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I think that the Boss could be a police officer. It definitely would explain why they don't know about the Organization. So mysterious! I mean, there seems to be a lot of clues, but I can never piece it together anyway...

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Why? I'm pretty sure it's a character we've seen. Aoyoma-sama said so, as well. I was just watching the Clash of Red and Black arc and Gin said that the Boss was following one of them 200 meters away. And they keep saying that he's very careful.

Is that chapter out yet? Do you know when it's going to be subbed? I WANNA READ!

Well, here's chapter 4! Hope you like it! Conan inhaled deeply. Heiji grinned. I was so excited I probably could bounce of the walls of the whole room. “I’m here, Ran-neechan!” Conan yelled. He ran to the door. “Hi, Conan-kun. So, what is it that you wanted to show me?” “Come here, please.” Conan led Ran to where Heiji and I were. Ran looked surprised when she saw Hattori. “Hattori-kun! What are you doing here?” She asked. “Oh, I came ta visit da shrimp.” He smirked and roughed Conan’s hair up. Conan looked annoyed and I giggled. Ran heard me and looked my direction. Again, she looked surprised. “Conan-kun, who is this?” I stood up from the couch. I was at about Ran’s shoulders. I took a breath and smiled. Here we go, I thought. “Here, let me introduce myself. My name is Edogawa Miyuki. I’m Conan-kun’s older sister.” Now, Ran was speechless. She blinked for a second and looked from Conan and back to me. “Conan-kun…? You have a… sister?” Conan looked up nervously at Ran. “Y-yes… This is Miyuki-neechan. She’s thirteen years old. She’s lived in America with my parents up until now. She wanted to come visit. Miyuki-neechan, this is Mouri Ran-neechan. Ran-neechan’s dad is Mouri Kogoro, the famous detective.” “I’ve got to say, it’s a pleasure to finally meet you. Conan-kun has talked an awful lot about you. I think he has a crush on you.” I ignored Conan’s death glare. “May I call you Ran? I feel like I’ve known you for a long time.” “S-sure…” Ran said dazed. “Edogawa-san…” “Oh no, please call me Miyuki. I’d prefer that. I don’t care much for formalities.” “Um… sure, Miyuki.” I glanced over to Hattori. He was trying his hardest not to laugh at Ran’s expression. I looked down at Conan and winked. He looked startled for a moment, but smiled back. “So, Ran-neechan. Could Miyuki-neechan possibly stay with us? I haven’t seen her in a long time.” Conan pouted. Ran finally got over being shocked. She smiled at Conan. “Of course. I’m not sure what Dad will think, but… it’ll be okay.” “Thank you so much, Ran.” I bowed. “I really appreciate it. I think we’re going to be great friends.” Ran blushed. “Oh, it’s nothing. And you’re right, I feel the same way.” We smiled at each other for a second. Hattori coughed. “I’m sorry, but I gotta go. Kazuha’s gonna kill me.” “Okay. It was nice seeing you Hattori-kun.” Ran said. “Bye, Heiji-niichan!” Conan said in a childish voice. “Bye, Heiji-niichan. Oh, wait a second.” I took out my cell phone from my world. It still worked for some reason. “Could I have your number in case of an emergency?” Hattori nodded, understanding. “Here.” Then I quickly gave him mine just in case. “Okay, see ya!” Hattori left. Agasa walked into the room. “So, what are your plans?” He asked. “Miyuki-neechan is gonna come stay with us!” Conan feigned happiness. Agasa smiled and nodded. Then he checked his watch. “Well, it’s seven thirty PM. You might want to be getting home.” Ran and I nodded. “Okay then, let’s go!” I said happily. Ran smiled. “Conan-kun! Come on!” She called. Conan waved bye to Agasa. We walked to the door. “Oh wait! Hold on a second! I have to get my stuff!” I called. “I’ll catch up! Go ahead!” Ran nodded and they left the house. “Professor,” I whispered urgently. “I don’t have any luggage!” Agasa thought for a second. Well-” All of a sudden, a suitcase appeared in front of us. Agasa and I stared for a second. I bent down and opened suitcase. It was filled with my favorite clothes and toothbrush. “This is very strange,” Agasa muttered. Then he looked at me. “You better catch up to Ran-kun and Shinichi. Don’t worry,” He added when I was about to protest. “Ai-kun and I will investigate the reason you were transported here.” I nodded. “Okay, but let me have your number, just in case.” We quickly exchanged phone numbers. “Bye!” I called to Agasa and waved carrying my luggage. I ran out the door and quickly shut it. When I exited, I saw Ran and the shrunken form of Kudo Shinichi holding hands. I snickered. Aw, I thought. They look so cute. I started to walk to them. They were on the next street ahead. I started to run to catch up to them. I was about to cross the street and call out to them. All of a sudden, I froze. No way! I screamed in my head. Not them! I stopped and held my breath. There were two men smoking cigarettes. They were leaning on a black Porsche. A 356A, to be exact. Was this an okay cliffhanger? I hope so! Well, thanks for everyone's comments on the previous chapters! I'll post the next chapter soon! See ya then!

This is a great start! I can't wait for more! Keep writing and update soon! Arigato~

I'm pretty sure the Boss will be someone we know. But, it could be a somewhat minor character such as Okino Yoko. It would be kinda funny if she was the Boss. XD

I agree. I think the Boss is a pretty major character. Whoever it is, their job will be unlikely and who He is will be surprising. It will be a big twist.

Actually, I never really thought about that! That's pretty interesting, if he disguised himself as one of his friends or family! That would pretty interesting!

