Miss Smiles
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This may say before, I was thinking Gin intend to kill and believe it is a new poison and use it on Shinichi. If it is, I think Gin will not kill Shinichi and think less about it, with possibility, who will listen to Shinichi when he's Conan? And B.O. won't be exactly happy to see FBI was in their way, as they running business producing immortality pill. I agree with first few posters here, Haibara have to start get a new image to fool them. If B.O. doesn't know of Conan, they underestimate the power of pill's doing and doing their business continuing the killings for sake of living. This could be the reason Vermouth tired of everyday spending with them over it while keeping secrets for many years.
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Flaws, contradictions, and plotholes in Detective Conan
Miss Smiles replied to Kaitou Kid's Killer's topic in General
I think it could be the reason may lead to climax of Bourbon arc, if Ai allow, or hear from Shinichi personally he can use himself as bait for B.O. lure to trap but it's possible she will not permit him to do that, with reason the building has destroyed may give her phobia. If bit by poisoning spider person won't think to act. I think Ai think this way, if there's Gin there's other member from other section may replace them then hunt Ai and Conan; it's impossible to defeat B.O. all and somewhat Gosho found hard to wrap up. if it's not spider it's python, or large snake. Ah, about Sera, she might use this reason to retaliate back Haibara, because she may not get it why Ai not willing to risk it and letting Shinichi accepting protection after has some member responsible and throw to jail... -
I'm most interested in Agasa's plot and relationship with Miyano's family. I can think of thousand possibility, and story is made about coincidence, it will be no surprise if Agasa know them well as he's scientist many years. This can be reason why he choose not to let Shinichi tell. If Watson did heard of Moriarity, Agasa did know something many years ago and been living in Beika beside Kudou's house. It's likely, I thought of many possibility can happen.
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from the comment of 'I'm annoyed'. -i now feeling stupid- anyway, the updated draft is in my thread. I quit my job because I have shoulder pain issues and feeling depressed.
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I'm sorry, for pestering you about the draft. I don't have evil intention. This few days I've been curbing in my emotions because I intended not to tell... please don't ask... as I want to escape from it for time being when I should have printer but other personal reason making me sad. You are young, you don't understand.
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Today I got the printer, I've printed out already and iron things out. The latest one, is the finalized like I use the software to edit. It's at DCTP.
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The more I want to make it right with computer, but it give me headache when I remember I left things out.
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the recent one is screwed up when I'm using computer to edit. It's a screw up. I have to edit with my own hand as I'm used to do that. Mostly I often refer paper to editing software, recently my friends' busy. editing on my own with MSword is challenging.
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Sure!!! post in my profile the link and I go there. And about my story, I'm having struggle on my own without editing software *sweat roll down* but relieved I managed to burrow for work and personal use. I now can edit my paper with my own hands!!! Whenever I manage to get few pages type down in one go, I will mess up whenever I edit on computer unless I have paper ...
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aha, I deserved that. It's just whenever I talk to you online you sound civil around me I feel I was one kind of person cannot be cross with, but... it always you're so kind I then can't bear to deserve this false impression which I ask and wait for your review and response of my work. and... I have something you want to know...
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dear anonymous, I get that often from friends. but if I didn't print out, I'll be stupid for not knowing reason why when I choose online first and been frustrated by thoughts bug in my mind. As I predicted I do have vocabulary problems after I look through them, from paper I'm holding. If I give you my paper, will you be less angry to have it hit on my head? And, from today onwards, I won't be stupid, will dutifully print out first before send person my draft, the one has lesser problems, with minimum of three or four mistakes. Will you forgive me? Half an hour I had my draft seriously checking and straighten out, and that's the one I originally plan to give you if my draft didn't mess up. please forgive me? And... do you have interest to read brush up one? To tell you the truth.... I'm no longer struggling writer without software but printer to speed the pace up. Yep, that's the biggest change I done this year. From Miwakosmiles
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dear anymonous, my beta friend, I finally have a printer at home and got it work!! Now I can relax and don't have to spend money printing outside. But recently I've been lazy (I have to stop doing that...) as I often ask online friends to help me in the past and now, been using laptop and computer for accessories and work. I have a lot of document printing to do... From miwakoartistic poet
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yeah. and I've to wait for August to watch.
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It based on the movie 'Sherlock Holmes', inspired by container that hold flying insects. A fly past by, and chopstick is used to hold it which is in Ran's hand. Another fly past by, Conan came out from nowhere with transparent container over the fly to the ground. 'I did it! All hail to victory of Sherlock's method!'
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I also by your side!! But I need to hear from you, because I can lend ears and listening to you.
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Thank you!
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I've updated the next chapter, it's edited draft. I no longer using software to edit, so I decided to work openly here on recent chapter.
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I've updated the chapter, but it's draft chapter. Don't worry, I'm not pursuing the question I ask in pm. I understand.
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(remove for revision. See the next update)
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Thank you!! I've send next to beta, I have to wait for it.
It's a good movie.