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  1. Ch.17 Cont. (Meitantei, when you read this, I WANT TO TYPE THE LAST LAST CHAPTER, okay? Thank you. Just one question, do you really have a good singing voice?) My POV "Okay, come out. You've been caught!" Yuiki said. Conan, Heiji, and I came out. "Oops." we said. "Don't mind the small stuff Yuiki." I told her. "Besides, you've got a great singing voice" Heiji said. Conan and I nodded. "I just want ONE day away from Shiki..." Yuiki murmured. We heard the bell ring again. "Guess it's time to go back in, Shiki, Heiji, and Conan help me get the chocolates out of the fridge." Yuiki said. In CLASS "Okay class, with your chocolates in molds... 30 more minutes of explaining and doing. "Okay class, you've finished making a chocolate heart, now you can decorate with anything you like." "While you were making your chocolates I made a 'friendship' chocolate for everyone here." Yuiki said. Yuiki passed one out to everyone. "Hey Yuiki....my chocolate...it's...a little it different from the rest." I said to Yuiki. "Well...it's a special chocolate for detectives like you,Heiji, and Conan..." Yuiki said, her voice sounded irritated, like she was mad at me,Heiji, and Conan for coming.
  2. That last post was short Chapter 16 My POV 6:00 AM in the morning I woke up to the sound of a alarm clock going off. "Hey! Turn it offfffff..." said Heiji [who just...like died.]. I yawned, "wake up everyone, its time to go to learn how to make chocolates!!" "SO EARLY, LET US REST!" Conan and Heiji said at the same time. 1 hour later "OKAY! LETS GO VISIT EKODA HIGH!" said Conan and Heiji full of energy. "So tired...so tired." I said to myself. 40 Minutes Later at Ekoda High Conan and I saw the guest lockers while Heiji was walking around. We changed our shoes while Heiji was still walking around minding his own business. "So Heiji, what class is being taught how to make chocolates?" Conan asked. "Class...um, class 2-B." Heiji said forgetfully. "Who's teaching the class?" Conan asked. " I don't know." Heiji said. We walked in the halls for about 5 minutes and finally reached Class 2-B. From the doors I could hear words, "Bakaito" "Aohoko" (Another no-brainer, they're in class, arguing." Heiji was the first to step into the doors, "Hey is it really okay for us to be doing this?" I asked. "Probably." Heiji said. When Heiji opened the door, pencils and erasers flew at him. Erasers hit him in the eye. "HELLO EVERYONE, I'M YOUR SPECIAL GUEST'S SPECIAL GUEST! AND I HAVE SPECIAL GUESTS TOO!" Heiji announced. [What's with us being HIS special guests, he doesn't even live here. I thought to myself] Just when Heiji announced that I saw a familiar figure at the teacher's desk, then I recognized the figure, it was Yuiki. "Yuiki!" I said, "you're the special guest teaching them make the chocolates?!?" I was shocked. "Yeah, didn't I tell you?" she asked. "Nope." I responded. "Woah look, it's the Detective of the West and Co-Detective of the West, together in one PLACE!!!" some kids squealed. "AND LOOK! ITS...HE...he looks so COOL AND CUTE AND...I LOVE HIMMM" some girls screamed and squealed at me. "It's the Co-Detective of the East..." a boy said. "Ahem, SO! I am Ms.Shirohana's friend, call me Heiji." Heiji said. "And these are my friends, the little one is Conan, the other detective is...well you know him, he's Kageyama Shiki." Heiji said. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Kaito, Aoko, and Maki. "Do you guys even know how to make chocolates?" I whispered to Conan and Heiji. "No, we're just here to taste the chocolates the students make." Heiji whispered back. I could see Yuiki raging at the teacher's desk. "Shiki, can you come outside for a second?" she asked me. I nodded. "WHY ARE YOU HERE!?!?!" she demanded to know. "Heiji wanted to come to taste chocolates." I explained. [Man...Yuiki's scary.] Yuiki pulled out her staff, " I asked why YOU came here" she asked again [sO SCARY...SO SCARED....IM SORRY YUIKI!!!] "I wanted to learn how to make chocolates for the person I love." I responded. 5 minutes after Yuiki's Torture Time "Class, I will now begin explaining how to make chocolates." Yuiki said, her voice was a bit shaky. Yuiki made me stand next to her because this was the first time she taught a class, she was nervous.
