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The newest chapter of Better Dayz is out: http://www.detectiveconanworld.com/forum/topic/4276-better-dayz-chapter-vi-hating-the-haters/ Warning: Gun violence and deaths
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Better Dayz Chapter VI: Truce Breaker and Gun Runner Rico Rico closed Allen’s eyes on what was left of his face, "Rest in peace, brother…" Rico said quietly and he then takes his Glock 23 and lays it on Allen’s chest, “I’m sorry…” Rico takes his brother’s journal puts it in his pocket. “Rico, sorry for the loss…” Hidemi said sadly. ‘Rico’s brother’ awakens and he asked him, “Rico, what the fuck is happen?” Rico replied in dark mood after he helps ‘his brother’ up “Shit… Allen got gunned with Eisuke’s friend; though he wasn’t targeted by these fuckers.” ‘His brother’ disbelieves Rico’s information and he asks him, “Really? But, can I look his corpse?” Rico nodded, “Sure” he then checks Aleen’s corpse and he told Rico, “He wearing a tilted orange hat on his head. They think he’s VALC” Hidemi asked Rico, “What happen to you and Allen?” Rico explains his flashback, “I and Allen starting sell gun in age of twenty…” Orlando, Florida 23 December 2005 Allen is holding an USP, he looking outside to check if no police nearby and he asked Rico “Yo, Rico. I got some news about the guns” Rico replied, “Alright, Allen. What’s the deal?” Allen explained in serious face, “My friend told me if he got an UMP.45 from a Venezuelan armorer with his friend from Bosnia… he’s a good man. Look after him near West Orange School. Rico, man, we should talk some time – I’m a good listener” He shaking hands with his brother, Allen brandishing his Glock 23 and hands it to his brother, “Whatever, man… But thanks” Rico walked out from his house to his Delta 88 and leaving his house. Allen took his phone and talking to someone, “Roman, where the fuck are… CJ1? Oh, no, not you... Whassup, man?” Rico driving his Delta 88, he noticed a tuned ‘06 Mustang GT was heading to his house, “I bet this guy will be screwed…” He turns on the radio and a song is played. Rico cursed over the radio, “Oh, fuck! I hate Trancecore. How some rap maybe?” He changed radio channel and he found his favorite radio, SF-UR2 “That’s better…” He is heading to Bay Lake for Allen’s friend. As he arrived in Bay Lake, Rico parked his car near the school and two men entering his car. One of the men asks Rico, “Ya Rico? The man who's been talking about all this time? Rico, willing help Allen take over the world and such a manner?” Rico replied in frown and he asks the man back, “If I say yes, would ya tell me you are the Venezuelan arms dealer and your men from Bosnia?” The man replied, he introducing his friend, “Yes, for sure. This is my men, Peter Lokar. My name’s Juan Ramirez, amigo” Rico shaking hand with Lokar and he introduces himself, “Rico Antilean, just a worker.” Juan asked Rico, “Rico, your brother knowing me since we are starting little business. As starter of our friendship, I will give you a gift. Take it” he brandishes a Micro-Uzi and gave it to Rico and he take a look of it, “Shit, this gun shall be issued to every gangsters” Rico holster his Micro Uzi and Lokar asked Rico, “Alright. We’re going to Epcot where I need you to watch Juan from these Feds for me, see? I will ask you for another favor too” Rico asked, they are passing Daniels Rd, “Epcot? What we gonna do? Watching Candlelight Processional?” Juan told him, he brandishes a Makarov PM, “I setting up an arms deal with Five Familes, especially the Ancelottis. But these pricks really want the ‘K. Can you use that gun? If you hear anything bad going down, you come and help me” Rico replied, “Are you worried about this? I know how to use a gun if you want me to keep watch on things” Juan thanked him, “Realness, man. You are really Allen’s brother. You two going to rule this city, isn’t it?” Rico sighed. They are passing New Independence Parkway, “I didn’t know about that. It seems Allen has enough problems running his own life, let alone with whole city” Juan told him, “That is for me man. Well Rico, can you do me a favor? You see, my men, Lokar. He gets in a fight with M.O.B3 and I got to go down to make peace. They got too fierce and I isn’t sure this is