Aeyra

Sorry, Tsukiko, but I'm disregarding your addition. It didn't fit in with the previous parts.... *********************** "Now will you listen to me?" asked an enraged Nero as they boarded the train, finding a nearly empty car. "Fine," spat KKLT, who'd become furious with the boy's protests of saving Mark and his attempts to block them at every turn. "Talk. You have thirty seconds." Nero gave her an angry death glare, but spoke nevertheless. "Did it not occur to you that this could be a trap? Mark is a terrorist, whether you want to admit it or not. He's also underage, and according to the newspaper, he also declined his right to a trial. This article should be on the front page, where people can gawk over it and feel outraged. And instead, it's buried deep in the back, and most people would just skim over it. This is a national newspaper. I'll bet this article is in other newspapers as well, hidden at first sight. The only people who would really, really care, who would do something about it, is us. And you know what? I think he's already dead." "Don't you dare say that!" yelled Pyre, grabbing Nero by the collar, shaking him. "He's still alive! He's awaiting execution, it says so on the news!" "Says the FBI," pointed out Nero, untangling Pyre's fingers from his shirt lazily, gesturing to the citation part of the article. "All the information comes from the FBI here... You'd think the state of NJ would give something, but it's only the FBI. And who did we just infuriate, run away from, and though they might not be aware of, steal from? They want us back, they want all of us, we're just extra soldiers. We went for help, but they just want to use us. This is the perfect lure, the perfect bait." "Then what do you want us to do?" challenged Misaki-chan. "What other choice to we have?" "If you're so intent on rescuing him, you'll all be doing a favor by staying close, but not coming on the actual mission. Chaos and I should do it, just us. The less people the better, and besides, we're the most skilled. If you're going to be facing a world-class group intent on trapping us, we should be the ones to do it for you." Chaos looked at Nero, surprised, but said nothing. Chaos personally hoped Mark was dead, hoped he would burn in hell for what he did to Laela. His only disappointment was that he wasn't the one who killed him. It would have seemed fitting, a proper ending to the tragedy. "But, we still want to help," piped up Aeyra, who had been staying quiet the whole time. "I agree with your logic, Nero, but we couldn't just wait- we want to know everything the moment it happens, and see everything ourselves. And why Chaos?" Why me indeed, wondered Chaos, looking curiously at his friend. Nero, you know for the past six months I've wanted nothing more than to strangle that bastard.... And now you're suggesting we go rescue him? What are you thinking...? "Chaos and I have the most experience, and we work the best as a team." Nero gave them all a green-eyed stare that said 'You know I'm right...' "And if it went badly, well frankly, we'd care the least. You guys might break down or something. Can't risk that. Nope, Chaos and I are already damaged enough that stuff like this won't hurt a bit." Chaos and I... Chaos repeated the words in his mind. Nero had never told him his past, but Chaos could hear the desire right under his words. Nero... ******************** And... I have no comment.

I've already read them all at least 25 times each... I still have my eyesight. I appreciate them all more every time. You want to read something that'll make you go blind? Read this: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4719325/1/My_Immortal_REPOST

Just because of that, I'm reading it again.

I can read it... I just don't see a defined topic.

I've finally finished it after weeks and weeks of procrastination! XD How is it? (I rushed parts of it... It's hard to focus for too long.)

Thought so... But it's been a while since I read the series so I wasn't sure.

大家好！我来了！ XD 这看着很好玩！ 我的中文名字是一萌。 现在大家在说什么啊？

When did that happen?

I personally loved Catching Fire... Mockingjay was still a good read though. It lets you see the true tragedy of war, and has a bunch of those moral questions which I love. ;D The first book was about surviving and setting the scene, the second was to to dive in, and the third was to go in deeper and then resurface. Hunger Games is about war... and I think all three books depicted that accurately, and in a great way.

I had no idea how.... I ended up using the dissolve blending feature...

Sadist! LOL (I have no right to talk...) I forget what happened last chapter... Hmm... I'll reread it later when you update it on ff.net. Akako's actions seem a bit extreme though. That would be a humongous king cobra.... *shivers* They're usually about half that size and weigh only thirteen pounds... (wikipedia. ^^) I just noticed something. Kaito never found out what happened to his handkerchief in the manga.

Is the 'wow' for climbing up a tree? (it's a very good hiding spot... The seekers walked right under me... Mwahahahahaha...) Yeah, nearly everything's been done at least once. It's hard to think of new ideas... Looking at your idea, for some reason, I thought of a spy group of sorts, with kid's having special abilities. XD Like, Eyes has super good vision, Mouth is extremely charismatic and can make people do almost whatever she says, Nose can sniff out weird things (like bomb squad dogs!), and Ears has super hearing. That's just what I thought of when I read it over the first time.

I finally finished Chaos and company... Ended up rushing it, but I think it looks okay... I just have no idea how to draw Mark's army cut, that's all...