  3. ahem.. Its me now.Anyways... Chapter 14 My POV (A/N Meitantei's post was...umm wrong... sorry for the confusing posts. (When I was telling Heiji and Conan I'm not from here) "Guys, I have to tell you something, Yuiki and I are not from here," I told Conan and Heiji, "Well of course ya ain't from here." Heiji said, "you're from Osaka!" "Shh" Conan said. "well, Yuiki and I are not from here, we're from...well...just...a different dimension, one day Yuiki and I were on the computers talking to each other and we wished we were with you guys, then a bright light appeared in both of our rooms and we were warped to the park where you guys found us. I feel that someone is controlling us, walking us into the path he or she wants. Conan and Heiji both nodded. "So...yeah." I said. "Now that we've solved this case, you guys should go back to Osaka." Conan suggested. "Now that I think about it...I got a case back in Osaka, the client asked for Mouri, so...I guess I will have to stay here..." Heiji said. "Hey! While we're here, lets go sightseeing, maybe first to Ekoda High, I heard they were getting someone to teach them how to make Valentine's cookies!" Heiji said. "Let's tell some stories! Detective stories!" I decided to say. "Okay, here's one for ya, there's a slight chance that it was a case that both of us worked together on." Heiji went into deep thought. "Hmmm.... Here's one. There was this poor family with a son in the hospital. The dad kidnapped a rich girl so the son could have surgery, but then we figured it out before da money exchange was made. The dad went to jail and a couple months after the surgery, the son died. The doctors said if it was done sooner, the son coulda survived. The mom had commit suicide one year after the son's death, leaving the brother all alone. I shot him a look, imitating Yuiki's signature glare. "Maybe. Hey, how old is the older brother now?" The brother was 13 when the younger kid died, and that happened 6 years ago, when we were 11. That was our fist case. So now the brother is 19." I groaned. "Are you kidding me? We have to deal with a 19 year old guy? Do you know those people are unpredictable?!?" Conan sweat-dropped. "THAT'S what you're worried about? What about your other family?" I replied. "Never mind. I'm sleepy. Let's figure this out tomorrow." (Last parts copied from Meitantei's Chapter 14) THE NEXT MORNING
  4. Special Chapter, Worlds Collide! My POV of the special Chapter: Worlds Collide! A/N Yuki asked me to do this...so!...yeah...hmm...okay!...i typed a whole blog just now... this has nothing to do with the story and the story i'm relating this story to, okay? "I'm home!" I said. "This isn't even your home..." Mouri murmured. "Freeloaders...five freeloaders..." Mouri murmured again. "Five?" I asked, " I thought there were only four, Amuro,Conan,Yuiki, and me." I said. "Amuro's got a friend, his name is Sparrow. (...I typed a whole blog im tired,ill continue tomorrow, for now enjoy the special chapter, as i will be working on more special chapters, i've been reduced, to a writer...now im just...a special writer.
  5. Continuation of the continuation of Chapter 12 MY POV (fine, this mystery shall end in this continuation.I just wanted to end it, sorry for the bad ending guys...) (At Danny's) "Miss! I want curry!" Conan said in his kid voice. "Okay okay, coming right up!" the waitress said. Out of the corner of my eye I saw 4 black figures in coats and hats. "Hey, Yuiki, I just saw 4 black figures in coats and hats, do you think there might be more than 1 kidnapper?" I whispered to Yuiki. "Probably, hey wait, I think I remember this scenario, remember in that DC episode where Shinichi's parents dressed up as people and "kidnapped" him?" Yuiki said. "Do you think that...my parents kidnapped themselves and left those notes, to see if I can solve the mystery?" I asked. I got up and walked to the table those 4 were at and said, "hi Mom, hi Dad, hi Mr.Kudo, hi Mrs.Kudo. One of the four took off their hat and pulled a gun out of their coat. [definitely not one of my parents or Shinichi's parents...] "Shiki!" Yuiki yelled, everyone at my table [yeah my table...] stood up to defend me. All of the four took off their hats and said, "idiot, you thought that we wouldn't have any firearms on us? You thought that we were