gonna be an easy thing. Can you keep an eye on the meet with that's piece?” "Sure, I hear you" Rico replied. They are arrived in Epcot Parking area and Lokar spoke up, he readied his AKS-74u w/ Dual-Mag and without stock “Alright, you can wait here on your car, or you follow me to the place. Ya know, if thing gone rough or deal’s gone to sour, you just come and help” Rico snickered as they get out from the car, hiding their weapon at their clothes, “Hope the mass choir won’t making my ears bleeding…” Lokar then walking to Rico’s car and he took a duffel bag. “So, where’s the Ancelottis?” Rico asked in curious, “They are sitting near the place where Candlelight Processional were held. You know, usual sales such as AKs and Uzis and some ‘rare’ stuff” Rico rolled his eyes, “AKs? You mean Avtomat Kalashnikov?” Lokar catch up with Juan and Rico, he’s asked him, “Hey, did you know the Five Families?” The three walk around Epcot Park and Rico answered Lokar’s question, “Not a lot, except Lupisella Family” Juan’s phone rings and he pick it up, “I wonder…” He checks the message on his cellphone, and he told Lokar and Rico, “They are waiting at America Gardens Theatre, but I got some info if the VALC was here with the M.O.B trying to crash the choir and the deal. And also, Real Badman the boss of Hillside Posse was here with LJ4 and his hitman, Niko. They are trying to cap Ancelotti. And my feeling says if the FBI also here to capture Giovanni, the Don of Ancelottis and our customer” Lokar snickered, “FBI? I know, we fought against them with our mobster, we’re blaming them for our corpse deal was a sting” Rico asked Lokar, the three are heading to America Gardens Theatre “So?” before Rico can finish his talk, Juan found Giovanni at America Gardens Theatre, along with his men minus his daughter. They are watching the orchestra and the mass choirs. One of Ancelotti mobsters informed Giovanni and he walking to Juan to greeted him, “Juan, my friend amigo. How are you today?” Juan replied with a glee on his face, “Yeah, I’m fine. We got today’s specials. AIMS5, Val and Walther MPL” One of Ancelottis mobster asked Juan, “Can you show the ‘stuff’ right now?” “We can’t because too many people crowded, the Fed and Hillside is trying to capture you, and the VALC gangster also with M.O.B trying to crash the Candlelight to sack our hardware. But Lokar will explain the guns” Lokar explains the guns, “Alright, Walther MPL, designed in 1963 at Western Germany. The gun chambered in 9x19 mm. Inexpensive Sub-Machinegun in Cold War era, but nowadays this gun was in scarce amount. Can fit many attachments” Lokar pauses and he resume his speech, “Val, a special assault rifle. Chambered in 9x39 mm and have an integral suppressor. Can mount a scope and you can cap one of your enemy here without making the civilian panic before you fire the ‘sniper’” Lokar continued, “AIMS, Romanian version of the AK-47. Identifiable with unique vertical foregrip integrated into the hand guard. Feeding system of this gun is 30, 40-round detachable mag or 75-round drum mag. Can fit many attachments and…” Rico interfered with a concern in his face, “I don’t wanna disturb. But…” he points it to Jacob with his men and Niko and Juan cursed, he looked at Niko in hate, “Shit…” Rico looked around, he asked Giovanni, “Um, should we draw our gun and cap them both, before they cap us?” One of Ancelotti mobsters asked him “Why?” Rico points his hand at a woman with red hair. She wears FBI shirt under a purple hoody. Juan whispered Giovanni, “So, how’s the deal? And who’s that woman?” He told him, “We exchange it with ten kilo of coke. The stuff is in my car, at Epcot Parking area. As the woman, she was Kinzie Natake” Lokar scowled as more people at American Garden Theatre looking at the gang in suspicion “FBI… And Natake Family is trying to cap me and my cousin!” Rico asked menacingly “Are you fucking sure if the Fed is trying to cap you?!” Lokar replied, “Alright, whatever this happens, grab a shield and blast these fools to reach the parking area and fetch our car. Beware of ambush which launched by VALC and M.O.B. when we fleeing to Liberty City and stay together or we’re fucked” Rico draws his Micro-Uzi as Ancelotti Mobsters had their weapons drawn. More FBI agent covered the area and