tengaku squared

F5

Yay! Wait, Chekov is a she?

A beginning without an end... 42 or 7?

Was Monsi suprised?

Google... A mild pandemic or the loss of a loved one through a deadly disease?

1018

If I must evaluate this...hmm...maybe this is the chance to try out my critic sheet: Your score is 85%. 80% to 91% (Great) - Stories here may have a few errors, but the story's a great read. My comments: The grammar is greatly improved. Your story is descriptive enough, and well told in the 1st person format. Now for some bad news: The cliffhanger is a tad...weak. Grammar errors are present; they don't effect the story too much. By the way, suggest any ideas for my critic sheet. It is not perfect. Should I add some categories, redistribute points? etc.

I am sorry...but I prefer Kaoko-san's lessons...

I would...but my vote goes somewhere else...

Your information seems off...but the date of DC ending seems realistic enough.

Um............may I disagree?

Double Rainbow Song - The Gregory Brothers

Idiot

F3

1015

Hmm? Why? Kiiro-chan!

Excuse me. I am now old user. Someone who has a cool avatar...

What if Gin killed Superman before he was killed?

He wasn't?

Yes! Someone who hates my profile photo (not my avatar).

Yes, but it not end up the way you want too... I wish DC would never end...

Then I would cry... What if YOU didn't exist?

Rings, cause earrings are stupid. Rainbow or white?