PARENTS? We're NOT PARENTS we're a group of thugs! "Shiki, you idiot!" Yuiki yelled [hmm...Yuiki seems to yell a lot...] I brought out my tonfas i threw my STEEL tonfas at 2 of the thugs and took out another set of tonfas [yeah, I carry 3 sets of tonfas now.] I threw my STEEL tonfas at the last of the thugs, and they were knocked out. When I searched their bodies, I saw a note on them that said: The four of us have your parents, hint: they're in a dark place, with water in the middle of it, water dripping from above, and rats. "Guys! The note says that they're in a dark place with water in the middle of it and water dripping from above and there are rats." I told the rest of them. Conan and Heiji did their 'I figured it out!' look, "they must be at the sewers!" Heiji announced. 10 Minutes Later at the Sewers "Let's split up, there are forks in this place, Conan and Yuiki come with me!" I said, "I guess...this is the rest of us." Sonoko said, (the group was: Sonoko, Ran, and Heiji) My group took the left fork, there were lots of rats, Yuiki was scared of rats and held close to me, at the end of the fork was a single person,I couldn't see the face of the person, but when I got closer it was my mom, "this means...the end of the right fork has your dad!" Yuiki said. I untied my mom and asked, "are you okay?" We walked back to the entrance and waited for Sonoko's Group. Sonoko's Group "It's so scary down here..." Sonoko and Ran said, Sonoko and Ran both held tight to Heiji. "It feels like we've been walking forever!" Sonoko said. "Hey look! I see a person!" Ran announced. Their group untied my Dad and went back to the entrance. "My uncle is setting up another gala, do you guys want to come? The gala is in...4 weeks." Sonoko told us. All of us nodded. Yuiki got embarrassed by Kaito last time, she was mad angry to get revenge.
  6. Chapter 12 (WOAH SO MANY CHAPTERS TODAY The Ordeal in Osaka My POV (A/N I will make this moderately long) (Osaka 2 days before Valentine's Day) After the bell rang, I walked home with Kazuha and Heiji, "So..soooo, who are ya going ta give chocolates to, Kazuha?" Heiji asked. Kazuha blushed, "obviously you, dummy." Kazuha responded. "Sooooooooooooooooo...who are ya going to give chocolates to, Shiki?" Heiji and Kazuha said in unison. "I don't know..." I told them. [The truth is...I don't like anyone...except maybe her...] I blushed. "You've gotta have someone! OH! I know who LOVES you...I also know you love her back, Yu-I-Ki...that's who you like." Kazuha said. When she said this I ran away as fast as I could to my house. I didn't know it before I came back to Osaka, but apparently I have parents and a house! 5 MINUTES LATER "Mom, Dad! I'm home!" I yelled. I walked around, but I didn't find them. "Mom? Dad?" I couldn't find them. [it's! DEDUCTION TIME! I thought to myself] [Okay, let's see, their car is the driveway, so that means they either walked somewhere...or they were kidnapped.] I walked around some more and found a note: Mommy and Daddy have to leave now. [Okay...weird, but this means they were kidnapped, they never referred to themselves as 'Mommy' or 'Daddy'] When I entered my room I saw a note on my bed, it read: You took all that I loved...I shall now take all of what you love! [This means that all my friends are going to be kidnapped, that means...Yuiki!!] [Heiji and Kazuha will be fine] I found all possible notes, i looked everywhere for them, the notes read: 1.First note: Mommy and Daddy have to leave now. 2:You took all that I loved...I shall now take all of what you love! 3. When you find this note I will have already reached a friend. 4. You can find your parents at a place. 5. Mommy and Daddy has left you a message on the phone if you're lonely. The message on the phone was "HELP ! HELP! We're in a..." I heard dripping water in the background, rats, and rusty things. (At Teitan) "Yuiki! I have a MAJOR problem" I told air, I noticed Yuiki wasn't there walking home with Ran and Sonoko. "Calm down, you look like you've been running, now, what's the problem?" Ran asked very calmly. "The problem is, my parents have been kidnapped, and my friends are going to die off 1 by 1 and the kidnapper gives me no clues as to who he will kill next. So I thought about you first and came here, I also told Kazuha and Heiji to come." I explained. "Let's go to the detective agency, a place where we can assemble everyone!" 