And my writings aren't very touching *sob**sob*... But I'll be sure to give it my best shot! Please look forward to it !
  4. YO! Thanks for reading my fan-fic one again Not telling¬ you would have to wait and see it yourself because if I told you now, it wouldn't be a surprise anymore. Keep reading my stories on and on! I promise you would never get bored!
  5. Thank you so much Akai-san for your hard word during my absence! I wrote a fan-fic in the stories section... please read it and give me your opinon!

  6. Yes I'm on the side of Shuu=Scar... But... I really love this picture Ohohohohoh !
  7. Wow, that's sad! *sob**sob* ->wiping tears<- No, I'm not ShinxRan fan. I'm just following the series, but I'm not a fan of it... but I aslo don't complain about it. But ShinxShiho is also amazing! I like to read Shi-Shiho pairings in Fan-Fiction though~
  8. *Wink* *wink*, ^,^ But, you don't mind Tragedy, right? One of them is going to die...
  9. Why, thank you Tacticwolf-chan! You have no idea how happy I am to see you! But whats with the Professor, diet and stuff? o_0 As to let you know, I'm working on ShihoxShinichi fan-fic. It's romantic and very tragic... One of the reasons I'm making it was because of you~ It's very touching and sad~ I'm just about to finish it. It's only One-Shot!
  10. Chapter 1: The Invitation Author’s Note: Hello everyone! Hehe… some lousy thief stealing internet wires in town. We ended up without internet. Without any connections, I decided I would write a Fan-Fic continuing the storyline of ā€˜After the Battle’… and here! I wrote this the best as I could. It may not be perfect but it’s worth reading ~ My English may not be that good, so you will naturally find some mistakes, grammatical errors and some others… but at least its understanding. I changed my writing style a bit… it got more details, more action, more talking, and the chapter is quite long. Lot of characters would be involved (see ā€˜Characters’ below)… I tried to make them in character as hard as possible! If you hadn’t read my Fan-Fic ā€˜After the Battle’, I suggest you read that one first before this. So you’ll have more details about what happened. There’d be a romance about Shiho’s love life. I’ll try to make it romantic and dramatic as much as possible. Just read and find out yourself who’d she will end up with~ don’t expect it to be with Shinichi! Read it on Fan-Fiction (it's more recognized and well formated): http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6373955/1/ Disclaimer: I don’t own Detective Conan, neither it’s characters… only the plot here is mine Characters: Shinichi Kudo, Saguru Hakuba, Kaito Kuroba, Heiji Hattori, Shiho Miyano, Yukiko Kudo, Ran Mouri, Kazuha Toyama, Aoko Nakamouri, Akako Koizumi, Hiroshi Agasa, Shizuka Hattori, Tomoyaki Araide, Shuuichi Akai, etc. Genre: Drama, Romance, General, Action, Humor (not really), Thrill, Hurt/Comfort, etc. Summary: Invitation party… unbelievable characters are all invited! What would they say when they will see each other for one of the first time? Romance developing… between who? Read and find out yourself! ~oOo~ England – London Hakba’s residence March, Friday 19th - 07:10 AM ā€œSaguru-kun! If you don’t hurry, you’ll be missing the flight…!ā€ called Miss White from downstairs. Anne White is a housekeeper of the Hakuba’s household; she waited patiently for Saguru 8 minutes ago. ā€œYes, I’m coming,ā€ Yelled back Saguru Hakuba from upstairs. He was fixing up his suit. Saguru was getting ready for his flight to Japan. He had some important matter to attend there, and he will be away from England for some time. As he finished fixing his suit, Saguru looked around the room for the last time, to see if he would miss or forget anything. Okay, all done, he thought. He picked up his little suitcase and ran down the stairs. ā€œWhat took you so long?