Kiel95

that's pretty good ^^ i like it so far... i'll def keep readin as you keep posting ^^

Welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3

yes, but all the murder crimes were solved, so none of them you can get away with if someone were to refer to the case in detective conan!

hahahaha thnx XD i know it looks like blurbed paragraphs... but i'm too lazy to go back and indent every single paragraph and so many of the sentences are long XD

Yukiko, now realizing that something had gone terribly wrong, relied on her acting skills to control the situation, although that didn’t seem to work well either.~Tacticalwolf “That was amazing you two! I didn’t think you guys were going to start working on practice script I gave you so soon!” Yukiko was trying to cover up the misunderstanding, and she could tell it had something to do with them talking separate from the whole cast, but she just wasn’t exactly sure what happened so she needed to be as indirect as possible. “Anyways you three continue practice later at home ok?” she asked with a smile. Shiho, noticing Yukiko and how she was trying to change everything around, went along with it quickly. “Thank you Kudo-kun, Mouri-san. You both were a great help in my practice. I can’t wait to finish up practice later. We can all go to Yukiko-san’s hotel room to finish alright?” she had a light smile on, as if nothing had happened. Ran and Shinichi hesitantly went along with it. They wanted the whole thing to be over with so as not to have to fret until they finished talking it out, but they knew that then and there was not the right place to discuss all of this. When things had cooled down, and the shooting was over, as they had decided earlier, they gathered in Yukiko and Yuusaku’s hotel room. “Now then, please, please, talk it out amongst yourselves, and if you need us, we’ll be outside the room ok?” asked Yukiko worriedly. “We understand,” said Shiho curtly, “and thank you for the help.” The two adults left the three young adults to set everything straight. “Now then, Kudo-kun, it’s time we sorted this all out,” said Shiho. He nodded his head slowly, and Ran prepared herself. She felt that something would go horribly wrong for her. “Shinichi, let’s start with your feelings towards Ran.” He nodded again but didn’t speak. “You said you were going to propose to her soon, but that was before you knew who I was. After you found out who I was, you faltered. You say you love me, but I’m not sure that is your true feelings.” He jolted slightly. He was hoping that maybe she was right, and that she would have an explanation for this mayhem. “You might only have these feelings because I disappeared on you. Now that you’ve seen me again, after believing I was dead for such a long time… you mistook those feelings of joy and relief, for feelings of love,” she explained. “That is possibility one.” Ran’s stomach lurched when Shiho said it was only a possibility, and that the way she said it seemed like there was more. Shinichi only sat silently, soaking in the words. “Possibility number two, is that you really do love me, but also love Ran. You have feelings for both of us and are torn between the two. You don’t know who you love more. Since you were able to talk more freely with me when we were… children, you were able to say your feelings to me easier than saying them to Ran.” When no one said anything, she continued with the third possibility. “And lastly, you might not love Ran like you thought you did, and have truly fallen for me. You might love Ran as your childhood friend, or like a sister or something, but you couldn’t fallen for me for real. Now, I don’t know which is true, but it is one of these options. You need to think hard and sort out your own feelings. During this time, Ran and I will wait in a separate room. You must think it over and come to us when you have sorted yourself out. Understand?” He nodded his head. He was still wrapping his mind around the three possibilities, and it seemed like it would take him a long while to figure everything out. Shiho headed towards the door with Ran. “We’ll be in Ran’s hotel room.” He nodded his head. ~Tacticalwolf When the door clicked shut, Shinichi fell back onto the bed. Everything was mind boggling, and he had no clue what to do about it. It was driving him insane. He had thought he had a grasp on his emotions, but this whole thing was just driving him insane. He didn’t know black from white, love from hate. He couldn’t do it. His mind was turning completely blank just trying to figure it out. Inside Ran’s room, Shiho, Ran, Yukiko, and Yuusaku sat in silence. After two hours passed, the door suddenly clicked open as Shinichi walked in. Everyone stood up, and waited for him to speak. Slowly, Shinichi walked over to Ran and hugged her. As they hugged, her eyes widened, and slowly Shinichi released her. Shiho had a smile on her face. “I’m glad you chose Ran. You two should be together.” Ran turned to Shiho with a sad and heartbroken smile on her face as a few tears streamed down her cheeks. “You’re wrong. He chose you after whispering in my ear, ‘I’m Sorry.’” Shiho’s eyes widened. Shinichi then turned to her and said, “It took me a long time. I… I wasn’t sure exactly what my feelings were. I thought back to a long time ago, before you faked your death. I thought about how I felt then when different events occurred. I noticed how the way I acted towards Ran had changed, and how the way I acted towards you changed as well. Possibility three. That’s what my feelings are. I love you, Shiho. To me, Ran is only my friend, but you’ve become a much bigger part of my life than I would ever have expected. You’re the one I want beside me.” Ran nodded with a sad smile. She seemed to have known it from long before, and had always hoped it wasn’t true. She had already come to terms with herself. She had prepared for the time when Shinichi would truly leave her. Shinichi wasn’t hers, and she didn’t want him to be her possession. She wanted his love, but knew it was hers to have. He was Shiho’s. Hesitantly, Shinichi walked towards her, and tilted her chin up to look her in the eyes. “Shiho,” he started slowly, “I love you.” “I love you too, Shinichi,” she whispered. ~Tacticalwolf A warm feeling shot through both of them as they brought their lips together gently, the soft electricity becoming an unforgettable memory. ~Kiel95 Ok everyone, I hope you enjoyed the final chapter... <3