5 MINUTES LATER "EVERYONE! WE HAVE A MAJOR BIG GIGANTIC PROBLEM!" I announced. I noticed that one person wasn't here, Mouri. "He started already..." I murmured. "Okay, there was this person, a kidnapper and murderer who kidnapped my parents, he left notes around the house," I said, I passed out the notes, "he said he would kill my friends and family off 1 by 1, so I came here with Kazuha and Heiji, I noticed Mouri was missing, he's got to him." I also noticed Yuiki wasn't here. "Where's Yuiki!?!" I demanded to know. "She walked home by herself, she said she had a lot of preparing to do." Ran explained. "She's not safe...the killer can get to her any time! Let's go to Yuiki's house, follow me!" I said. 10 MINUTES LATER "How do you know where Yuiki lives?" Sonoko asked me. "Um, because, she um, told me?" I said. We entered Yuiki's house and we found her there, I sat down on the couch with her and explained what was happening.
  7. Okay,Justin, I will try to make this chapter long...I mean very long... Chapter 1 of The Story of Conan (Past) "H-h-h-hey! What are you doing to me?!?!?!" Kid said. "We're just taking care of you, kid." (A/N not Kaito Kid, but just the word kid.) I felt something go down my mouth, and some water...then I was knocked out. (Present) "Mouri! I have something to tell you and Ran." I told Mouri, "what, brat?" Mouri said back. "As you two know, Conan and I are from America. We both lost our parents in a car accident, both of our cars hit each other. What I didn't tell you is the next part about that, about why we even decided to come to Japan, we came because, both of us were being bullied in school after our parents had died. We weren't being bullied because we were stupid or orphans or anything like that, Conan and I...we're prodigies, Conan and I...we have an IQ of over 400. We didn't tell you because of reasons, we have reasons not to tell you anything, or no, Conan has reasons not to tell you anything. Would you like me to tell you why I am telling you this?" they nodded. "I CAN'T STAND BEING A KID, let me tell you this, in America... TO BE CONTINUED BY SOME OTHER GUY!
  8. Continuation of the Continuation of Chapter 10 (just so you guys know, I am witing three stories at once, this chapter might not be as long) (I'm sorry Yuki! I can't do a long chapter right now! GO TYPE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!...GOOD LUCKKKK â™ ) My POV I noticed there was a helicopter in the sky, "STOP NOW KAITO KID AND FRIEND!" the guy in the helicopter said. When we finally reached the roof, Maki took something out of her pocket, it looked like a gun, "WHATEVER YOU DO, DON'T FIRE THAT GUN, FRIEND OF KAITO KID!" guy in helicopter said. I could see Kaito and Maki clearly now, she WAS holding a gun, I decided the best choice was to tackle her, "you can tackle Kaito, I know you like him." I whispered to Yuiki. "I DON'T LIKE KAITO KID!" she yelled in my ear while blushing. "Just tackle him! Okay, 1...2...3! GO" I yelled. I tackled Maki while Yuiki tackled Kaito was too fast to be tackled by Yuiki, Kaito moved like a panther while Yuiki moved like a frog, I couldn't catch Maki, at least I pulled on her shoes when she tried to dodge, she fell off the roof..."I'm not really sure if she died." and when I look down I see a hang glider and Maki's face, smirking at me. "THANK YOU YOU TWO!" Guy said. (A/N if you don't know, Guy is the guy in the helicopter or guy in helicopter. I keep shortening his name...) "Put down the Ocean Princess, Kaito Kid!" Conan said. "Oh? You want the Ocean Princess? I have two! Which one do you want?" Kaito said. "Two?!?!?" Conan, Yuiki, and I exclaimed. "Yes, two, I picked the other up on the way out here." he told us, "show us both Ocean Princesses!" I demanded. "Sure, look!" he showed us...the real Ocean Princess and...Ran, tied up and unconscious. "Let her go!" Conan lost it. "So, you pick this one?" Kaito asked us, "No...but yes...we want BOTH Ocean Princesses!" I told him. Conan readied his soccer ball and, wristwatch, while I readied my tonfas and Yuiki readied her staff. "Calm down, ladies and gentlemen. The show is only beginning so sit down and watch." Kaito said very calm and cocky.
  9. I want to run away from Kjeldahl