... I don't get time to write during the day, and my laziness comes from having to resort to writing at 1AM in the morning. But fine, I'll write something. ********** Aeyra and Pyre rushed into the hotel lobby, Nero trailing behind them with a resigned expression on his face. The newspaper was clutched tightly in Pyre's hand, the news of Mark's upcoming execution displayed vividly on the now slightly crumpled page. The rest of the group had arrived earlier than the trio, currently lounging lazily in the luxuriant arm chairs as they waited to check-in. However, seeing the tense, frightened faces of their companions, they were immediately alert, gathering around the paper. "What happened?" demanded Misaki-chan, fear creeping into her voice. "Read," said Pyre tersely, pointing to the article, eyes tight. Everyone skimmed through the article, and by the timethey had finished, the group's expressions varied from extreme concern, to fear, and for Chaos, a hidden smile. "You know what, screw staying the night in this hotel," commanded KKLT, walking towards the exit. "We're taking a train to New Jersey pronto!" "Waif!" All eyes turned with ferocious curiosity to Nero, who had blocked KKLT's way. "You need to think this over! It could be a trap!" "Mark's on death row! We don't have time to think things over!" snarled KKLT, trying in vain to push Nero out of the way- the boy refused to budge no matter how hard she shoved him. "Then at least hear me put when we get on the train." "Fine." ******* Now I need to go and do math. See you.

I thought we were talking about Kaitou Kid... I just thought if a line from an HP fanfic I read (Draco Veritas=awesomeness) that kind of describes Kaito and his role in DC. "He was like a beautiful, empty house... You could dream anything into him." Fans take what they're given and simply run away with it, and as long as you ignore the extreme, OMFG I <3 Kid! fangirls, most of us have made Kid into a more realistic character in our heads, and that's why we don't find him overrated or whatever. His cases are predictable, but to date, I haven't managed to figure one out... I never guess right. (of course, I never bother solving mysteries in the first place.) DC and MK give Kaito two sides, making him a richer character. He has the vengeance and goal from MK, and he's given free rein to show off his skills and intelligence in DC. (let's be honest... The DC heists are so much more flamboyant. I liked the case with the shoe... ... I can't remember what it's called.) And let's face it. Shonen boys are either perfect, or they're failures that eventually become perfect. It appeals to most people. And I just thought of another thing... Kaito appears often enough, and so little enough, that he belongs to the fans. To date, we still are clueless as to exactly how his final battle, his life is going to play out, and fans like scrabbling at the 'what-if's. It's not that he's overrated as much as he belongs to people who do their best to make him perfect. :is thinking about Draco Malfoy's character... Fans made him who he is: Sure he's [Kaito's] perfect, but so is everyone else. And in the end, he's just another part of DC.

Somehow I don't believe that had even a chance of happening... Heiji appears too little, and having a love triangle would mean he'd have to spend most of his time with Ran. Of course, I <3 well-written love triangles. (Draco/Hermione/Harry love triangle (no Drarry!) = the best.) I like the idea of Heiji liking someone, but I'd like one main couple not being childhood friends! (I know SatouxTakagi isn't, but that's not really the same type of romance...) Like, it would have been adorable if one of Ran's friends (like, a character that doesn't appear much but is close to Ran) was with Ran while Heiji was in Tokyo and Heiji developed a cute little crush on her. A sweet, awkward romance which gives Heiji more excuses to go to Tokyo! Better than a copy of the main romance... ...

Where? (too lazy to do research using itouch...)

Yeah, I think a whole Wiki would feel quite out of place... I mean, I've heard of KCF from a couple places, so you can't exactly say it's unknown. (DC is pretty rare in the US as well... Other than it's scattered supporters.) I believe a page on the game linking to some outside wiki would be okay though. Like I said before, if we accept one, that it could be used against DCW in future arguments about adding different mystery manga to the wiki. It wouldn't really be a DC wiki then, it'd be a ragtag collection of mystery manga wiki. And people are here for DC, and if we want to find new manga, we ask people for recommendations in the Anime/Manga Off-topic boards. You can see if there's a topic for it there and put some more info into it or make a new topic for it, but I don't think you should go much farther as far as a wiki on DCW is concerned.

I wonder how you'll make it work... ... To me, it sounds kind of like Special A. (though I've only read like-6 chapters of that manga...) I was going to say OHSHC, but that's all males except one girl. (but they all think she's male.) They sound like an unlikely group though... I'd like to know what bonds them together. Childhood friendship? (though then Eyes's antagonist personality would seem slightly out of place) Or for personal benefits? (OHSHC) To be honest, I can't really glean much of a potential storyline from your details, and I'm too tired to really try and think of possibilities myself. (just came back from an Asian party... I played Manhunt and hisdtwenty, thirty feet up a tree. )

Not even... ... ... Ayumi? (even for a six-year old, she's annoying. Much too possessive...) What's the exact reason Kaito pisses you off? Is it predictable chapters, the obvious fact he's fan service, or is it just his character? (personally I hope the jewel will accidentally fall into an aquarium. :mrgreen:) I think Kaito makes for reasonable excitement, bringing some fun into Conan's depressing life. XD (wait a second... That sounds so KaiShin... It was completely unintentional, I swear.) Kaitou Kid seems to be either loved or hated... ... Like Justin Bieber... (I stand middle ground.) The character who pisses me off is still Kazuha. Kazuha=larger version of Ayumi, personality-wise at least. Possessive, clingy, and in Kazuha's case, becomes jealous very, very easily. (To Ran: Was extremely rude to her for wearing the same style of shirt as Heiji twice. WTH? Who gets jealous over that?) I mean, she has her nice moments, but really, she's a copy of Ran that's been doubled in the annoying factor and drops Ran's light, usual gentleness. She's a little full of herself whenever Heiji's concerned. Who gave her the right to threaten Heiji's girlfriend? (I'm referring to the um- Kudo's mistaken gender situation.) She's fiercely guarding something that others should have equal rights to, and Heiji's not even hers.

People who act like they're better than everyone else...