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  1. This game is simple. Each person must have each words a bit scrambled in one sentences. The rule of the game is not to have each word scramble entirely! The next player will have hard time decipher, and it will cause discontinuity. Each word must maintain readability! You may write words which pronounce the same as the original word intended, as long as we can figure out what first poster is saying. Second rule, about slang: if you can't help it and want to use, two words only can be tweak with it. Each post can respond to first player's post, but the sentence at least has all words misspell. This game is not to encourage misspelling, but for game and fun! If possible, if you understand what first player saying you type in correct sentence the player mentioned. It's compulsory!! Use these commas in each post you make here! > (insert the sentence the first player's right sentence) ^ (optional: if you're the first player respond and answer did the person get it right or not.) <( respond to first player's post above with misspelling)
  2. go to find inspiration of poem writing.

  3. I haven't start on third chapter, thinking of adventures what they will go through together.
  4. Yo, friends, chapter 2 is finally up!! I've finish early, so have fun reading! Disclaimer: I don't own characters as they belong to Gosho! CHAPTER 2- Heiji meets Kaitou Kid Kogoro scratched his head as he came out of company after asking for Conan’s whereabouts, sigh with vexation when he stood in front of the road, waiting for Heiji and Ran where they plan to meet soon. Hattori ran around swiftly from one of the corners before sprinted down pavement when noticing Mouri, his expression looked grim and serious for Kogoro to pick up hint Heiji already have answer. ‘You know something did I don’t know? Take me to the place has clues for us to investigate,’ Kogoro said, following Heiji after he waved direction and they went to alley where it was dimly lit. It was remote place with plain looking fence when they reached. Kogoro took one look at it and hate the sight of it with thought to spend there in middle of night. ‘Where do you get the idea Conan did come here before?’ Kogoro asked with one eyebrow raise. Right in front of him was deserted area, which only left was dustbin found beside the wall. ‘You mean-‘ ‘Tat’s the dustbin I’ve searched earlier,’ Heiji stated. ‘And, guess what I found after I open the cap?’ He then held up an item. ‘It’s the handkerchief. Conan did breathe some in when he was grabbed behind.’ ‘The culprit use chloroform and kidnapped Conan. Whoever I found out did that, he will get it from me taking him away,’ said Kogoro angrily. ‘Heiji?’ Ran’s voice floated nearby and was heard over the wall above. ‘Over ‘ere, Ran,’ Heiji responded, next second Ran sprinted around to join them. ‘I can’t find him, did you both found the clue?’ she said with her anxious eyes looking at them, before resting on handkerchief Heiji was holding. ‘It’s chloroform, put on by the kidnapper. Tat person wasn’t tat smart to throw it away into bin; but we have the clue.’ Heiji smirked. ‘I think now would be right time to call the police,’ Kogoro said and pulled out his cellphone. Before he could dial numbers for police’s investigation, a gentle whistle blew by, and the sound of wind swirled around Kogoro’s ear which followed by the dart of card flying, passed by his face and towards wall behind which end up poke on the wall, startled him. ‘Kaitou Kid?’ Kogoro said with surprise and Ran together when Heiji’s eyes looked up to sky, with eyebrows joined together and his eyes lie on the white form of Kaitou Kid, with a dove rest on his raised hand. ‘Kaitou Kid, please don’t tell me you’re connected to this case of missing Conan,’ Heiji emphasized, staring at him, who now standing on top of the wall. ‘tsk, tsk. What a way to greet Kaitou Kid, tantei-san. I always show concern to those people who want to join in heist especially Conan; but he did not show up to catch me. I was a bit disappointed, but what he needs most is someone comes and save him.’ ‘And you think yer can save him because you’re ter man in white? I never fail, as I work as detective. I’m Hattori Heiji,’ Heiji declared. ‘I never underestimate you. And, surely did you not think of tracking him with this?’ Kaitou Kid grinned when he showed Conan’s glasses under moonlight; the lens was shining under glowing dim light above them. ‘I burrow it from Agasa. Help me relay when you saw him again, tell him I will return it. I only burrow not steal, I intend to return it after my mission is done.’ ‘Do you know by chance where’s Conan located? Please tell me,’ Ran begged and was closed to cry again. ‘I will find him in time. Don’t worry, Miss Mouri,’ reassured Kaitou Kid. He smiled, his white teeth revealed when he was gazing at her. ‘If I’m correct, the case is connected to yer fan’s doing, as way to let you get away? This kidnap case is not coincidence.’ Heiji’s shrewd eyes fixed at him. ‘That’s a clever thought, tantei-san. I always admire your intelligence, Hattori Heiji. A Detective of West. Your answer never is wrong, is it? I’m sure, with your given capability, you able to find Conan with your deduction and tracking skill.’ Kaitou Kid smirked when he watched infuriated Heiji. ‘So it is you related to Conan’s kidnapping,’ Kogoro accused and pointed finger at him dramatically. Kaitou Kid’s face turned darkened when he heard accusation said from Conan’s uncle, but he twitched his finger as motion to let his dove fly off, glancing carefully at Kogoro. ‘One of my fans is, not me. Please don’t ask further. I make sure tantei-kun won’t come to harm, if you both like to follow me or figure out the next hint. Now-‘ Kaitou Kid had not managed to finish sentence when Heiji interrupt in. ‘You think?!? Why don’t ya tell me now his location without wastin’ time, we can find him straightaway!’ ‘I wish I know which location is. I won’t waste time straightaway when I first reach here, I tell you which place he’s in, but I don’t know seriously. I have to reach there with glasses wear on I know where I am, and glasses aren’t built for complicated maps.’ Kuroba said as he watched them from afar, and down at where Heiji and Mouri staring back at him. ‘Ya know? If I know how to fly and kick martial arts I would love take the glasses within one second before ya knows it happens. The only I would do now is to throw a sword to yer and make you drop down here, but I did not bring the sword. Yer either make yerself useful, or leading us to that location,’ Heiji said with serious tone, crossing his arms. ‘Whoever kidnapped Conan, is still your fan who stirred us trouble and make our lives worrying. You are our enemy because kid likes personally to catch you in action. If your fan slipped away from us, yer will explain to us in person on his behalf soon.’ ‘Oh my, someone is in foul mood. I’m hurt to hear from detective say he wouldn’t like to work with me. I didn’t say what my fan did is right, my detective doesn’t like to stay with him in his prison,’ Kuroba said, with his white gun pointed at Heiji who looked tense when he observed it warily that Kaitou Kid smirked to see his reaction. He cocked the gun away, and laid it rest beside. ‘Why would you blame me for my deed, as it is not the cause of kidnapping? Kidnapping is my last priority, usually hardly happen as it’s not apply on child. Priority number one: No one gets hurt. You’re detective; you know facts are truth, aren’t you?’ Heiji looked incensed when he glared at Kaitou Kid, but did not say anything, only biting his lip. Finally, he opened his mouth as he watched at Kid with look as if it can kill, he thought twice, and kept calm composure when leveled his eyesight at Kid’s gaze, a staring competition. ‘The more you understand the situation yer know we can’t let him get away. Its kid’s life we’re talkin about, and rescue action has to be executed, it does not mean you should involve alone. Who knows yer may know your fan personally in real life, and now you’re still a suspect. Suspects always work with detective together and bring back justice.’ ‘As Kaitou Kid, nothing will beat me down as sooner I will find Conan soon, he will be beside me after I catch my culprit. I will find him soon. You don’t have to goad me on this matter. And if you’re serious to need me, you can rely on this dove, do not underestimate it as it will bring to the place you want to catch kidnapper in person.’ Kuroba release the dove as it flew in circles above them, and Heiji looked at it incredulously. ‘There is no time-‘ ‘I’m serious. My pet dove is clever to understand, well trained for this job. It also is suspect!’ Kaitou Kid said with theatrical tone emphasizing he was in business mood, but Heiji shook his head mumbling to himself. ‘Suspect?! Freaking Kaitou Kid…’ Kogoro make a comment, as he watched dove above and earn unexpected slap upside down on his head by small item something like small paper, which flew out from Kaitou Kid’s gun. It was Ace spade of card, it found itself lodge behind the line of pavement, between alley lane and solid grey slab. ‘My dove is well trained, honestly. It’s not ordinary dove you used to find in Tokyo.’ Kaitou Kid said heatedly. ‘It. Will. Take. You. There.’ ‘Fine…’ Kogoro pouted. ‘You can go and save Conan? I hope I can see him again,’ Ran looked up at him after wiping her face. ‘We accept. We follow the dove.’ ‘Ran!’ exclaimed Heiji. ‘If we go and follow at least the police come with us to find. But Kaitou Kid already used this advantage to put Kogoro in delay, when he was goin’ to call earlier.’ He glared back Kaitou Kid. ‘Sorry, but I couldn’t help myself; no police should be around here under my watch.’ Kaitou Kid said irritably. ‘When I’m gone you any time can make a call. Well I’ll be off soon. Conan is waiting for one of us reach to him. And I’ll be first to be there. Or you play hide-and-seek with my dove. Now let’s see if you find it. See you later!’ Right on cue of his last word of sentences the mist appeared, detectives and Ran covered their faces until it subsided, in the next few seconds. Kaitou Kid was gone when they glanced above except for the dove in air took flight taking right turn. ‘Let’s follow the dove! If we can catch Kaitou Kid along the way, and Nakamori will be happy to see him caught!’ Kogoro said with glee and smirk when he noticed the dove headed different direction and he began to run attempting following direction the dove was taking, but he stopped the moment Heiji put his hand on Kogoro’s shoulder. ‘I’m not sure will the dove take us to Conan’s hide-abouts, but one look of it Kaitou Kid want to shake us of’ when he was waiting for us. He had it planned, allowed his dove to give us hint instead of Ku- Conan’s whereabouts. Kaitou Kid won’t give himself away to be caught; that’s a stupid idea if we plan to catch him, and by now he already becomes civilian without costumes.’ Heiji explained watching the dove above continued flew on. ‘Where should we are heading if we can’t follow it?’ ‘We return to where yer both start reaching here few hours earlier, when yer’re with Conan,’ replied Heiji without missing a beat. ‘And we may see Kaitou Kid on the way, bungee jumpin’ and hoppin’ all over buildings.’ ‘What a funny image,’ said Ran, amused as she made comment. They changed direction and Kogoro lead them, quickly they picked up walking pace to sprint. However, Ran tripped over when Heiji heard abrupt change of her footsteps which it distinctively heard just if it hit on rock. He turned around with hands to catch her, but did not manage in time, when she landed down with her chin hit on the pavement. ‘Ouch!’ she said. Heiji took notice at unusual shape on the ground, which causes his eyebrows furrowed together to think, Ran noticed it as she blushed, and get up to her feet, distract Heiji out of his concentration. ‘You’re okay?’ Heiji and Kogoro asked together; Ran nodded. ‘That’s good. Will you stand aside, please? I think I notice some kind of door or something on the ground,’ he explained. ‘What!?’ they said with shock, looked astonished at him. They took closer glance further. They realized what he said was true, found where Ran trip over earlier was the small curved dent, the lines were slightly visible, a form of edge creating outlines around it, they noticed a form of square showing in front of them. He brushed dust and dirt aside when he examined it. He knocked it, listened closely before he knocked the pavement beside it, then smirk was plastered over Heiji’s face. ‘Both nearly sound the same, but the square one is a bit hollow. There’s something inside we don’t know about,’ Heiji grinning. ‘This is getting interesting. Uncle, can you go there and check for any witness around at there for us? I check here, Ran you call police. We now have mystery we must crack, by tonight.’
  5. bought MP3 for Japanese learning and ebook. Time for mi ni my ni moe chossing one fan fiction online!