    1. Kjeldahl

      Kjeldahl

      Ahhh I thought we were friends D:

    2. A L

      A L

      Well, you've got some explaining to do Key. *readies soccer ball*

    3. theownerer

      theownerer

      Me and Kjeldahl are frands now (frands= friends)

      so put the soccer ball...um away Alca

  10. okay...um, Continuation of Chapter 9 And going on to chapter 10! O O ("U-U-us?!?!") My POV l l ("YOU TWO!") O l l "The culprit is...YOU PEOPLE" I pointed to ALL OF THEM!(I pointed to Sawada and Rokudo) l/ l "LEMME EXPLAIN!" I said, "Sawada and Rokudo both killed her, Rokudo strangled her while Sawada chloroformed her." Rokudo and Sawada fell to the ground and said, "she...was a devil she was a demon, she always spread rumors and things about us that weren't true, she deserved to die." "No human deserves to die of a murder, no matter how evil or devilish." Megure said. The culprits were arrested. CHAPTER 10 "Hey, let's go see the ballroom next."Sonoko said. We walked towards the room in front of us. "Why is there a ballroom in a gala? What is a gala..." Yuiki asked very...um...curiously. "A gala, IS A FANCY PLACE PUT TOGETHER BY A FANCY MAN FOR A FANCY REASON!." Sonoko said. "Um, Yuiki a gala is a showoff of many different items, but there is usually a really valuable item. "A gala has a ballroom for people to be dancing and entertained in, and it has the main part, the showcasing." I explained. When we entered the ballroom, we didn't expect it to be so grand, there were fountains, lots of chandeliers, no one could have described it. We saw people already there, some guy came up to Yuiki and asked, "hey, wanna dance?" Yuiki blushed and said "sure." "I'm gonna keep a close eye on that guy, just to make sure he doesn't do anything suspicious to a person or people..." I said (stalker mode...ON) 10 minutes later (I love going ten minutes later) I was getting tired of watching the guy, when I was about to give up he did something suspicious, he put his hand into his pocket and his thumb pressed something. A girl came up to me and asked, "wanna dance?" "UH UH...UH....SURE...." I responded like a total fool. She was so cute and beautiful. "So, what's your name?" I asked while keeping an eye on Yuiki. "Hey...you're not paying attention to me..." the girl said in a very cute voice. "My name is Midorikawa Maki." she said. I danced with her, while inching closer and closer to Yuiki, "Yuiki wanna dance?" I asked her. her face went total red, "s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-sure..." she responded. I cut in and took her hand. "So, who were you just dancing with." I asked, "a boy." she responded. "Well... you were dancing with Kid." I said. We danced for another couple minutes, then Yuiki asked, "who was the girl you were dancing with?" "Mirdorikawa Maki" I responded. "Hey, remember the time, when boring-freak said something about always have wanting a name like Midorikawa Maki?" she asked me. "I don't know, I don't stalk your conversations, stalking is a crime!" I said. "But secretly I knew. I knew that Meitantei will want to meet boring-freak, and I will have to tag along..." I thought to myself "Hey Shiki, let's go find Maki, I can't wait to talk to her." she said. "I knew it..." I thought to myself. 5 Minutes Later o o o We felt like we were running around in a circle, "hey look I see her!" I said and pointed. l l--- l l l l We were running to meet her, but then the lights went off, completely off.
