*reads it* *large imagination bubble popped beside me*
Nice story but I think you could just expand it a bit more.
I mean, what about Kogoro and Eri? How about The Detecti. . . (Nah, forget about them )
And there should a part when Ayumi says a dramatic goodbye or sad scene or something with Conan.
Professor Agasa's ending, well. . . just an extra though. . .
But your story is awesome! How about making it real, Gosho-sensei?