Aeyra

My profile page link is http://www.fanfiction.net/~aeyra You'll find all my stories from there. MSK is probably the one you're looking for though. 20.) Confess to the guy I like and have it be successful....

Yeah, if you rob a bank. (JK,JK...) Is it possible for me to fail school? 0.0

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Someone who hates Eisuke.

A little bit. Someone who sometimes spams comment pages.

I was using it in an email. ^0^

2. Pomegranates can be sour... 1.) I won a spelling bee in 7th grade 2.) I'm 13 3.) Roseate Spoonbills are my fav bird and I've seen one for real.

Nonsense, he's your fav character. I can't stand studying these birds anymore!

Then she'd turn sound back on.

which is weird

Gin is harmless.

Awesomeness. Kaitou Kid... Movie 15

Genta. Genta, aren't you eating too much...

Why wouldn't Pyre lie?

Yukiko Yuusaku or Kogoro?

faun

Shipper I guess. Natural or artificial flavoring?

Die... What would you do without emoticons?

Any chance of an opinion here, ConanShinichi? I wanna know if you like it. (just don't flame the couple)

What does that have to do with it.

Heiji's POV "How's he holdin' up, Doc?" I ask intothe speaker, anxiously waiting for his reply even though it is only a matter ofseconds before he answers. I only heard about Kudo's situation about a few daysago. Nobody felt it important to tell me my best friend was dumped by hisgirlfriend and was suffering from depression. Nope. Not important at all. "Not too well. I've been having Ailook after him, but he's empty, and-" He lowers his voice as if he'safraid somebody will overhear. "He tried to commit suicide thismorning." "WHA-?" I blurt out, shocked.Kudo, the guy who was all for living, Kudo, the teenager who would even savemurderers from death, tried to kill himself? I knew his situation with neechanwas bad, but for him to be this bad... "Ai-chan found him with a smallbottle of pain killers in his hand this morning. And the thing was almost halfempty." Half-empty. One small bottle of drugs capable of death. How couldhe do such a thing? "What's his condition?" If heseriously downed that many pills, then the guy is probably is seriously sick atbest. My heart beats like a hummingbird's wings as I almost make out the unsurebreaths of the Professor. Kudo better not be dying, I think. If he dies I'll neverforgive him... Um... Okay, looks like it's my story....

Yeah, age is kind of irrelevant when it comes to story writing. Unless you're three or something, some people don't care whether or not they flame you. It's.... interesting to say the least but I'd like to see more detail. I have a hard time visualizing anything. What I usually say is 'Pretend you're watching the anime. Describe the scenery, people, feelings, and make sure others can see it with you.' It seems rushed, and somehow it sounds as if you slapped on the last few lines. I'm not trying to flame you or anything, just giving you what I like to see. I hope the tips helped...