  11. Continuaton of Chapter 8 (this is the only chapter that I will be naming...we...I mean...unless meitantei wants to name one...) (Meitantei...I want to make a chapter as long as yours.) MY POV In the limousine, I asked what was being used as the bait for Kaitou, Sonoko said, "a (A/N HELP ME MEITANTEI I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO FOR THIS...-GOES TO CORNER AND CRIES-) is being shown." 1 hour later. We arrived at the gala, but it wasn't as grand as usual, "I wonder if he's running out of money." I whispered to Yuiki, "just so you know, don't whisper in my ear it tickles, and yeah he's probably running out money." Yuiki said. "So...when someone whispers into your ear it tickles, that's interesting..." I said. Yuiki flicked out her staff, "don't even think about it." she glared at me. I backed away, "lets go inside everyone!" Sonoko said. "Saved..." I said to myself. "So where is this thing at?" Ran asked. "We can't go in, the entrance is blocked by several inferred lasers, the whole room has traps on the ceiling that if you step into the room in the center or left center or right center it active all on you. The floor has a trap that if you get to the holding place, several swords come out from the back of the room and side of the room, but it won't harm the thing, because 2 swords on the left and right side are not long enough to reach it, plus we can't turn these things off until they're all activated and used." Sonoko responded. "Sonoko, where's the bathroom?" Yuiki asked. "straight from here." she responded. " Want me to give you a tour of the place?" Sonoko asked. We nodded. 10 minutes later "Hey, guys, Yuiki isn't back yet, maybe she got lost." I said. "Then go look for her!" Sonoko yelled, "from here, the bathrooms are behind us, we passed it 9 minutes ago." Sonoko said. I left to find Yuiki, I had reached the bathrooms, and went into the ladies bathroom. Inside, I found feet on the ground in one of the stalls, and I thought that was Yuiki, but when there was no flush, I went into the stall, but before that! I COVERED MY EYES! I DIDN'T WANT TO BE CALLED A PERVERT! Inside the stall wasn't Yuiki, but some woman. "TO DO THIS I UNCOVERED MY EYES! SHE HAD NO PANTS ON!" I said very loudly. "Hm, guessing from this she's probably 24, rigor mortis started, so she's probably been dead for 3 hours." I felt her arms, her legs, her feet, her face. "Where's Yuiki..." I said. Someone opened the door of the woman's bathroom, it was Yuiki. Her face was stunned, "S-Shiki... what are you doing in here?" She asked. "Ummm, looking for you?" I said. "Pervert. Pervert. Pervert. Pervert. Pervert. Pervert. Pervert. Pervert." She said, she whipped out her staff and hit me 10 times. "Y-y-Yuiki...there's been a murder..." I said, still hurting from the beating I got. I was blocking her view of the victim. so I went out and she went in. "So...did you look at anything on her?" she asked. "Yeah I felt -" I said, cut off by Yuiki, "YOU FELT WHAT?" Yuiki asked, enraged. She whipped out her staff again and hit me 30 times. "I felt...her arms, legs, feet, her face." I said. "IM AMAZING NOT TO FAINT AFTER 40 HITS COUGH...Yuiki...you fainted so easily -laughs-" I thought to myself, I thought I thought that to myself, but I said it out loud. "Shiki...do you want to die?" She hit me again 30 times. "HOW ARE YOU NOT DYING?" She demanded to know. "Back off, Yuiki..." I said "there's been a murder." "Go get Conan and Ran and...um, what was her name?" I said, "oh yeah Sonoko!" "They should be up ahead somewhere, Sonoko is giving a tour of the place." I said.
  12. I want to cry in the corner...

