If there is a sequel, it ends SHINRAN. Somehow, even though I read it with the least bias I could, it has quite a bit of gaping holes. Your tenses shift, it could be more detailed, and even if he's 17, he has the body of a seven-year old. Weaker, gets tired easily and more. *sigh* I'm currently trying to write parts of a HeiShin fic that are leaning on ShinAi.... And then I'll have to write ShinShi... TT-TT Self-induced torture... JK, I don't mind writing it if it ends up not ConAi/ShinShi. Hope this helps... Good luck in your writing.