Forever Lost 55 Report post Posted April 30, 2011 So, I guess this picture really needs a back story. I was thinking if Haibara got back to her original self, but somehow was adopted back into the BO, she grew out her hair (just because :3) and she was ordered to kill someone, and right as she's about to do so (yes, that's my horrible attempt at drawing her holding a gun..) she realizes it's Kudo-kun. (Thus, the expression on her face) What do you think? 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Senpai 1 Report post Posted April 30, 2011 That's actually pretty good but her head is a big too big compared to her body. But it's awesome ;D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted April 30, 2011 Her head is a little too big... A good proportion is six heads to the body, and the hand is about half of the size of the face. She doesn't look sad enough to kill someone though... Especially not her *cough* dear Shinichi. But, he magically escapes with his wrist gun, takes down the BO, and somehow Ai dies in the process so he can end up with Ran without me having to argue with anyone. *smiles evilly* I drew one of her with long hair too, but I never got around to posting it cuz in the drawing she's only 12 or 13. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Forever Lost 55 Report post Posted April 30, 2011 Yeah T.T I suck at proportions but by the time I figured out what exactly was wrong it was too late :/ SO I decided screw it, and I'd put it up anyway XD @Aeyra LOL! Well, it's more of an initial shock expression more than sorrow, in my opinion. A slow-response initial shock. XD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
conanshinichi 15 Report post Posted April 30, 2011 she looks nice XD yeah keep up the good work Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sayomi 17 Report post Posted April 30, 2011 I agree with everyone else. The head's a bit too big :3 But everything looks, well, beast Good job ^___^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Forever Lost 55 Report post Posted April 30, 2011 @conanshinichi Thanks~ @Sayomi IF ONLY THE HEAD WERE SMALLER ifonlyIdrewwithaplanandnotrandomlysomyproportionswouldn'tbejackedup and thank you! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted April 30, 2011 Je-chan! It's really good! *hugs* I have problems with proportions too.... ^.^; Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Forever Lost 55 Report post Posted April 30, 2011 *hugs back* Thank you~ XDDD I think a lot of people do.... I think that's probably the least proportionately jacked up picture I've drawn... XD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted May 1, 2011 Awwww... I like it... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anti-APTX4869 181 Report post Posted May 13, 2011 Forever -chan! I like it!! Hmm... I like how you drew the hair. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted May 13, 2011 Nice!! I like it!! Like everyone else said, the head's a little big. KEEP IT UP!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted May 14, 2011 I DIDN'T COMMENT? *hits self* The head is a bit large, but the rest is awesome! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Forever Lost 55 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 Tell me your thoughts. This is the second time I've ever done this... Original: (I took a picture of it.. and I didn't spend much time on it at all XD) Finished/Colored/Fixed...: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anti-APTX4869 181 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 Awesome! She looks a bit lost in thought (like a person with memory loss) but that's because of the dark shaded eyes telling us that. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Forever Lost 55 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 :3 That's actually the point, but I wanted to see how it came across to people. I wish I could dig up a drawing similar, except her hair was different.. it had the perfect expression and lost look in her eyes.. of course I actually had spent time on that one XDD .. wonder what happened to it... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anti-APTX4869 181 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 It's still really good though b;)d Great job. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Forever Lost 55 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 Thank you Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 NICE!! But the two strands of hair in the front seem to be a little long... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Forever Lost 55 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 @Chelsea That was on purpose XDD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mabel 59 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 She seems lost.............................. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 Good job Je-chan! I told you you were a good artist! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Forever Lost 55 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 @Mabel she's supposed to o.o @Misaki-chan >.< thank you Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheBlackTac 70 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 It's cute. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Forever Lost 55 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 @xXEdogawa-kunXx Thanks Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