ā€ remarked the house keeper impatiently. ā€œAh, sorry, Anne… my brown suit was a bit dirty and got one of the buttons missing. So I had to change it with this black suit. I think it’s a lot better than the brown one-ā€ ā€œJust that for 10 minutes? Anyway, the car is waiting; if you don’t hurry you might miss the flight to Japan.ā€ ā€œThe time I took was only 00:07:55 secondsā€¦ā€ corrected Saguru grinning, ā€œand besides, there’s still time before the flight. There’s no need to rush.ā€ ā€œThere might be a traffic on the way, and-ā€ ā€œYou worry too much,ā€ said Saguru, ā€œanyway, I’ll be missing you Anne.ā€ ā€œMe too, young master… I’ll miss you greatly.ā€ She said. Tears ran down her cheeks. She had feelings for Saguru, as he always treated her kindly and politely. Even though she knew that he was only going for awhile, she couldn’t help but feel sad about it. She then embraced him. ā€œGot to go!ā€ said Saguru letting go of her, and hurriedly walked toward the main door. He went through the yard and then outside the gate. ā€œTake care!ā€ yelled Miss White from beside the door. She wiped her tears with the handkerchief. ā€œYes, you too,ā€ yelled back Saguru, from inside the car, through the open window. The car then begins to move and slowly drove of to the distance. ~oOo~ Japan – Tokyo Beika, District 2 – Kudo’s residence March, Sunday 21st – 06:46 PM (A/N: Just to let you know in case you didn’t read the Fan-Fiction before this [After the Battle]). There was a battle between the organization and the FBI including Shinichi Kudo. It was a tough battle… cornered by Gin, Shinichi had no means of escape. Shiho Miyano (aka Ai Haibara) came for his aid and was shot in his place. Injured badly, Shiho was sent to the hospital. After surviving from the terrible incident, she was adopted by the Kudo family… and she now lives with them. ~oOo~ ā€œI’m home!ā€ greeted Shinichi as he entered the house. He had just returned from MPD (Metropolitan Police Department). He had run into a case again, and ended up solving it as usual. He found his mother at the library. She was sweeping off the dust from the books and shelves. The woman noticed her son popping in the room, ā€œWelcome home, Shin-chan.ā€ Yukiko welcomed her son warmly. ā€œWelcome Kaa-san.ā€ He replied politely. He looked around, but no one except his mother was there, ā€œWhere’s Shiho?ā€ ā€œAh, she went to Professor’s house to help him out with the house. His house had just been fixed and she’s there to help him out from the mess the workers had done. Why do you want her for?ā€ ā€œAh, no.ā€ he said, ā€œSchool is starting next week; I wanted to know if she would like to register or not.ā€ ā€œOh yes. School would start in April the 1st. Why, it’s still more than a week ahead. There’s no need to rush, is there?ā€ ā€œMmm… yes… you got the pointā€¦ā€ ā€œIf you want your dinner, I will prepare it after half an hour.ā€ Yukiko said taking the ladder to the next bookshelf. ā€œAnd Shiho-chan said she will have dinner at Agasa’s place.ā€ ā€œOh, really?ā€ said Shinichi a bit surprised, ā€œand where’s Tou-san?ā€ ā€œHe said he had some business with his old acquaintance,ā€ Yukiko answered, ā€œHe took the train to Kyoto this evening. He said he won’t be back for awhile.ā€ ā€œAh, I remembered!ā€ Yukiko recalled, she almost fall of the ladder she was on. ā€œWhat is it?ā€ Shinichi raised a brow. ā€œI got an invitation party. And it’s really fabulous you see--! It said I can bring some acquaintance of mine… and-ā€ ā€œPass~!ā€ Said Shinichi plainly, ā€œI’d rather stay at home. You can take Shiho or maybe Professor Agasa with you. But I’m not going… ā€ ā€œOh come on~~!ā€ insisted Yukiko. ā€œThere’d be lots of lavish meals, Magic performance… some of famous actors and actresses through out Japan would b present… other famous people too, as Minami Takayama, Mai Kuraki, Miho Komatsu…! And the most amazing of all, a BALL!! There’d be a ball like one in the Los Angles. Well, not quite as romantic as that one though… well Shin-chan, doesn’t it sound interesting?!