AiSuigetsu's Art Thread

[AiSuigetsu]

sry to shinran fans out there for the horrible shinichi and ran

plz, plz, plz give advices

also, some parts of the drawing are from my own imagination so they may be ugly

original:

drawing:

[Vi Graythorn]

its really good but vermouth's eye r a bit small, and her head is a little more tilted

+1 rep

[Rukia Kurosaki]

I like how you did her hair and clothes.

[AiSuigetsu]

its really good but vermouth's eye r a bit small, and her head is a little more tilted

+1 rep

omg thank u!

ur like the only person who gives me advices...

[hopes]

Wow!! Nice. That's a cool picture.

Vermouth's eyes do seem a little small, and Ran's left eye seems little too big. That's all I see. LOVE IT!!

[Sherlock Lupin]

I'd give you a rep, but I've apparently run out of reps for the day.

[AiSuigetsu]

I'd give you a rep, but I've apparently run out of reps for the day.

so had i, so had i

[Patronus Charm]

green button alert... :mrgreen:

[Black Demon]

Again... I'm speechless

Though Vermouth's chin is a little pointy

[Moonlight Magician]

Yeah as everyone said...the left eye was small...but the hair and clothes are really good!

[Lupin of the Heisei Era]

wow! you are truly an artist.

[Kleene Onigiri]

Her head is a bit "stretched" to the upper right.

And either the nose is a bot "too small" or you rearrange the eyes.

The left eye needs to be a bit more to the left.

In the original, you can see that the eye almost touches the edge of the head.

Also, the nose is between the eyes. If you continue the line of the nose (upper part), in your picture, it would hit the eye XD In the original, it doesn't.

So if you mahe the eye smaller or "push it more to the left", it should be better XD

The right eye needs to be a bit "longer" in the width. Usually, you have 1 eye space inbetween (roughly).

If you compare it with a straight line down to the mouth, the eye in the original would touch the edge of the mouth.

In your pic it's not touching :V

This sounds harsh ^^" I'm sorry D:

But it's nice The face, especially in this angle, is hard D: I have problems with it too >.<

[Mia Ehru]

it's awesome one +1 was yours

[Kuroba Kudou]

It's amazing!

[Sherlock Lupin]

I would give you a rep, but I've apparently run out...Sorry!

[Anti-APTX4869]

Amazing. I love it. +1

[Sherlock Lupin]

Now I can give you one! A rep for you!

[Vi Graythorn]

omg i realize i 4got 2 give a rep

r4u

[Wildheart888]

Niiiiice!! Love it!!! xDD

[TheBlackTac]

Awesome! +1 Reputation.

[TheBlackTac]

That's really good. + 1.

[AiSuigetsu]

please don't ask me why it's blue, lets just say one might sometimes find oneself in a situation in which u can't find ur pencil right when ur about to shade... think what you want, the answer is always maybe

so, some obvious problems: THE DRAWING IS BLUE, shuichi's mouth is horrible, HIS left eye sucks, and akemi is not looking at you (haha)

any other problems, please point them out

P.S. the drawing is very off centered

EDIT: P.S.S.(or P.P.S. can't remember) their faces are not shaded cuz that would make them look blue

[Moonlight Magician]

You pinpointed all already and Akemi looks like a 40 year old. Where's my Yukiko?

+1 I run out...I'll try later.

[AiSuigetsu]

ahh, so you still like yukiko better, well she was a favorite of many (in my drawings)

akemi looks like a 40 year old? oh no! \o/ perhaps it was her long face

well anyways its okay that uve run out, i haven't, and i just gave u one XD

[Moonlight Magician]

ahh, so you still like yukiko better, well she was a favorite of many (in my drawings)

akemi looks like a 40 year old? oh no! \o/ perhaps it was her long face

well anyways its okay that uve run out, i haven't, and i just gave u one XD

<3 Yukiko

yeah it's the face that's why she look like an old.

Oh thanks even though I wasn't the one who draw that.