Okay, now I hate my iTouch and my laptop. They both just fricking deleted what I had to say!!!!! Twice in a row! (I would curse, but I'm trying very hard not to.) Nice job, but I wanted to point out that Krev and Brise aren't very likely to help you. They're the same as Chaos and Nero, except they're actually more Organization focused than the other two because they didn't have something big taken from them. They're just along because Chaos and Nero are really. I don't think they'd go back if Chaos and Nero died, but they're more absorbed into each other than anything else. And where did you get the van from? :is confused: We took the train to NJ, and the van was probably left in NY. And it was the afternoon, but I guess i didn't state that... And if it takes you only 4 minutes to reach the train station with your van, shouldn't a taxi get there faster because a taxi driver knows the route? Sorry... I like challenging things, force of habit. People should feel free to do that with me too. (in fact, please do. Because I have the personality of a perfectionist when I'm writing... ish.)
Oh, and I forget who asked, but there are two separate rooms for the boys and girls. It's just everyone is gathered inside one to keep each other company until bedtime. So the other one was empty, and adjacent.... Oh, and Nero gave you the tracker than keeps track of everyone's location at all times you know. So finding Pyre won't even take a whole day unless she's in a building that you can't enter. AKA her hotel room. (actually... You could stalk her and knock on her door. There's an idea. ) Meanwhile, Nero will be carrying out his secret plan that no one else knows about. XD I'll write that sometime tonight. I shouldn't keep procrastinating with my homework.