ā€ Shinichi wasn’t interested at all; he would rather stay at home reading books or watch detective dramas. But seeing his mother’s puppy-eyes he couldn’t smoothly refuse, ā€œFINE then…!ā€ Shinichi finally said with ignorant eyes. ā€œYAY!!ā€ yelled Yukiko cheerfully. ā€œSince you accept I think I’ll call Ran tooā€¦ā€ ā€œYou better not,ā€ said Shinichi, ā€œshe caught fever and is staying on bed. Although her temperature is very high.ā€ ā€œEh, really?ā€ ā€œYes, I just visited her awhile ago; I stopped by on my way home. And she was looking so pale, her forehead looks like a burning pot. Eri-obaa-san is also there, taking care of her.ā€ ā€œThat’s too bad then,ā€ Said Yukiko sympathetically. She was planning something, but to hear Ran was ill, she would have to let it go. ā€œDid you tell Shiho and Agasa about the party?ā€ ā€œUmm… not yetā€¦ā€ said his mother humming while she waved the brush at the books, ā€œwhile you are here now Shin-chan. Can you help me with the cleaning for a bit?ā€ ā€œO-okay… sureā€¦ā€ muttered Shinichi. ~oOo~ Japan – Tokyo Kuroba’s residence March, Sunday 21st – 07:01 PM DING… DONG… Aoko Nakamouri stood excitedly beside the door waiting for someone to open it. She brought something amazing to show it to Kaito and his mother! I’m sure they would be delighted, she thought. DING… DONG… No answer… There’s a light coming from Kaito’s room window. But why isn’t he answering? DING… DONG… DING… DONG… She rang the bell again, but with no avail… DING… DONG… DING DONG… DING DONG DING DONG DING… DONG! She was ready to smash the bell as she heard someone approaching her from behind. ā€œAra, Aoko-chan?ā€ said a familiar woman voice. She turned around as to see Kaito’s mother, Chikage Kuroba with some shopping bags in her hands. ā€œKaito’s mother…!ā€ exclaimed Aoko, ā€œsorry, I didn’t know that you weren’t at home.ā€ ā€œBut Kaito should be,ā€ said Chikage, ā€œwhy he isn’t answering?ā€ she wondered. Chikage took the key from her purse, opened the main door and entered the house. She offered Aoko to come in, as whom then apologized for the trouble. ā€œKaito!ā€ called his mother from downstairs. She called him three times. But no answer… only some strange noises was heard. ā€œHe is probably testing his new magic tricks,ā€ said Chikage crossly, ā€œit gets on my nerves when he does this…!ā€ ā€œJust leave that lousy jerk alone,ā€ said Aoko angrily, she was annoyed of how many times she had to ring the bell while waiting outside in the dark, cold, and freezing to death. ā€œSo what do you want with Kaito?ā€ asked Chikage kindly, ā€œI can deliver him your message when I see him.ā€ ā€œAh thank you,ā€ said Aoko thankfully, ā€œbut I don’t really need that magic nerd to tag along with usā€¦ā€ she said it out loud, enough for someone upstairs to hear. ā€œEh?ā€ ā€œYou see,ā€ began Aoko, ā€œmy father just got this marvellous invitation party. It said we can at least bring 4 of our acquaintance… there’d be lot of delicious meals, MAGIC performance… anyway; the best thing of all… there’d be a BALL! Imagine? A ball! Oh my god, I’ve always have dreamed about this! My father didn’t want to go; he said he is so busy so he couldn’t come. So, Chikage-san… I would like you to come to the party with me. Would you like to come?ā€ ā€œMe?ā€ said Chikage twinkling, ā€œof course! I would love too~!ā€ Aoko smiled as to see Chikage delighted face, ā€œI invited two of my friends from school, Keiko and Akako. Akako accepted but Keiko couldn’t come… and the party would be held the day after tomorrow, on Tuesday—" ā€œWhat’s this all about?ā€ asked a cheeky voice from nowhere. Chikage and Aoko turned around as to see Kaito just appeared behind them, grinning broadly. He took an invitation card from somewhere in his body and said, ā€œHo~ an invitation party? You came all this way here just for this?