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    2. MeitanteiSnow

      MeitanteiSnow

      Wait! I know why you're crying, it was in the "Leaping into Detective Conan" story you posted on earlier, when you put in your POV!!!

    3. theownerer

      theownerer

      GOOD JOB!

      THAT WAS NOT APART OF MY POV

    4. MeitanteiSnow

      MeitanteiSnow

      Okay.... Never mind, then....

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  13. Continuation of chapter 7 My POV "The criminal is......YOU!" Heiji points his finger to Lily. "You see," I said, "Lily was in her room from 3:05 to 3:15, from her room it only takes 2 minutes to reach the breaker, it takes 1 min to get in to the correct room, it takes 2 min to kill Yuki, and trying to knock out Jack, it takes 2 min to carry outside, after Jack left it takes 3 min to get back to her room." (sorry if this didn't make sense, the one who chose the murderer was meitantei. below is what I would have said) "The criminal is...YOU!" Heiji points his finger to Jack. "You see, Jack was with Yuki the whole time, Jack was helping Lily kill Yuki, their motives were, Yuki gambled using their money, she kept using it over and over until they had no money, and with that money, she lost it all." "Jack and Lily, you murdered Yuki, Jack was next to Yuki while Lily was in the room next to the breaker, when they reached the breaker, Lily came out and put her hand over Yuki's mouth and Jack stabbed her. Jack then carried her outside, while Lily was oiling the doors downstairs. Jack tried to make himself look like he put up a fight against the murderer. Jack carried her back inside and went to Haruna." Conan said. The police took Jack and Lily away. "I can't believe they were the murderers...I can't believe Jack and mom...killed Yuki, but I still can't believe Yuki gambled with their money..." Haruna said.
  14. Okay...Meitantei and I put our detective brains together and deduced you guys didn't care, so .............................................................im writing the next chapter...in a few hrs, dont post meitantei
  15. Clues. 7. The Alibi of Jack and Haruna (I dont think anyone typed Jack's alibi yet, so, lets see... Before the time of the crime, he was upstairs and downstairs fixing things, there was not a moment where it was quiet. Haruna was in the kitchen the whole time. At the time of the crime Jack was with Yuki, at the time of the crime Haruna was still in the kitchen. ALSO, I AM SO SAD NONE OF YOU GUYS FIGURED OUT WHY IN THE CHAPTER B4 THIS I SAID, "You have to come downstairs, Haruna says she needs you." I said. TO THE PARENTS! feel free to pm either me or meitantei about the murderer, cuz I won't continue till someone gets it right or close to being right also feel free to pm me about the ABOVE thing in all caps. TELL ME WHY I SAID THAT TO THE PARENTS
  16. Continuation of the Continuation of the Continuation of Chapter 6 (I lost myself after the second continuation, I didn't know what to title this) (Um Meitantei, just so you know in Continuation of Ch.6, the scene wasn't outside, it was inside near the breaker...in the house...) (A/N I had to go to school i didn't finish it, MEITANTEI FINISH IT FOR MEEE...) Still my POV When Yuiki and I got downstairs, I noticed that Conan and Heiji were already down here. "Took ya guys long enough, we checked and there were no doors that sounded screechy." Heiji said. "This is what I imagine happened, the culprit came out of the door near the breaker, the door made the screech noise, the culprit put his or her hand on Yuki's mouth to silence her, then stabbed her. The culprit then attacked the husband,but failed. The culprit hid until the husband had left, the culprit then proceeded to oil door hinges to make it not seem suspicious that only one was oiled." said Conan. "Gather everyone, I know the culprit!" said Heiji and Conan at the same time. When everyone was in the kitchen, Conan knocked Mouri out. "Yuiki and I still don't know what happened!!" I whispered to Conan, he told me. "don't worry." "So, everyone is here right?" Heiji said. "No, my mother and father aren't here." Haruna said. "Well,I