they are armed with M4A1. One of Hillside soldier asked Niko, “Niko, are you sure of we gotta do three-way gun fight? The Fed were trying to arrest us and the Ancelottis with the arms dealers drawn their weapons and-” Niko shut his mouth, he readying his MP10, “Tell Roman if we will took several stuff from here and sells it to Dwayne” Juan draws an Uzi, thinking he was outgunned and he aiming it at Erru’s mother, “What the fuck are you want this time?” Kinzie persuade Juan, “I do not want something from you. But you could drop your gun with your comrades and surrender peaceably, I’ll really appreciate it” She aims her M4A1 w/ EoTech sight to Jacob, “As for you, Hillside. You should threw your weapons away at once and hands on your head” RB6 draws a MP7 and he rally his soldier “Do not pray for easy lives, my friends. Pray to be soldier” Rico then opens the duffel bag which brought from Lokar and he took an AIMS w/ Drum-mag and ACOG scope. Lokar intimidated Jacob, he’s trying to reaching his AKS-74u on his jacket, “Jacob, Jacob, Jacob... The Ruskies will teach ya and ting.” He draws his AKS-74u and Jacob shouted, “Niko, get these bloodclots!” Niko fired his MP10 at Lokar but he avoids it. The gunfire panics everyone on the park but Rico firing his AIM, warning them, “Stay in your fucking seat or you’ll be shot!” Juan fired his Uzi at Hillside Posse as Giovanni took the MPL from Lokar’s bag and open fire at FBI. Rico fired his AIM at the FBI and the agent was hit in chest and hip. He then turned to Jacob and firing his AIM, putting a hollow tip at a Hillside Posse soldier in head, his blood spilled as his lifeless body stare at the sky. Kinzie aiming her M4A1 at the Ancelotti, “Don’t ever trying to use civilians as human shield” Kinzie also hit the Ancelottis mobster who had arrived. The one with a MP5K was hit in hip and the one with a G3A3 was hit in kneecaps and collarbone. Rico brandishes his Micro Uzi and he sprays his gun at Hillside Posse and taking a guy as shield. He caps a Hillside gangster with a TMP, piercing his intestines and the bullet exit his back. He turned back and he firing at incoming FBI agents which they taking cover, he hit one of the agents with a Beneli M4 in kneecaps. He taunts Kinzie, his Micro Uzi at the guy’s head “I already did, motherfucker!” He executed the guy with a direct shot to his head from his Micro Uzi. More Ancelotti Mobster was swarmed to help in the gunfight. One of them, firing a PP91 single-handedly at the FBI but Kinzie finished him with her M4A1. A FBI is running with his MP5K and firing it at Lokar but he returns fire with his AKS-74u, piercing him in leg. Jacob spraying his Micro Uzi at Ancelotti, he pinned one of Giovanni’s men with a SPAS-12 in eye. Niko hears a sniper shot and he shouted to Badman, “There’s a FBI sniper ahead” In retaliation, Jacob took a PSG-1 from his car and starts taking out the snipers. Kinzie glanced to see Lokar’s brother, Kley coming out from his car, he wielding his AKS-74 and he screamed, “Do not try to stop Wallachia Heights, motherfucker!” She aimed her gun at Kley and she squeezed the trigger. The rounds only hit Kley in left knee. Juan then reloads his Uzi and starts spraying over Hillside Posse soldier. Kley cooks a RGD-5 grenade before he threw it towards Hillside Posse. Niko then threw back the grenade and the grenade exploded in the lake. Badman fired his MP7, he cutting down an Ancelotti mobster with a Spectre, piercing his left lung and penetrate his heart. “You like that, motherfucker?” Kley shouted in anger. He aiming his AKS-74 at the FBI and he squeezed the trigger and several round hit a FBI agent with a MP5K PDW in the head. A FBI agent fired her MP7A1 at Niko, grazing him at hip, but he wears concealed vest and he also fired his MP10 at the FBI agent who wounds him. Several Hillside Posse gangsters were arrived to aiding Jacob and Niko. They had their weapons drawn and opened fire at Ancelottis and FBI. Kinzie took an AK-74 from a fallen enemy and she cut down two Ancelottis who protecting Giovanni. Rico fired his AIM at Niko and he returned fire. Kley looked at Rico, “The Fed is started the shootout. We must cap them to escape, and bring the shipment” Rico fired and he hit a FBI in abdomen. Kley wailed to Lokar “Brother! We’re ready