ā€ Aoko was surprised to see the invitation card in Kaito’s hand. Kaito and his magic again! She thought. ā€œGive it back!ā€ Aoko declared. ā€œAh, not interested~ā€ he hand the card back to Aoko. ā€œWho said I was going to invite you anyway?ā€ said Aoko annoyed. ā€œMy guessā€¦ā€ he said grinning. Then Chikage thought for a second, invitation… Aoko… a ball… Kaito… of course! ā€œMy, my… do you really don’t want to go, my dear Kaito?ā€ said Chikage to her son with a sly smile. ā€œNo, not interestedā€¦ā€ Kaito said briefly. ā€œBut I’ll be going to the party… I wonder who will cook your dinner.ā€ ā€œMmm… Ah… eh…?!ā€ ā€œI just bought some fish, squids, crabs, crown, and some shrimps… I was intending to enjoy it for myself when you are not around… but I guess I’ll let you have them since I’ll be enjoying myself at the party… before I go, I’ll write you a note of how to cook the dish… and—" ā€œEh- what? fish…! Ah, AAAAAHHHHH~~~~~~~~!!ā€ ~oOo~ Japan – Osaka Hattori’s residence March, Sunday 21st – 07:44 PM ā€œAn invitation party?ā€ repeated Heiji. Heiji Hattori was eating dinner with his family when his mother, Shizuka Hattori mentioned about some party being held up on Tuesday. ā€œYes,ā€ said Shizuka, ā€œit’d be held in Tokyo, Yokohama on Tuesday. Are you going?ā€ Going to Tokyo he might get the chance to meet up with Kudo, and he need to discuss something very important with him in private. As for the party… he would like to scoff in some delicious meals… ā€œOkay, I’ll go,ā€ he finally decided, he slurped a spoonful of soup. ā€œAh, that’s good! So I, Kazuha-chan, and you’ll be goingā€¦ā€ said his mother pleased. ā€œEh, whatā€”ā€œ Heji spew out the soup from his mouth at the mentioning of Kazuha. ā€œYes,ā€ said his mother, annoyed at Heiji’s outburst, ā€œyou can dance with her you knowā€¦ā€ ā€œWha—what!ā€ Heji blushed at the thought. ā€œHa-ha-ha!ā€ laughed Shizuka, ā€œyou have the same expression when I mentioned her the exact same thing.ā€ She couldn’t help to hide her laugh, ended up snorting. ā€œHey Baa-san, stop playing around,ā€ said Heiji irritated. ā€œWell, why not?ā€ said his mother merrily, ā€œyou would look lovely with Kazuha on the ball. And I canā€”ā€œ ā€œYou want to tape it and add it to your stupid collections, right?ā€ presumed Heiji with irritable looking face. ā€œAh, you got that right!ā€ exclaimed his mother cheerfully. ā€œCan’t you for onceā€”ā€œ ā€œCAN WE AT LEAST HAVE SOME QUITE DINNER!!ā€ shouted Heji’s father, Henzo Hattori. Heiji and Shizuka were so startled that Heiji dropped his bowl of soup. Henzo had been having a lot of headaches since his return form headquarters. And now the talk about party really digs him in. ā€œS-scary…!ā€ murmured Heiji to himself. ~oOo~ Japan – Tokyo Beika, District 2 – Kudo’s residence 07:49 PM ā€œWhat about Shiho?ā€ asked Shinichi, gulping a forkful of spaghetti. He was having a dinner alone with his mother that night in the luxurious dining room. ā€œWell, you see,ā€ began Yukiko uneasily, ā€œshe’s a good girl, and she is very helpful and well-manneredā€¦ā€ ā€œAnd?ā€ ā€œBut somehow… there’s something that makes me worryā€¦ā€ ā€œWhy is that?ā€ said Shinichi confused. He hardly sees Yukiko with a troubled face before. In fact, it was so unusual! ā€œI’m not really sure,ā€ she said, ā€œWhenever I see her, she has some look in her face that makes me worry… it’s like she’s not happyā€¦ā€ ā€œShe’s always like that,ā€ said Shinichi, slurping the spaghetti, ā€œLike wearing a mask to hide her true self.ā€ ā€œAh, could only be me imaginatins,ā€ she said at last, feeling so foolish at the sudden, ā€œare you going to Professor’s house later?ā€ ā€œI guess soā€¦ā€ said Shinichi as he wasn’t really sure, ā€œmaybe I’ll help him a bit with the houseā€¦ā€ ā€œSo, could you tell them about the party?