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You'll probably hit the jewel in his pocket like everyone happens to do. Maybe I should tranquilize KID. That'd help Saguru catch him, right?

No... I just haven't had time to italicize Suzaku's thoughts (iTouch written) yet. Those thoughts are him mourning Lelouch. I don't think I could ever do NunnallyxSuzaku. Friendship fic, yes, but not pairing. That's simply not their relationship. It's not SuzakuxLelouch either. It's probably going to be no pairing since Euphy happens to be dead.

Then I suppose it's ridiculously sad that I've never managed to completely solve one case on my own.... But I don't watch the anime. I read the manga. I have preference for 'in-the-middle' cases, because I own all the DC volumes up to 67. Right now, the manga needs to hurry it up and figure out which characters are actually important, but I still like it. Not as much as my dear ShinRan fluff or my beloved BO action, but it's still neat. XD

I'd probably be dragged to a KID heist, try and leave, and accidentally get into Kaito's escape route. Then I'd be like "It's Kid!", and try to hold him long enough for Saguru to arrest him. :3 Because I like Sagu-chan better!

IKR??? Oh, would anyone mind giving me feedback on this first lil' chappie of a CG fic? It's Suzaku-centric, and takes place a year after Lelouch's death. I'm still fine-tuning it, but some critique from others would be appreciated. I think I'm going to name the fic: 'Fallen Angel' (BTW, the title isn't about Suzaku. )

It looks so exciting! Do you have an estimate for the English release date? (I'd give you a rep, but I'm on a mobile device! D: Sorry! I'll give you three later if I remember. :3)

I think my typing speed is up to 100 WPM on a computer, but I'm reasonable with my iTouch as well. :3 And Chelsea, if I tried, they'd all come out sounding the same. *sigh* And I don't like repetition..

*meh* It ain't my fault I don't have time to go on DCW and check status updates! D: I use my iTouch! No statuses! And at the time of your status, I was at Math Club doing an AMC 12! (and failing along with everyone else... Why must it be so difficult...?) Enough with my whining. I won't do the status thing. I'm bad at listing stuff like that. XD I had a hard enough time listing them when my best friend moved away...

I watched the subs the whole way through! Cheering on Suzaku and yelling at Lelouch to back off and give Suzaku some screentime. Him and Euphy. Why did the greatest couple end in R1, WHY?!

Why the dubs? They sound so... cheesy... (I've watched Euphy's death in dubs. I wanted to hit myself. Why, why, why ruin such a touching moment! Stupid dubs!) The only scream I really like is when the cat walks off with his helmet. :3 That episode was priceless.

Definitely! They're both so adorable, and give off that irresistible medieval true love aura. The eleven, the Britannian princess, a knight and a princess. I couldn't hate them if I tried! So I love them! (but Suzaku and Euphy should have at least kissed... They're a beautiful unblocked flower.)

Try and put in some more detail, and fix up some of those typos. Too much detail doesn't exist in my dictionary! (fifty word long sentences describing someone's eyes? I write them all the time.) Try slowing it down as well, and inserting a more (whats the word) clear plot. It's kind of blurry to me. If you go too fast, you'll miss some key parts of your story. Personally, I feel you should have spent a longer time on the 'Prologue' (the princess thing). Why would the villagers revolt because the royal family had children? (needs more explanation) Why does this Rebel leader hate the family? The backstory you provide is the foundation you lay out- while it's a good idea to hide some of it and save it for later, if you don't lay down enough, your story can't support itself. Like Nobody said, I try to practice what I preach, so don't take this as me insulting your writing. While I'm not a big fan of this story, I do like helping other people improve by analyzing common mistakes I see in my own stories and giving others advice. So my consensus is: Okay plot, just needs more backstory. And more detail is a must. For detail, think about it like this. Can you see the story in your head? Describe it to me. Try your hardest to paint the image in your head to mine. That's my advice to improving. Detail.

The point exactly. Do you like it though? (or at least the writing style)

I have a basic outline! I really wanna start! But it's midnight and I'm so freaking tired!

It's my plunny! XD JK, JK... I don't feel like writing that. Too hard to start.

I put down Shinichi. So dramatic and showy for his mysteries. And his words. XD

Roll didn't make me cry, though it was sweet that Lelouch buried him, leaving the locket with him. I'm going to try and write a Code Geass fic that takes place a year after the series ended. Wish me luck!

Suzaku gets along well with Nunnally and Kallen (who I bet guessed Suzaku's identity) and could be friends with them. After ten years, who's going to remember Kururugi Suzaku, Knight of Zero? He could try to start over. Random comment/question: What parts of Code Geass made you cry and why? My answers: Euphy's death, and Lelouch's. Euphy dying was bad enough, but Suzaku holding her hand, hiding the truth for her, and- and- his offer for her to go to Ashford Academy with him. He's so brave, offering a future he'll never have, torturing himself, to make the last lingering moments of the girl he loved happy ones. And Euphy was Euphy! Kind, sweet, naive, and ready to help the world. As for Lelouch... Nunnally's crying seriously just had me break down into tears. "Onii-sama, I would have been happy just living with you! I can't live without you! Onii-sama, Onii-sama!!" with the chorus of 'Zero, Zero, Zero!' in the background, ignoring her agonizing wails of horror and sorrow. Shirley's death made me cry too, (I liked Shirley and ShirleyxLelouch dammit!) and that's when I started opening up to Lelouch, because he could finally understand the pain of his best friend. And it was just a few episodes after Cupids' Day! (I wish Suzaku participated! If I were at Ashford... Suzaku-kun!!!!!!!! *chases*) Code Geass had a lot of moving moments for such a short anime... And is anyone else pissed that Code Geass R3 will be almost completely unrelated to R1 and R2?

So when's the release date? I love the Magic Kaito episodes. They're always so funny! XD

Kaito and Shinichi are both aware they like someone. They're just not good in getting the point across. Heiji doesn't even think anything of sleeping with Kazuha. (Spider Mansion. And sleeping as in sleeping. But that still blurred out Conan's entire train of thought.) Hes just like "We'll just have to do it to stay warm."

I'll finish it... This weekend. Because I've skived off enough sleep with Code Geass. (staying up past midnight for past week) It sounds good, I just wish the first half had more suspense.

I never said it had to have explosions... They just all happen to have them once you think about it. (I don't think 7 did though...) The first four movies feel like those fast-paced arcs filled with suspense, the ones that make you tear your hair out because you have to wait for the next chapter. They have mystery, suspense, and that crucial factor of excitement. (which is what the mystery of 15 happens to lack.) The plot of a movie has to make itself special, that's all. Otherwise, it's an anime special. It has to go out into the theaters, attract both fans and people who've never watched it before, and succeed in entertaining them. And what I mean by action probably isn't exactly the conventional definition. (because I hate watching extreme violence and all that stuff) I mean a mix of suspense and excitement that keeps the audience begging for more on the edge of their toes. Argh... It's so hard to describe. I desire things that make me feel. Whether it feels that I'm holding my breath awaiting an answer, or crying, I need to have that sort of feeling. And yes, that does involve fangirling. And/or making fun of every character on the screen with my lil' bro.

I don't hate CC, I just don't like her. I don't like the emperor either. I hated Lelouch in R1, but I liked him in R2. That is one thing that makes it great. Go find happiness, Suzaku!

Heh, heh, nice. I draw on my math notebook all the time too! Mainly practices for faces, hands, or eyes though. Though currently, my papers are covered with sketches of Suzaku Kururugi (Code Geass) XD. I'm fourteen, ninth grade. I won't take AP Physics- I'm taking just about every AP class social studies and math have to offer though.