to tere-” his words were cutoff as a CIA agent with his daughter firing their weapons at them, “CIA… They are trying to snuff us-” Kley glanced to see if Rico was slightly wounded by Kinzie “Hang on tight! Help on it’s way!” his words were cut as he was hit in chest by Kinzie. Just then, RB fired his MP7 and Kley was hit in the back… Then as he feel, in the side. Lokar shouted, “You punks! I will kill all of you!” Lokar fired his AKS-74u and several rounds hit the FBI near Kinzie. The other FBI agent fired at Lokar who ran from cover. Just then, near Five and Drum Tavern, a Cadillac Eldorado pulled up off. Four Wallachia got out. Two with Uzi and the one with a PKM, and one with an RK-74. They opened fire and ten FBI agent dropped. Two with Uzi turned and fired at Hillside near Enoteca one of them shouted, “Don’t try to crippling Wallachia Heights or you’re fucked!” Jacob snickered, he already firing his Micro-Uzi, “You bumbaclot. Ya think ya can shot and ting?” Jacob aimed his Micro Uzi at one of Wallachia Heights soldier and he empties it, hit one of the soldier with an Uzi, ripping his intestines and piercing his heart. An Ancelotti mobster with a cap, firing a P90 and killed three FBI agents, most of them was hit in head. Kinzie aiming her AK-74 and she press the trigger. Kley recognized the CIA agent with his daughter, he whispered to Rico, holding his wounds, “Hondou was here. If we can take them as hostage, we can move to the car without getting fucked.” He didn’t like Kley’s idea, “I worried you because you are wounded by these fuckers. We trapped here fought against FBI and Hillside.” One of the Wallachia Heights with an RK-74, calling someone and he running to Lokar’s position and he told him, “Sir, the car’s here” Lokar replies, he moving a wounded Kley with Rico, “Let’s hope us the-” Kinzie reloads her AK-74 and Juan readied his Uzi. Juan had started it but Kinzie wins the fight. Both Kinzie with a FBI with M16A4 fired on the already wounded Kley. Despite Lokar and Rico's attempt to carry him to safety, he was hit in a barrage of bullets and he fell to the ground face down, blood dripping from his mouth. “Sorry ass motherfucker! You are dead!” Lokar screamed, he then heading to the theater and took a girl and he drew his Desert Eagle Mark VII. He unloads the gun at the FBI, hit one of Kinzie’s squad with an MP5A3. Rico then took Kley’s AKS-74 and firing at both Hillside and FBI. Kinzie warned, “Let her go-” her words were cut off as Lokar execute the girl in the head. He shoved the dead girl and he resuming firing his AKS-74u at Hillside, he almost hit Badman, only if he wasn’t taking cover. Rico concerned, “Man, this is outta control…” Lokar simply replied, “I know” Rico scowled, he firing Kley’s AKS-74, “You always know, cold bastard” Lokar interfered, “I’m not cold!” Rico answer it with a frown in his face, “You're cold... all you care about is revenge and getting your own way. Now, you are killing innumerable of FBI agents and you event taking people’s life with using them as human shield and execute them” Lokar snickered, “How about you? You also cap several Hillside soldier because they are crash the Candlelight and this deal! I witness my friend was succumbed to death by these fuckers. And I can’t let it go!” “So, this is it?” before he can finish his speech, someone grabbed him and flipping him judo style. He drawing his Micro Uzi and is about to fire but the guy kicks the gun away from him and he recognized the girl, he mistaken her as a guy, “Erru! What the fuck are you-” before Rico can finish his word, Erru frowned, “You may not care about what you've done, but I sure as hell do! Stand down and leave these people unharmed, or I won't hesitate to send five rounds to every your soldier” Her words were cut as Lokar grabbed Erru, pulls her closer and flipped her to the ground with a hard jerk and tripped her. He pulled Erru to her feet and used her as a shield. Rico took his Micro Uzi back and he aiming his gun menacingly at Kinzie, saying at Lokar, “Are you sure if they let us go, you will release Kinzie’s daughter?” Lokar nodded with saddened face, “I will…” He sticks his Mark VII at Erru’s head, warn Kinzie, “Do something with my comrades, I blow her head!” Jacob aiming his Micro Uzi at Lokar but Niko