ā€ ā€œThat’s your job,ā€ said Shinichi munching his meal. ā€œI’m afraid Shiho-chan would refuse, and it’d be hard for me to convince her,ā€ she said, ā€œlast time when I wanted to take her to the mall to buy her some clothes… it was so hard as to persuade her to go with me! …It’s like she is afraid of going outā€¦ā€ ā€œYou got the point,ā€ sighed Shinichi, ā€œI think she is afraid of the Men in Black who is still on the run.ā€ ā€œMmm… it’s not good to be stuck in the house all the time,ā€ said Yukiko, ā€œso I want you to convince her to go to the party… do anything for her till she accepts.ā€ ā€œFineā€¦ā€ Shinichi didn’t want to argue any further. Yukiko sighed, and then smiled. ~oOo~ Agasa’s house 08:16 PM ā€œHakase, where should I put this?ā€ Shiho was carrying a box full of Agasa’s junk-inventions. ā€œJust put it in the basement…!ā€ the professor yelled from the next room. DING DONG… Someone rang the bell. ā€œAi-kun, can you please open the door?ā€ ā€œHai~! She replied lazily. Walking up to the door, Shiho gently unlocked the chain, and turned up the knob. A teenage boy stood up beside the door, he grinned at her. ā€œAh, it’s youā€¦ā€ said Shiho plainly. ā€œMay I come in?ā€ Shinichi asked politely. ā€œWell, of course,ā€ she said, letting him inside the house. ā€œWould you like something to drink?ā€ she offered. ā€œN-no, thank you… by the way, where’s Hakase?ā€ ā€œHe is in the basement.ā€ ā€œWhat’s with you?ā€ asked Shinichi suspiciously, ā€œyou looked upset.ā€ ā€œNo, I’m fine,ā€ she said simply, ā€œjust tired of all the housework and stuff.ā€ ā€œHee~ā€ The house didn’t look messy as Shinichi would have expected. It looked clean and it smells of a nice odour. ā€œSo, what business do you have here?ā€ Shiho asked curiously. ā€œErr… actuallyā€¦ā€ began Shinichi uneasily. How would he tell her… the task wasn’t easy as he predicted. If she refused, how should he convince her… umm… think, think, THINK! ā€œShinichi-kun!ā€ interrupted Agasa. ā€œYo, Hakase!ā€ said Shinichi trying to run away from Shiho’s glare. ā€œMay I help you with the cleaning?ā€ ā€œI appreciated your concern,ā€ said Agasa smiling, ā€œbut don’t mind, because there’s nothing for you to do anyway… we were just about to finishā€¦ā€ ā€œEeeh~ā€ ā€œDon’t tell me you came all this way just for that?ā€ said Shiho sarcastically. ā€œHehe… well actuallyā€¦ā€ stuttered Shinichi, ā€œmy mother just got this amazing party invitation letterā€¦ā€ he faked that, ā€œshe said you guys could come if you want… it said there’d be delicious meals, magic performance, and there’d be a luxurious ball she said…. She asked me to ask you if you would like to come. The party will be held on Tuesday evening.ā€ As Agasa heard the word ā€˜delicious meal’, he was delighted. ā€œReally, Shinichi-kun!?ā€ ā€œYes, she said she would love you guys to attend. You are very welcome.ā€ ā€œOf course, I’ll go…! If you don’t mind…!ā€ said Agasa eagerly. He thought of the delicious meal the party would serve. After all the hard work he did since morning… he deserve some good food to fill his big stomach… ā€œPass~ā€ said a stubborn voice coming out from Shiho’s mouth. Shinichi knew she would say that. Why does she always have to be so difficult? He thought. ā€œCome on~ā€ he said, ā€œBeing always stuck up in the house, it’s so unlike you.ā€ ā€œSay what you want,ā€ said Shiho rudely, ā€œI’m not interested, and I’m not going.ā€ ā€œWhy is that you don’t want to go?ā€ ā€œBecause I don’t want to.ā€ ā€œAre you afraid being out?ā€ ā€œT-that’s not itā€¦ā€ ā€œAre you afraid that the bad guys who are on the run will see your face…? Are you afraid they might target you again? Is that itā€”ā€ ā€œWhy are you so convincing?