Thanks for the advice
Regarding the punctuation ; I will edit it.
About the characters ;I agree to what you said and I think its because chicken and chick are in reality (their creaters) are actually quite similar so I think it affected it in that way
While for the plot I think I might introduce your idea to my friends and discuss it with them
And thanks alot for your comment
P.s. can you guess which character was me??? 8D
I think chicken did come first, and anyway if an egg exsisted first it would need care from its unpresent mother.
Why do we refer to love by the red colour, peace by the white colour and optimism by the yellow one (etc.)?