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  1. You read more and find out! :mrgreen:
  2. *one long chapter, I mean.

  3. I have an idea... I write one page short story of HY, I think this may work...

  4. The missing detective chapter 4 is up.

  5. Disclaimer: I don't own characters as they belong to Gosho! CHAPTER 4- Chain of events Into Megure’s car Kogoro and Heiji slammed the door closed; the inspector brought the car alive and drove it to hospital, reached in next fifteen minutes later. The moment when Megure pull the car to halt in the car park Heiji leapt out without waiting for them, ran forward to the hospital entrance when he saw a familiar long hair flash by; Ran was running in beside him without batting eyebrows in surprise. They went to reception and Ran immediately asked for Conan’s room and receive answer promptly, Heiji and Ran then broke into run, ran forward to find Kudou Shinichi waiting outside the closing door. ‘Shi-Shinichi?’ He perked his head up when heard name was called. ‘Have we met? Ah, no, we haven’t, I’ve heard of him before. My name is Kaitou Kuroba. I saved the child; Conan is now with the doctor.’ ‘You look like Shinichi,’ stated Ran, stared at Kuroba in surprise. ‘I don’t believe now it’s our first time we meet,’ Heiji said suspiciously. ‘Is it? I get it often I look like one of the actors, or handsome guy girls met, they often ask me why I’m born with good looks,’ Kuroba laughed, and Heiji noticed his laughter was meek, covered with nervousness. ‘Very funny, I swear now I have a witness who can lead me ter Kaitou Kid…’ Heiji smirked. ‘Is it? You have to introduce him to me one day,’ Kuroba said, interested as he told calmly. ‘But don’t you have questions for me about the accident?’ ‘A lot of questions, yesh, I have tons.’ Heiji replied. ‘I hope you can withstand me as its interrogation. I’m a detective.’ ‘Sure.’ Kuroba looked less cheery when he watched Heiji. ‘What’s your name?’ ‘Take a guess. I’m one of ter famous detective in Japan. Let’s start wiv questions.’ ‘Is Conan alright?’ Ran’s question followed his sentence as she looked at Kuroba anxiously. Kuroba nodded. ‘It was me cover in blood, not Conan’s, I was hit by side with Conan in my arms before we fall to the ground. We both were hit, but mine isn’t serious enough to lie on hospital bed. I think Conan has hit his head when we were knocked down.’ Kuroba explained, and Heiji turned his head to hear from him when he spoke, narrowed his eyes together. ‘Where ‘ere yer when you witness the accident?’ ‘I was behind the child, I saw Conan running past me, it was the moment I hear a screech and realize the car was heading to us. Later I notice it did not head to me, but Conan. You can ask the drunk when he’s sober. He’s also in hospital.’ ‘You don’t hav to worry about this part, leave t’is to me. How is yer injury?’ Heiji asked. Kuroba pulled up his sleeves, revealed a bandage around his arm, a clean bandage was wrapped around middle upper arm and down to lower, towards the middle where the clip attached together. ‘Its minor abrasion, don’t make fuss about it.’ At this moment the doctor came out from hospital room, Ran noticed him and approached. ‘How is he?’ ‘He has to stay overnight in hospital, we have to observe his condition. As for rest of it, he’s alright. Now he was sleeping, you have to wait until he wake up, but you can visit.’ After the doctor said good news Ran, Heiji and Kuroba came into hospital room, Ran smiled in relief as she sat beside the bed. She gently held his hand. Kogoro came in, found them gathering around Conan, he also noticed their expression, sighed before he smiled when he watched Ran was beside the child. ‘The doctor says he’s alright?’ Kogoro guessed, and they nodded as answer. ‘Kid, get well soon,’ he patted Conan’s covered feet. Megure came in, but he suddenly halt to his tracks before he walked backwards, Miwako appeared and had his ear cover in whisper, curiosity intensified in the room as Kuroba, Heiji and Kogoro exchanging glances. ‘That snob is so annoying. We might as well put him in jail overnight,’ said Megure. ‘What is it? Megure,’ Kogoro called. ‘His parents hired a lawyer. He won’t say anything until the lawyer comes.’ ‘He still won’t admit what he did wrong? That guy deserved to put in jail for a long time. And I’m going t’ere to giv deduction for my showdown,’ Heiji put down his verdict as he pointed himself. ‘No one will hear wrong from me personally.’ ‘You have the evidence? And why don’t I know about it?’ Megure narrowed his eyes at them. ‘If you know something, you also have to tell me what you know.’ ‘You will know in good time,’ Heiji smirked. ‘You won’t be lef’ out, Megure keibu becos ter guy won’t go anywhere even with lawyer.’ ‘At least you’re not pain in the neck like new detective I’ve met long ago.’ ‘I’m not that entirely bad, seriously. We have worked together in ter past before. Take us there, Megure. I’m not having snob you refer to scot-free, in Japan and on earth.’
  6. I hate medicine. I hate medicine whenever I take but I can't help without it to reduce rheumatism. Not a painkiller, but Chinese medicine adjusting my blood circulation.
  7. ... I've return home, I went to department store during 2 oclock.
  8. Can't be helped.... my muse's dead.