ā€ she said annoyed and irritated. Her face looked like she could hit Shinichi at anytime. ā€œI don’t want to go out because I feel it’s --dangerous… couldn’t you understand? You shouldn’t be carefree either…! Some of them are still out there… they would want their revenge… they might even be targeting us right now…! They might ambush us at anytime! Not just us… but everyone around us too would be in danger…!ā€ Shiho’s heart beat fast… she was really furious. She lost her cool. Why did she flare up like that? She was worried, but she shouldn’t have expressed it that way… Shinichi was nervous too, but still kept his cool. Also, why is he doing this? It’s not like he cares anyway… maybe he cares a little… but to extent as to quarrel… that’s really not his style. ā€œAlrightā€¦ā€ he said, sounding calm, ā€œI’m sorry that I talked like that all of the sudden… but Shiho, believe me… trapping yourself in fear inside the house would only make you suffer even more. Why not just act like a regular teenage girl would do? Hanging out with family and friends, going on vocation, making new friends… I understand you being cautious, but to extent to lock yourself up… that’s so unlike you. And about the syndicate, the FBI already transferred them to the U.S prison. Imagine… on the other side of the world. And it’s the most secure prison in America. The most dangerous criminals are held there… criminals that are waiting for their execution, or having a life imprisonmentā€¦ā€ he paused for a moment, ā€œas for the guys who are on the run… they wouldn’t dare to come near us. We are connected to police, aren’t we? So targeting us would be the last thing they would want to do.ā€ It was only a theory, he wasn’t sure himself, but he only said it to comfort her. Shiho stared blankly at the floor… Shinichi placed his hand on her shoulder. She still didn’t look at him. She didn’t know what to say or how to face him. He took a hold of her chin and turned up her face to meet his. But her eyes were looking the other way. He went on, ā€œAnd believe meā€¦ā€ he said with a calm, gentle voice, ā€œIf anything went wrong… I’ll definitely think for something… I will never let anything harm you… I will protect you… whatever it costs.ā€ She looked at him; their eyes met. Shinichi had a smile on his face. It was gentle, calm and it was… a kind one. It looked so promising. Shiho blushed. Shinichi let go of her chin. ā€œI- I apologize too,ā€ she said uneasily, ā€œI lost my temper back then… I-- I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to yell at you… like thatā€¦ā€ ā€œDon’t be,ā€ he said. ā€œI’m the one at fault. I shouldn’t have interfered if you would like to go or not in the first place. You should decide for yourself. I’m not going to force you. But I really think going out once in awhile will help you refresh your mood.ā€ Shiho didn’t say anything. Shinichi turned to Agasa who stood there silently. He had been watching all the time. His heart was pounding as he watched the two quarrels. As an old man he is, he likes being at peace. He sighed a sigh of relief when it was over. And he was thankful to Shinichi for what he’d had done to Shiho. She would rest her mind at ease for now. ā€œMy mom said to give you this,ā€ said Shinichi to Agasa, he handed him a bag containing something; ā€œyou had lost it somewhere didn’t you?ā€ ā€œAhhh~~~ā€ exclaimed Agasa more relieved then ever as he saw the thing inside, ā€œI’ve been searching for it all over the house! How did you find it?ā€ ā€œTsk, tsk, tsk,ā€ he said grinning, waving his index finger, ā€œit’s elementary, Hakase-kun!ā€ With that he walked towards the door intending to leave, ā€œOkay, I’m done here. If you need any help, just call me from next door.ā€ ā€œSure, and thank you Shinichi-kun,ā€ ā€œNo… don’t mention it,ā€ he said simply, he looked at Shiho who then turned away nervously. ā€œGood night,ā€ he said, almost in a whisper. ā€œWait—!ā€ she said as Shinichi was about to step outside. He turned around. ā€œI… I will goā€¦ā€ she stammered, ā€œto the… partyā€¦ā€ Shinichi smiled, ā€œI’m happy to hear it,ā€ he said. ā€œSee you tomorrow!