Scar Akai

Like maybe: "Shiho... I...I should've listen to you...earlier.'Whispered shinichi as shiho was limping towards the exit. "No... Everything you choose is always the best." Cried shiho, trying to make shinichi know that she wasn't lying about her feelings towards him. Shinichi sighed as the scenes that happened that day started to flash into his mind. Earlier that day, Shinichi .....blablabla

Okok... I was just testing your respond . It is basically smooth but the story is a bit dtraight forward. You should've added a flashback right before you ended the chapter.

not bad. An error on the 3rd sentence//waited//

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Hahahaha... Too bad...I just ruined your 'perfect' plan.

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Boooo!

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Ergh... Actually, I don't feel that Akai or Ai is out of character. Ai is about to go and fight those he hated, she still has no idea whethere she should or not take the pill, whether people will hate her after she takes the pill, and most of all, whether he will lose her beloved one. In Akai's case, Akai might just be showing his detective skills. He is pretty much as good as Shinichi you know? They have the same things in mind and judging from all the cases with Akai, I consider him equally smart with Shinichi, though Shinichi is a bit, or let's say far worse when it comes to intelligence and knowledge about love. Haibara hating Akai?"And Jesus knew their thoughts, and said unto them, Every kingdom divided against itself is brought to desolation; and every city or house divided against itself shall not stand: And if Satan cast out Satan, he is divided against himself; how shall then his kingdom stand? " (Matthew 12:25-26).Haibara is smart and she knows that it isn't akai's fault.It is the black organisation's. For me, she is wise, and all that. Akai preparing breakfast? Why not? He could be able to simply scramble an egg, or make some noodles, or toasted bread and spread jam on it...

And won't shinichi have a headache if he marries Ran? She will cry for little things and if he says something wrong while comforting her, he is DEAD.

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But what happens if he kills us with his tricks???

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is wondering which book he slipped the note in...

Hahaha... and Kim Bauer. I love season 7 the most. So who knows that maybe Shiho will join CTU in the end.

good.I didn't expect her to be a celebrity of all things

Even if it get dubbed, it will be fan dubs.

...*speechless*...

more goodies? ok DC Podcast 3 (guessing that it will be here on sunday or next week)

Such as Tony A? Thinking whether it will end like 24 hours...

Shuu is a sniper, not a kidnapper. So, I guess that I'll borrow his neighbour house for a while while you go to his house :grin:

The time when She appeared behind Conan while holding his bowtie and asking whether he was looking for it.

wooo... Looking forward to it.

tHANKS! Reading the fanfic now...