  6. That's not how you study Val... you have to start from level you familiar with before build up. And you won't feel stress when facing exams.

  7. Val, if you find advanced lesson hard you don't have to take.

  8. I will!!! I've added fiction to fanfiction.net!
  9. refresh that page. I add something to my post.

  10. Well Google translate can only use for few words only, but if it doesn't work dictionary is the best for translate. BD has beat me to it, that website is recommended, and I like everyone personally use that website for references. ADDED: And, this is advanced lesson, I've told before. There are two lessons, beginner and advanced.
  11. I did check, it did show 'Lie' Copy and paste the word for precise meaning.
  12. Lessons how many ways we can replace 'said'? A lot! But they are form of expressions describing our manner. 说话 说谎 说服 说笑 说明 说破 解说 瞎说 硬说 直说 *述说 实说 说情 明说 诉说 数说 劝说 *陈说 *述说 - (shu *fourth sound* , shuo) tell, recount/narrate *陈说 - state Note them down and practice writing sentence including each mention in sentence. If you don't know one of the words, you can use either google translate or Chinese dictionary.
  13. I love this fic, it got me laugh too much. It's an excellent read. Conversation Among Ghosts by Ysabet It's funny story and you can't get it down.
  14. wait a moment, it finally load. Great, cold and cough is my worse enemy of observation.

