Anti-APTX4869 Posted May 20, 2011 Report Posted May 20, 2011 *Catches the pill and goes to lab.* *Starts researching....* ....... *.....calls Haibara.* Haibara: WHAT?!
Anti-APTX4869 Posted May 20, 2011 Report Posted May 20, 2011 Haibara, I found this APTX4869. Do you want to- Haibara: Already have one. Bye *Click beep beep* ....Sh..She talked to me
harrieth.dc Posted May 20, 2011 Report Posted May 20, 2011 I didn't notice kid's hamburger..haahahaha.. you should make it bigger and add some drinls so that kid won't choke..hahahaha.. I like it..ahahahaha.. (two thumbs up...!!)
mabel Posted May 20, 2011 Report Posted May 20, 2011 *Takes pill and cautiously looks at it* Hm... This better not be what I think it is... AGH!! IT'S RED AND WHITE!! *RUNS AWAY FAST AS POSSIBLE* NO CHELSEA!!!! Give it to Cure-kun. *Catches the pill and goes to lab.* *Starts researching....* ....... *.....calls Haibara.* Haibara: WHAT?! "Say.... did I see black before i got knocked out? I thought the pill was fine.... ouch, my head..."
mabel Posted May 20, 2011 Report Posted May 20, 2011 *thinks... i'll give Kaito-kun a hamburger next time...*
Misaki-chan Posted May 20, 2011 Author Report Posted May 20, 2011 Can anyone guess where that burger is from?
Misaki-chan Posted May 20, 2011 Author Report Posted May 20, 2011 YAY!!!! *HUGS* *Eats Pocky* Mmmmm.... Pocky...
Aeyra Posted May 21, 2011 Report Posted May 21, 2011 Did I not comment on this yet? Oops... Meant to, but I never had time to. Let's see.. criticism? For helpful tips I can say: 1. Her face seems a little... strange. It's not as even as it could be. Try and make it more symmetrical. 2. Mouth. It's oddly placed. It seems to be a little sideways. Look at yourself in the mirror and draw your expressions. Sounds weird, but it works. 3. Eyes. Pupils are important! I'll put up a tutorial on eyes I guess. Of course, my tutorial will be done on photoshop. *smiles* 4. Hair. It's okay, just looks too stiff. Look at something while drawing and do your best to copy! 5. Legs. I think that you got confused between her leaning and her sitting. If she's sitting, her legs up to her knees are on the table, meaning you don't have to draw them. If she's leaning, she's merely touching the table, no weird leg bends. 6. Clothes. It has to bend right, but I can't draw clothes right either (they're annoying to draw) so I can't really help you. I think that's it. This might sound like a lot, but really it's not. It's actually a reasonably good drawing. But you can always become better!!
Misaki-chan Posted May 21, 2011 Author Report Posted May 21, 2011 1.) What can I say? I'm never did like perfection..... 2.) I do that a lot. One of the things I should improve on... 3.) I was a bit lazy that day, so I did my quick version of eyes. As for the tutorial, Cure-kun did that for me already, but I want to know your way too! 4.) Actually, I did use a helper picture.... 5) I know I screwed up on the legs.... -.-;;; It was my first time drawing someone sitting.... 6.) Don't worry! I'm pretty new at the whole wrinkle thing, but I'm sure I'll improve as I go along! Thank you for the critic Aeyra! I'll be sure to keep all of this in mind when I draw my next picture. (And I'm glad you think I did reasonably well on it.)
Misaki-chan Posted May 21, 2011 Author Report Posted May 21, 2011 Awww... I put a label on the burger...
IdentityUnknown Posted May 22, 2011 Report Posted May 22, 2011 Aw, it was supposed to be from McDonalds! Did you know that McDonalds sponsors DC?
mabel Posted May 22, 2011 Report Posted May 22, 2011 Sorry wasn't in the mood of guessing... or answering depressed...
mabel Posted May 22, 2011 Report Posted May 22, 2011 *revives... jumps out of arms.. runs to Kaito-kun's (Kid the phantom thief) house*
IdentityUnknown Posted May 22, 2011 Report Posted May 22, 2011 Sorry wasn't in the mood of guessing... or answering depressed... Why were you depressed?
Misaki-chan Posted May 22, 2011 Author Report Posted May 22, 2011 I think it's because Moho-kun left... Right Bell-chan?
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