told him, “Better let them go, and we must escape” he nodded, “Respect, Niko…” Kinzie shouted, “Let my daughter go! She didn’t do anything wrong to you!” Rico grinned, he aiming his Micro-Uzi sideways at Michael, Erru’s father, which he is also a FBI agent “She’s your family. I know you care about her. Back off or this girl gets it” Kinzie with the FBI had their weapon aimed at Lokar but none had fired. Juan asked Lokar, “Kley still alive. Are we must bring him to hospital?” he told him quietly, “He still miraculously alive? Alright take him to the car. Let me control this shit…” Juan nods and he with his men taking a badly wounded Kley into Lokar’s car and he with his henchmen moving slowly into the car, along with Ancelotti mobsters. Lokar still aiming his Mark VII at Kinzie, using her daughter as shield, warn her, “Alright, I let your daughter alive. But if you still trying to kill any of my comrades? I won’t give a second change to you.” Lokar’s men entering the car and Rico told him, “Alright, release her…” Lokar got to his car after he shoved Erru towards her parent, letting go of her. Kinzie caught her daughter and Lokar with Ancelotti entering the car. Rico warned Jacob, “If you dumbfuck are trying to cripple our deal, I will cap your ass!” With that, Lokar floored it out of Epcot Park. Kinzie aiming her M4A1 at the Hillside, “Alright, you can’t escape. Drop your weapons peaceably, I’ll appreciate it” The Hillside are throwing their weapons and surrender to the FBI, minus Niko, Jacob and Roman as they are already escape after Rico gave them a warning. Lokar scowled, Rico is driving the car, taking Kley to Rico’s house, “I should to execute her daughter if this was happen” Juan asked, “Why?” Lokar replied darkly, “They are capturing my cousin!” Giovanni told him, “We will have revenge comrades… if the VALC and M.O.B wasn’t stole the coke in our car…” before he can finish his speech, Kley wasn’t breathing anymore. Horrified with this, Lokar tried CPR. One, twice, nothing. He realized his brother was died because massive blood loss. Lokar mourned, “He’s dead… If thing gone like this, we will vow them… Believe me…” End of Rico’s Flashback "He lost his brother. He vowed to kill everyone to avenge his brother’s death” Rico explained. Hidemi asked, “So, that’s why he is killing police and his rival enemies?” he told her, “Yes…” A/N: 1: Carl Johnson, main character of GTA: San Andreas 2: San Fierro Underground Radio 3: The real name of M.O.B is unknown. They are hanging around at Firefly Projects, Broker and Acter, Alderney 4: Jacob Hughes. A Jamaican and a Hillside Posse high member. Their front was Homebrew Café, Broker 5: Also known as PM. md. 63/65 6: Reference to Real Badman
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What Was the Last Song You Listened To?
Maltavite replied to CarpetCrawler's topic in Music, Movies & TV
Bring Da Ruckus by Wu-Tang Clan -
Trancecore and Post Hardcore
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Fact: I was hardcore gamer...
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Arround 9pm... (In weekends and holidays)
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Eisuke... Because his bad-luck
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Heiji...
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Vol 58 is the best... (Clash of Red and Black...)
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My weird moment: I forgot to brought back my flashdisk from my hometown
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Listening Eazy-E song
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Naruto...
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Diplomatic Siege
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Can wait for another podcast!
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Economic Left/Right: -5.00 Social Libertarian/Authoritarian: 5.36 Left Wing Radical?
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Bleach
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Dear not so friendly Anon... I hate to do this! Foley, Help me! signed, Pvt. Ramirez
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One of the goriest death on DC is a Night Baron were 'free falling' from the hotel and he is STABBED AT THE HORSE'S SPEAR. XD