Awesome! I'm looking foward to the next chapter! Update soon! :grin:

Yeah, you're probably right... Aoyama-sama is very complex like that... But still... Oh, well, it was just a guess.

Why do you think the Organization's name is Agasa? I think that would be unlikely. Wait a second! What about Suzuki Jirokichi? The name of their company is the Suzuki Corporation, so what if that was the real name? Sonoko, her father, her mother, her sister, who knows who could be part of it? Just an idea.

Here's chapter 3! Hope you like it! “How does he do that?” muttered Conan. “Every time, I swear… He just pops up when you’re talking about him!” I giggled at this comment. “Oi, Kudo! Were ya talking ‘bout me?” Hattori asked. “Yo, Hakase, Ai-chan.” Then his eyes fell on me. “Oi, Ku- I mean Conan, who da hell is this?” He demanded. “Hello. I’m Edogawa Miyuki, Conan-kun’s sister. And, I’m presuming that you are Hattori Heiji, the famous Detective of the West?” Hattori’s expression was priceless. His jaw hit the floor and I started laughing. Then he turned to Conan. “Who da hell is she? Ya don’t have a sista!” Hattori demanded again. “This is Chelsea. She’s from a different world. She was transported here some how. Oh, yeah, don’t bother with trying to not call me Kudo. Chelsea knows everything. About the Organization, me, Haibara, and probably everything about people here.” Conan explained. “Wai- Wha?! Transported from another world?! What da hell are ya guys talkin’ about?!” Hattori was flipping out now. “Well, yes. My world is different from yours, but it’s similar. There are murders and crimes as well. And yes, I do know everything. For instance, I know you are Hattori Heiji, you’re known as the Great Detective of the West, who rivals Kudo Shinichi. You’re from Osaka and your father is Hattori Heizo. Your childhood friend is Toyama Kazuha and your girlfriend.” I sniggered as Heiji blushed furiously. “SHE’S NOT MY GIRLFRIEND!” He yelled. “Sure, sure. Just keep denying it. It makes it even more obvious. Anyway, yes, my real name is Chelsea.” I mock bowed. “However, we came up with the idea that I’ll pose as Edogawa Conan’s sister coming to check up on Conan and live here for a while. My name is Edogawa Miyuki. I’m thirteen and I grew up in America. And that about sums it up. Right?” Agasa, Haibara, and Conan nodded. Heiji was still in shock. “Wow, when I came ta visit, I never expected for somethin’ like this ta happen.” Then he turned to Conan. “Geez Kudo, ya really do attract trouble don’t ya?” Conan groaned. “Kami-sama, why do people always say that?” Everyone else snickered. “Ahem,” Haibara coughed after a moment. “Well, maybe we should finally call Mouri-san now.” “Yeah, we were about to call right before HATTORI had to come busting in.” Conan glared. I’m gonna love it here. “So, Hattori-kun, why did you come here in the first place?” I asked. Hattori shrugged. “I guess it’s ‘cause I haven’t come in a while and I wanted ta check on Kudo.” “Well, you sure picked one heck of a time to show up.” I commented. Conan sniggered again, “Yeah, that’s one thing he’s actually good at.” “Wha da hell is that supposed ta mean?” Conan was too busy dialing a number on his cell phone to answer. After a couple of rings the phone picked up. “Hello?” I heard Ran ask. “Hi, Ran-neechan. It’s Conan. Could you please come to Agasa-hakase’s? There’s something I need to tell you and it will be easier it I show you…” “Sure, Conan-kun. I’ll be there in ten minutes.” “Ok, see ya then Ran-neechan.” “Bye.” Then Conan hung up. “Nice acting.” I giggled. Conan glared at me. “I thought you already knew about this stuff!” “Yeah, I did. But it’s funny seeing it first hand!” Heiji snickered. “She’s got ya, Kudo.” “Oh yeah.” I turned to Heiji. “You better not tell anyone.” Heiji held up his hands in defense. “Of course not, Chelsea! I wouldn’t dream of it!” I groaned. “Oh great. Are you gonna be calling me Chelsea in public? Call me Miyuki! Especially when Ran and others are around!” “Excuse me.” Haibara interrupted. “I need to do some research in the basement. Good-bye. It was nice meeting you, Chelsea. I’ll see you later.” “Same to you Haibara-san. See you.” After Haibara left, Conan and Heiji started arguing. I listened to them smiling. Agasa just shook his head and watched. A few minutes later, the doorbell rang. “Coming!” The professor called. He walked towards the door and opened it. Ran was on the other side smiling. “Hello, Professor. I’m here. Where’s Conan?” Hm... Well, I hope it was okay. It's a bad cliffhanger, and a lot of chapters are short like this. Sorry! Please tell mew your thoughts! Thanks!

Are you saying that he's ten years younger now? Hm... Well, he still had a lot of brown hair then. But, I think they would notice. Conan's a detective. He should be able to find that out. And Ai lives with him. So, if he went to take a shower or something, she could find out. She's pretty smart. Sorry if I broke your theory!

Hi! Welcome! I'm new too! Also, I'm actually from Korea. I don't live there now though.

I'm glad you like it! The mistake is that Ai has a Black Org sense so she should be able to tell I'm not from the Organization. I dunno, I could have edited it, but... It's been a while since I've looked at this chapter.

I saw. Thank you! I appreciate it! I'm trying to get used to all the new stuff on this! It's kinda confusing!

I was just curious. There are so many popular quotes of characters. So, I was wondering, what's yours and who said it? I've definately have quite a few.