c(^0^c) *hugs* of course I'll miss you! <3

don't die! then you won't be able to finish the rest of the story... and I'll miss you!!!!

ok then, i will patiently wait ^^ doo doo doo doo dooooooo... ok... i waited... GIMME DA CHAPTA! XD lawl jk, take your time ^^

get well soon! (Believe me, unlike wat i've already done... make ppl wait months for my final chapter.... i still havn't finished... i just truly don't know how i want to end it!!!)

it's ok so far... you could do a bit more to make it interesting... i was slightly confused as you jumped from Ran to conan... maybe spice up the letter from kaito a bit as well...

then that's good ^^ you've found something you can do!

no, not at all, i'm just too lazy to do something so complex, time consuming... and well... correctly XD

I think both should continue to be used... but that is until all hiragana and katakana are learned... then you can stop using romaji and just use them until we learn some kanji and such ^^ so use both romaji and hiragana for now (well that's what I personally believe) sorry i'm not really on this thread very much anymore.... i use Kaoko~chan's website if i want to catch up with anything.... it's easier than searching through the thread >w<

If you people need help, please don't hesitate to ask. I don't necessarily like typing exact and correct English, but I usually can do so well. Also, it isn't exactly improper to start a sentence with 'and' or 'but', although it is wrong to start with or, but then again, that could just be someone's writing style. For example, I start many sentences with those two words. That's only because my writing style requires that. Anyways, if you all ever need help with anything, I'll do my best to help, but even though English is my first language, it does not mean that I am super amazing at it. I'm only in 10th grade, I still have a few more years to go before I supposedly have learned all the grammar concepts of the English language. Well, good luck to you all, and SHINSHI FTW!

ya ok... i'm not gonna critique it like that ^^ it's great.. but... i'm starting to lose interest.... i've never been a huge fan of this sort of thing... it just sort of bugs me... and i don't think the concept of real magic exist in the conan world, though it does in the kaito world.... i dunno... i't losing interest... have haibara help them out... (make it shinshi XD well if you can) and i'd def keep readin.... it doesn't have to be shinshi, but if you add haibara that'd be enough...

i critique and edit stories if ppl need me too ^^ no offense, but if i had to critique this, i would say, take it a bit slowler... i think that everything is happening too fast... but either way it's quite good!

<3 it!!! can't wait for the next chapter! good luck! I'm rootin for you to do a great job and write an amazing story (Don't worry, your basically there already! amzingly awesome!)