  9. Last chance!!! Title and link of artwork must send in to get into slot!! Your message will bounce back if you didn't, but make sure you send in title and artwork. Hurry! Two days to go!
  10. Last chance for people to join in competition!! To those had not create finalized title, send in on last day to get in the slot before submission closes! Title is required and your lifeline to be official participant!

  11. (???) maybe I write wrong. my first time writing full sentence...
  12. Next chapter will coming up soon!! Keep your fingers cross.
  13. Missing detective chapter 3 is up.

  14. Disclaimer: I don't own characters as they belong to Gosho! CHAPTER 3- Shocking news One hour later Heiji was looking furiously at the person who was cowering away from his glare. The kidnapper peeked upwards at him, but jerked away his gaze and head. ‘I already said the kid wasn’t here,’ the kidnapper said with calm voice, which infuriated Heiji more to grab his collar and shoved him up against the wall. ‘Calm down Hattori!’ Kogoro said, feeling exasperated to see recent event will lead to disaster he wished not to foresee. ‘This does not help since Kaitou Kid has beat to us, find this guy; and Conan was missin'.’ When heard Conan was missing colours drained away from Heiji’s face, he let his hands slackened; the kidnapper took this opportunity yank off his hands off to make a dash to escape when he leapt forward. However, Ran wasn’t taking these chances lightly for him; she gave a swing of kick right onto his face, he stumbled as he howled in pain when few teeth flew out and lie on the ground embracing himself. At that moment they heard the silent blare and footsteps, and handcuffs locked around the wrists which responsible of Conan’s kidnapping. ‘Well Conan has escaped, is he? Where can he be?’ Ran asked anxiously. ‘I bet anything it was Kaitou Kid takin' him away to Mouri’s agency,’ Heiji replied. ‘Ran, you return home to let us know if he’s there. I stay around here as he may be nearby.’ Ran nodded and without ado, brisk away to direction where she will be heading home. ‘Mouri, Edogowa-kun wasn’t here and we will keep on searching for him,’ Megure said when he appeared beside Kogoro, receive a response of nod, and pat Kogoro’s shoulder to reassure him. ‘Kaitou Kid was the first who calls us with fake voice, does he?’ Sato said as she scribbled fast on her notebook. ‘And he beats me to it,’ Heiji growled, looked annoyed as if his look can aim to kill any person who wants contradict him. ‘This is detective’s work. What he did is cheating.’ ‘He’s Kaitou Kid-‘ Kogoro’s weak smile hovering, but he end up having his eardrums shaking like earthquake when Heiji screamed. ‘THIS IS BIG DEAL! MY EFFING BUSINESS IS NOT FER KAITOU DORK TO INTERFERE SINCE FIRST PLACE HE USE COMPASS SPEC AND IT SHOULD BE A RULE FOR DETECTIVE SHOULD’T USE FER DETECTIVE WORK! WE NEARLY SPEND ONE HOUR TO FIND HERE N NOW CONAN WAS MISSING N; NO ONE KNOWS WHERE HE IS NOW!!!’ ‘Calm down detectives! We’re still working!’ Takagi tried to calm them down, but effect was working; Heiji gritted his teeth and walked away from them, sulking. ‘We still can find him.’ ‘Easier said than done,’ Heiji said irritably. ‘Let’s be optimistic a bit?’ Takagi looked at them with his anxious look. ‘Let’s assume the Kid, I mean the Kaitou Kid, he has found Conan and did take him back to agency, it will be good news, right?’ ‘Let’s hope Ku-Conan is right beside Kaitou Kid or I make sure he screwed up when I figure out who is he.’ he sneered when emphasizing on last of the sentence. ‘Okay, it’s my confession time.’ Familiar voice was heard above them, and all detectives including police one looked up in time found Kaitou Kid glancing down at them, Heiji noticed he was alone and his fears confirmed. ‘He wasn’t with me, but this doesn’t give you right to hunt me down Mr. Osakan tantei.’ ‘Or you’re scared to have me hunt you down? Don’t forget I’m still detective, I’m capable of findin' out who yer are under my watch 'ere in Tokyo.’ Heiji glared as he was shaking his fist. ‘I have no doubt, but doesn’t it leave to Nakamori’s jurisdiction for catching me?’ ‘I have no doub' yer don’t know me better. As Hattori Heiji, I don’t care will I make my parents angry over mah stay here, but I know yer are the twit need spanking with mop.’ ‘You have bad sense of humour,’ Kaitou Kid said sarcastically. ‘No. one. Ever use the mop on me.’ Heiji can feel reproach look come from Satou. ‘Now back to topic about Conan. He’s now at somewhere we don’t know about, I have strong feeling he may return to where he was missing in case he thought you both may search for him.’ ‘I can figure that out as well, Mr. Obvious.’ Heiji crossed his arms together with bored look. ‘Then why are you here?’ he asked curtly. ‘I’m letting you know Conan may not be there if you come late. He needs you and Ran by his side,’ he said, and his tone surprised Heiji, who looked up at him with confusion. ‘You go and see, you will understand. Bye!’ In a puff of smoke, he disappeared in the air which looked seemingly impossible to Heiji, he has strong suspicion how he did to make himself disappear. ‘Is he hidin' somethin' that I need to know? I haven’t got a chance to ask him,’ he said, grumbled. And his question has answered when Megure came up to them with pale face and his lips pressed together, tight-lipped. His choking voice had let horror overwhelmed Kogoro and Heiji. ‘We’ve heard of Conan being involved in an accident. The drunk had not saw where he’s going, and from eyewitness, he- he has been run over. We don’t know how grave his injury is, but the ambulance has taken him to hospital for the checkup. Kogoro, Hattori, take the car with me, and I’m driving.’
  15. Humanize my evil side in your story. :D