  15. I know why I can't see. You open in internet explorer. It can't be view in firefox.

  16. I went there to check the answer where Takagi is: dont press if you don't want to know... the speculated answer is
  17. I was joking. .... There is no picture.
  18. Need energy. Off to eat bread

  19. That person is on strike? o_o The link is workable.
  20. It's not about yaoi. By the way, next chapter will be up next month. I can't finish chapter without coughing periodically. The good news is I don't have to lie on bed but my brain is fuzzy enough to rest from typing chapter. Sorry for delay.
  21. I will update soon!! @Tsukiko, yep! It's coming soon! I'm still on next chapter!
  22. having a bad cold and cough

  23. Disclaimer: I don't own characters as they belong to Gosho! CHAPTER 1- Abduction It was the day the crowd gathered around the arena, as if they were expecting Kaitou Kid showed up soon. Kaitou Kid was known as thief wearing white suit, and detective Shinichi Kudou would do anything to capture him and put handcuff on hands. Now Shinichi was there, he was known as Conan Edogowa, looking up the sky with calculating look and smirk shown on his face. A faux child glanced at chattering crowd, he made a vow to find Kaitou Kid since all are Kaitou Kid's fans except for a girl who hold up a sign which written: 'Kaitou Kid: you will be nabbed by police soon!' He was amused to see the signboard holding up high, and did not stay on to see clearly who person was when Conan heading to nearby building. At that moment he noticed movement, noticed an alley besides building, a shadow slid through and disappeared behind it. Could it be Kaitou Kid? He thought, and did not spare a thought to think through when he ran forward into dark alley. He reached the corner to find no shadow in sight. He squinted. Conan saw no sign of movement, but alley turned quiet, only him as living human in dark corner watching for appearance of Kaitou Kid. This is eerie place, I better leave soon, he thought. Before he could move muscle, a stench of chloroform met his nose, a moment later he realized it's too late for him to figure out. It was handkerchief which pressed against his nose. Chloroform! He thought, fought not to succumb into unconsciousness. His senses began to swim, and felt himself lifted up in unwelcomed arms of stranger. Conan heard last words before darkness started to overwhelm him. 'Sleep, child, and you won't longer see Kaitou Kid in person again. ' The smell of chloroform became strong for Conan to handle and breathe in as he gradually grew limp in clutches of his captor's arms. ************************************************************************************* 'Where is Ku- Conan?' Heiji's shout of question wake Mouri's agency up as Ran and Kogoro were sitting on sofa, their eyebrows form together with worry when Conan's name was mentioned. 'We did search for him at arena. We already combed in every corner of the area including buildings. It takes us few hours to realize he wasn't there after we search. And we return home with hope that we may see him here. Afterwards… you know the rest.' Said Ran, cried while she pulled tissues out of the tissues box. She wiped her tears away with it. 'I wish the brat able to tell us where he is right now,' Kogoro growled, watched her daughter with frown. 'Anything can happen to him and the reason is he has been missing! It can be Kaitou Kid takes him away, or he is in trouble. He needs our help!' Ran shrieked with anger and her glare headed to Kogoro's stare which turned diminished when he cowered back. At that moment he felt it was directed for him not taking the situation well. 'We must continue searching for him, don't we?' Heiji propped up the question, pulled around his cap then crossed his arms together. 'If it is easy, we won't be standing here,' grumbled Kogoro. 'Let's return to that site.' His final speech closed the decision for Edogowa's guardian. They sprinted out of agency and headed back to previous place where the heist started by thief few hours earlier. ************************************************************************************** Kuroba Kaito was in the bathroom, shuffling his costume into sports bag and zipped it closed. Afterwards he ruffled his hair messier, glancing himself reflected in the mirror. 'Amazing, no one still know who I am when I turn Kaitou kid,' Kaito sing-song. His gleeful face appeared in the mirror, but his smile started to disappear. But where is tantei-kun? It's not like him when he disappeared. I wonder where he's gone… he thought with his fist knocking his own head. It wasn't a hard knock, his smile now was a frown reflected back from mirror as he stared at it. 'If I think seriously… I remember a fan told me the kid can't do anything when Kaitou kid was there to steal-' He had not finished sentence as his eyes suddenly turned wide, Kuroba froze in his spot with pale face. The realization and truth sank in, his mouth turn wide open. 'Why I did not think of that earlier? It's too obvious because he hold a bag. That bag is big enough not to be school bag! Tantei-kun!' he gasped with horror. He swiped the sport bag up and on his shoulder and hurried out, before anyone can figure out Kuroba Kaitou was the last one to leave toilet.
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