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Miss Smiles

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  1. You still can review. :) I like to hear from you personally what you think of poems.

  2. I see! She also read too. :)

  3. My account do support anonymous to review.

  4. About Ran's clothes, I haven't noticed how she dress. But I know she give me an impression she wear like a young lady. There are nice and not nice clothes. Ran was going through phase to womanhood. I don't think Ran is marysue, she cry a lot, but she stopped this recent years and I'm happy with Gosho giving her chance to see what future will be look like if she's strong. I've noticed she taking effort and really want to see what Shinichi wants of her, I feel this is a biggest step for her to do when to salvage her relationship. okay, I'm totally off topic here. She look nice with shorts.
  5. I love the first caption of Kaitou kid!!
  6. The competition will end at March 25! Ten days to go! You still can vote!
  7. having writer's block. -_- May have to write new story to pick me up.

    1. detective-db

      detective-db

      Let's go!!! ^_^

      I'm cheering on u...

    2. Miss Smiles
  8. I have one. 'Today is creative day, every person get to perform in front of class!' the teacher said. The first student came forward and started to have a speech. 'I'm going to make a sentences out of selected alphabets from a to k. The first two words are I am. This is a strange sentence... I am a boy, cute, daring, ecstatic, funny, great, hippy. okay I'm finish saying sentence!' Everyone in the classroom looked strangely at him when he say 'hippy' as they quickly observe his anatomy but the word he said does not describe it. And one of the students blurt out, 'you haven't finish the rest, I, J, K! What does three all mean?' 'It means, I'm just kidding.'
  9. Cant' get enough of Jule's story.

    1. Valkyrie
    2. Miss Smiles

      Miss Smiles

      20,000 league, the novel. It's fascinating. I finish reading it.

  10. I would be shocked if I don't have to wear spectacles.
  11. There's a person running around in circles. 'Stop running around in circles, you're making a hole for doing it!' the second person snapped. Then the person immediately stopped but couldn't help it when he jumped out as if he try to stop himself running. Before he know it next, the ground giveaway to 'imaginary' hole he already run around in circles. And it turn out the shoes he was wearing is ice-skate shoe which carved on the wooden floor.
  12. Well, if it's narrative the author has to decide how is long story. Usually readers prefer half a page, or writer prefer half a page, it's general length writer likes to write. If want poem long, usually I will write one page and half. But if it's parts, it's unlimited and decision is up to writer.

  13. I finish teaching morning shift.
  14. I forgot who is the first person I talk to. I remember IU welcome me in. I think the next person I talk to.... is KKLT?
  15. 20,000 league under the sea. I'm Jule's fan. I love his books, will buy to read action and adventure novels.
  16. But if you like the poems, feel free to leave review in fanfic! :P

  17. I also have one about Kogoro's snore. Heiji was at Kogoro's bedroom one night to stay over, woke up to think it's a dream. XD zzzSSSzzz, the might of flying sound, zzzSSSzzz, it came from Kogoro's mouth, a snore. 'Who the heck is tattooing?' asked Heiji, astound. 'Oh it's a train of snore for rattling night.' his voice then turn bored.
  18. I like to write sonnet and free verse.

  19. I need to practice writing ballad. :)

  20. It's up at first page of DC fanfiction.net

  21. And I'm going ta! I make mine memorable. ;)

  22. I'm going to put that poem into DC fanfiction.

  23. I still have to work on poem writing. I've join compettion, I lost on the last round when my poem has nominated.

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