BK201 Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 Tamah! Hooray for supsup! ItaAs ang bAndEra ng mga PilipinO! Punitin ang inyoNg mga ceDula... Ay mali paki'translate nalang ate, nOwsblid na ako eh... buT how do we do that?
Amaranth Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 Tamah! Hooray for supsup! ItaAs ang bAndEra ng mga PilipinO! Punitin ang inyoNg mga ceDula... Ay mali paki'translate nalang ate, nOwsblid na ako eh... buT how do we do that? English Translation: I am not an online dictionary. Right! Hurray for Shamcey! Raise the flag of the Filipinos! Tear your cedulas! [Reference to Battle of Balintawak in Philippine history] @BK: Don't ask me. Really, there are SOO many ways. On my part, I'm trying to make my stories and poems as good as possible.
IdentityUnknown Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 Random Q: If I'm Nobody's twin, who am I? :/
Amaranth Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 Random Q: If I'm Nobody's twin, who am I? :/ You're simply a person with no twin. Random Q: If JustaL is my clone, then what is he?
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 Random Q: If I'm Nobody's twin, who am I? :/ You are IdentityUnknown. AKA Jean. AKA Pipichan. :V
BK201 Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 GoMen, ate... i oNce madE a fanfictioN buT i never got the chance to finish it becAuse of major major writer's block... And nO oNe seEms to aPpreciate it... It dishearteneD me...
Amaranth Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 GoMen, ate... i oNce madE a fanfictioN buT i never got the chance to finish it becAuse of major major writer's block... And nO oNe seEms to aPpreciate it... It dishearteneD me... All you need is someone to edit it for you. Writing fanfiction isn't as easy as it seems... I suggest you get someone to help you with... Characterization Grammar Details Vocabulary/Word Selection
BK201 Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 BUt who...? RiGht nOw i'm just toO dishearteNeD to write... I fEel like i'm nOt goOd at anythIng at alL... I am a failure to filipinOs and mankind... *siGh*
IdentityUnknown Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 You're simply a person with no twin. Random Q: If JustaL is my clone, then what is he? ;__________________; Somebody? :V You are IdentityUnknown. AKA Jean. AKA Pipichan. :V AKA Giga. AKA IU. AKA... *trails off*
Amaranth Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 BUt who...? RiGht nOw i'm just toO dishearteNeD to write... I fEel like i'm nOt goOd at anythIng at alL... I am a failure to filipinOs and mankind... *siGh* Okay, I read through it. It seems that your problem with chapter 2 is that it's quite short and has a lot of 'empty spaces' if you know what I mean. Grammar-wise, it's fine. I think what your story needs is a background or something. And don't think that you're a failure. You're not. You're simply a beginner. Once I posted the beginning of a story (I think 5,000 words for chapters 1 and 2) and a reviewer said that my attempt was a FAILURE. I felt so depressed, but I learned to move on and rise from my shortcomings. Now, as far as beta-reading is concerned... @IU: Twin, could you kindly take a look at BK's story? Pleassssse~~ I just want to know your opinion 'bout it...
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 ;__________________; Somebody? :V AKA Giga. AKA IU. AKA... *trails off* :V AKA Pyre~
Amaranth Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 *fadEs away* *hugs* @KKLT: AKA tonsostuff
BK201 Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 Really ate... Thanks for everything... You're really the best! <3 *hugs bAck* i only have oNe favor to ask you.... please dOn't cAll me Manang... :P 1
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 *hugs* @KKLT: AKA tonsostuff Yea~ AKA Pants :V
Amaranth Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 Really ate... Thanks for everything... You're really the best! <3 *hugs bAck* i only have oNe favor to ask you.... please dOn't cAll me Manang... :P Now that is EPIC!!! +1 for making me laugh. And I'll stop calling you that way (unless I feel like being naughty). :cool:
BK201 Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 @Ate: meh... I hope you woN't fEel naugHty then.. :P AnyWays i'm glad i madE you laugH... :P
Lia. Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 Bye people! *disappears* *reappears* *vanishes*
Lovestruck Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 *Reappears* *Rubs eyes* So, I took a nap and relax a bit.. Anything I miss?
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 *Reappears* *Rubs eyes* So, I took a nap and relax a bit.. Anything I miss? Yes. ME. :V Gotta go now D:
Lovestruck Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 @KKLT You know what? Honestly I'll go kill that mother *Cries* Don't-------!!! *clings*
BK201 Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 NOt you too KK-chan! *clings* Hiya, Rose!
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