  16. Thank you for understanding. :)

  17. Dear me, Stop torturing the person. if you're tired drink brand essence to perk up. And you won't turn paranoid. From Miwako.
  18. Dear Miwako, What are you thinking? If you're tired of one story you had write before, do say so. Don't pester someone for sake of it. It's not nice... Sign, Anonymous.
  19. A howler comes out. *insert paper coin*
  20. Conia? I'm no longer writing SK's life. I've... added the reason in my story thread.

  21. I feel lot better letting one story go. Can't continue.
  22. I'm letting SK's life as HY go. The story... is discontinued. I've make the decision. I think I focus on short story writing and missing detective.

  23. To readers: This story is discontinued; I can't keep on writing as I realize it's difficult to write a novel with many ideas popping in my mind. I know the story look substantial, at first I do think of this way until I write chapter 3, I notice I can't continue further as I felt the plot I write has overwhelm me; I decide to let story go. I know I've disappointed the readers as this plot is rare online… but I can't continue… I have major writer's block. I'm running out of ideas when I know what will story roll out, what hold me back is when I look at the story, it look horrible for me that I unable to continue on with many mistakes I've seen in story. I can't continue on, please forgive me as I felt horrible when I publish before I know or realize what I'm doing. One thing is I never regret writing it, but I'm hold responsible for not writing well without grammar mistake, those are the ones which make me feel I'm writing upside down. Please forgive me letting story go. This story is first attempted novel I've write, but it wasn't come well as I expected. Please don't hate me, I believe there are many good and best writers can write this story well, and my preparation isn't enough to shape the novel I want to write to be. This plot/story idea is available for adoption. If you have interest to write this fiction and make it your own, you are welcome to send me message about it. Thank you for taking time reading my story! tzswei
  24. give up writing SK's life as HY. I know it's out of box story... *gloomy* but I like him better as Shinichi.

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      The story is up for adoption.

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