ā€ With that, he closed the door and disappeared to his house. ~oOo~ Kudo’s House 08:37 PM ā€œHow did it go?ā€ asked Yukiko as her son went in the house. ā€œYou better owe me for this,ā€ Shinichi said, ā€œYeah… they accepted. I had some trouble with Shiho though.ā€ ā€œThank you,ā€ she said gratefully. ā€œN-no, don’t mention it,ā€ he said hastily. Shinichi was tired. It had really been such a day! He wanted to read some new novel he’d bought, and then go to bed. ~oOo~ Akako’s Haunted Mansion March, Sunday 21st – 11:12 PM It was cold dark and freezing outside. Dead leaves falling from its lifeless trees. It was so quite, aside from the blowing wind. As Akako raised herself from her seat, she stood at the mirror in front her. Saying some weird sayings, she raised her arms and shouted out loud, ā€œMirror, mirror on the wall, whose the most beautiful of them all!?ā€ ā€œYou Miss Akako, you are the most beautiful woman of allā€ said the mirror (lying), ā€œall the men on the planet should be your slave...ā€ ā€œWell then,ā€ she said smirking, ā€œMirror, mirror on the wall, with whom shall I dance with at the ball!?ā€ ā€œYou will dance with a boyā€¦ā€ said the mirror, rather plainly. She threw a crystal ball at the mirror, ā€œOf course I will dance with a boy, you stupid mirror, but who?!ā€ ā€œThat I can’t tell you,ā€ it said, ā€œbut you will meet him for the first time… he is smart, good looking… and quite the gentleman… you’ll fall with him the first sight… he has spectacles… handsome face… good to be your future husband… I think you will look good together… he may cure your heart of evilnessā€¦ā€ Akako took a chair and threw it with a full force at the mirror, breaking it into small, sharp pieces. ā€œUseless thing,ā€ she hissed at the scattering pieces. END OF CHAPTER ONE! (N/A): Phew, at last! I finished it in a week! I didn’t take all my time writing this though… I find some free times and I add to the story little by little. Sorry if the plot wasn’t very good~ and please review if you have time, it means a lot to me! If you find any mistakes please inform me, so I’ll correct them and learn from it… I don’t mind criticism, but just don’t use harsh words I’ll try to post Chapter 2 in a short period of time. Don’t expect it to be too soon though. Because I’m not a free person as it seems :| PS. About the title, I didn’t really know what to put… so I just figured it out that ā€˜The Best Moments’ would be good… but if you know any good titles for the story I would be delighted to see it. If I think it’s great I’ll change to it. And… I wonder if I should make Shinichi die in this Fan-Fic…
  11. Ow thank you Rose! Wow, we are actually the same age! Just a couple of days older than you ;)

  12. I did put it on the Facebook website (for info) ... but I can;t remember posting it on the wall ...
  13. I'm confused now for the time being... until everything is fixed up, by then I'll return...
  14. 176
  15. I'm confused now...
  16. Error by Shuu...
  17. 174 Hohohohohoh ! Let's do it Jodie-senpai (senpai from now on~)
  18. Where's the proof? I saw her name at the bottom...
  19. 180 I saw it! I don't have any proof because it's gone now... Jodie-sensei! Help me out!
  20. 183
  21. I think he just edited it ... Ah well... 183
  22. Akai mad an error... 184 + 5 = 189
  23. 185 Hohohohohoh ! Detective Kaoko loves to see Akai-san and monsipogi809203-san's loosing face ...
  24. 192 Detective Kaoko is back after a short investigation ... Kaoko: sorry Jodie-sensei, Shinichi-kun~ Some case happened and I need to investigate it ... eh, what!? The thief is dead !?? OMG!! I- I didn't mean it...! It was self defense as Jodie-sensei says! Okay... in the name of justice I'll give myself in ...
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