Silverbullet-kun Posted April 17, 2012 Report Posted April 17, 2012 (edited) Here're a few drawings, please comment Sorry the image is not clear! Gaara Neji conan Okiya Edited May 7, 2012 by Silverbullet-kun 4
TheBlackTac Posted April 17, 2012 Report Posted April 17, 2012 A rep for you, Kiba-kun. That's a good one!
Inspector Gin Posted April 21, 2012 Report Posted April 21, 2012 Amazing, I could never draw like that . A point from me too .
Inspector Gin Posted April 21, 2012 Report Posted April 21, 2012 Thanks inspector gin! Your welcome :razz:. You should put it up in Naruto Community too, they'll love it .
tengaku squared Posted April 21, 2012 Report Posted April 21, 2012 I dunno, but this makes Gaara appear kinda...what's the word? Old?
phantomlady1101 Posted April 22, 2012 Report Posted April 22, 2012 Wow, you drew my husband.... Kid-ding ^^ +1 because the drawing is really amazing!!!
Silverbullet-kun Posted April 22, 2012 Author Report Posted April 22, 2012 Thanks phantomlady, you really seem to crazy about gaara, not that he's not awesome!
Silverbullet-kun Posted April 28, 2012 Author Report Posted April 28, 2012 (edited) Here's a drawing of Okiya! Pls comment! Okiya improved Edited May 7, 2012 by Silverbullet-kun
Misaki-chan Posted April 28, 2012 Report Posted April 28, 2012 I like it. Maybe make the neck a little thicker and don't have the shoulders slope as much as you drew them. You also may want to make the ears a big longer (the end of the ear tends to stop around where the nose ends). But overall, you did generally good IMO. It looks nice. Keep up the good work! ^^ @bananas3000, if you think she should improve, you should give her critique, not just tell her to do so. :\ It doesn't help at all.
A L Posted April 28, 2012 Report Posted April 28, 2012 @Misaki: I leave that to people who can actually give her good advice unlike me. I found plain scary so I kept shut :T
Misaki-chan Posted April 28, 2012 Report Posted April 28, 2012 @bananas3000, I see.... Also, @Silverbullet, do you have plans for coloring your picture? Just curious. I think it'd look nice colored.
tengaku squared Posted April 29, 2012 Report Posted April 29, 2012 Simplistic, could use detail. But a nice drawing, yes.
Anti-APTX4869 Posted April 29, 2012 Report Posted April 29, 2012 I'd say it's great. As long as people can recognize him right away, that's all it matters.! Like Misaki-chan said... "Maybe make the neck a little thicker and don't have the shoulders slope as much as you drew them. You also may want to make the ears a big longer (the end of the ear tends to stop around where the nose ends)." Neck... Yes, the neck should be a little bit thicker in this case, but i don't think it really matters (sorry Misaki-chan, you do give good critiques.) Shoulders... how do I explain it... if you know Trig or Algebra 2, try curving like a hyperbola... well, what I'm saying is make them look like an "L" shape a bit but with round corners. Ears... not bad, I usually draw them (in this case, front-view) proportion to upper eye to bottom of the nose... well, takes a bit practice, you'll get used to it.... You'll improve as you draw... that reminds me, I better start drawing again... =_=
Silverbullet-kun Posted April 29, 2012 Author Report Posted April 29, 2012 Thanks for the comment people I correct it next time! I'm no good when it comes to drawing shoulders and I've try harder.
Silverbullet-kun Posted April 29, 2012 Author Report Posted April 29, 2012 Another drawing! Pls comment Neji 2
TheBlackTac Posted April 29, 2012 Report Posted April 29, 2012 I have no taste in any drawings, so I'm not sure if you need to improve your drawings or something like that. But that's already good for me, so + 1 for you.
Anti-APTX4869 Posted April 30, 2012 Report Posted April 30, 2012 It's good. I'm not sure what to say since I haven't watched naruto for like 4~5 years.... I want to say something about the neck, but I think it's because of the shoulder width.... but yea, the shoulders are sloping too much. You should try raising them up a bit more. Try to look at your self in the mirror and make some gestures, play around, look like an idiot jk, idk just do all sorts of things. It's a good practice to have the image in your head. We see them everyday but when we try to draw, it just doesn't come to our thoughts easily.... I'm sure you'll get better... me, on the other hand, should start uploading pics that I procrastinated...
Anti-APTX4869 Posted April 30, 2012 Report Posted April 30, 2012 Facial features are off. yea I think so too, but idk what to say about it. I think it's a bit too long or something, but it's fine I guess.
Silverbullet-kun Posted April 30, 2012 Author Report Posted April 30, 2012 Thanks for the comment! I'll correct it!
Silverbullet-kun Posted May 17, 2012 Author Report Posted May 17, 2012 I made a new improved drawing on Okiya Okiya
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