think I will go get them." I said, "which room are they in?" I asked. "They're in the very first room you will meet." Haruna said. I went up the stairs and entered the first room and found them. "You have to come downstairs, Haruna says she needs you." I said. (A/N, if any of you guys can figure out why I said this, you get a....um...GOOD JOB, and you get to be called A TRUE DETECTIVE!) The parents followed me downstairs, when we went into the kitchen, Heiji immediately asked "what are ya names? Where were ya guys the whole time?" "Calm down, my name is John Walker, my wife's name is Lily Walker." (I will put it in italics every time someone is speaking in English, I'm typing in English so...I put italics!...) "I see..." the investigator said. "Where were you at the time of the crime?" I asked. "I was out in the garden at 2:05-3:05 PM." he said. "You forgot to tell us the time of death." I whispered to Yuki. "The time of death was 3:10 PM." "AND WHERE WERE YOU AT THE TIME OF THE CRIME?!"Yuiki asked excitedly. "I was knitting, in my room from 3:05-3:15. I hadn't even known someone died."
  17. Continuation of the Continuation of Chapter 6! Theownerer/Shiki's POV (A/N this part will be very funny...Also, I only posted a bit, Meitantei do not post because I will be adding more, I just...have to go for a few hours) "Take Yuiki to a room." Conan said. I nodded. "This house is a labyrinth..." I murmured to myself. When I had finally found Yuiki's room, I thought that maybe I should stay with Yuiki, in case any of those thugs were still here. (10 minutes later) (Sheesh Yuiki, you take a long time to wake up) When Yuiki woke up, I heard her make strange noises, I then asked her, "do you make strange noises every time you wake up?". "no, it's just when I am very cold, I didn't feel very cold earlier." she replied, then she looked at her clothes, they were different. "Hey, did you do anything to me while I was asleep?!?!" she asked very angrily, "No I didn't, I didn't change your clothes, the maids insisted on changing your clothes while I stepped outside. Yuiki sighed..."So,you're saying, you didn't peek?" she asked, "Yeah,no window on the door, if I were to open the door it would make a loud sound, like a screeching sound, here look." I opened the door a tiny crack and it made such a loud screeching sound, almost like a screaming sound! "Wait, maybe...the screaming sound that Haruna heard was, the door opening where the murderer was hiding, and on the second flicker, the murderer came and hit Yuki!" "You have a good point, but this is upstairs." Yuiki said, "um, then lets check downstairs for any rooms near the breaker that is like this..." I said
  18. Chapter 6 Theownerer/Shiki's POV (A/N i been away so long...well anyways...this is the next chapter...in such a long time...Meitantei did such a long chapter, I can't compete with that.) "I'm going to go find a bar after I solve this case...and then..." Mouri murmured, then he started laughing. "Haruna, can you tell us what the case is?" I asked, "sure, the thing is, my sister was murdered, and written on her body, it said, 'I shall come again to murder, there is no one who can stop me because I am, the smartest one of all!' " she responded. "Mouri-san, do you think you can solve this case?" Haruna asked, no response, "Mouri?" she asked again. "He's just sleeping." Ran said. All of our faces went blank. "Okay, here we are! This is the site of the murder, also this is where you'll be sleeping." Haruna said. "Uh...sleeping? Isn't this where a murder occurred?" Kazuha and Ran asked very scared. "Yeah it is, but you'll be sleeping out back" Haruna said. Just then I caught a glimpse of a shadow running very fast. "Yuiki, did you just see that?" I asked her, "see what?" she replied. "A shadow running fast!" I said, "a shadow, are you going crazy now?" she replied. "Heiji." I said, "What ya want?" he replied. "Okay lets go in everybody, you'll have to introduce yourself to the inspector and policemen there, they don't know you." Haruna said "Lets talk later." Heiji said "I AM THE GREAT MOURI KOGORO!!!" said Mouri as soon as he entered, and then he saw, a girl with no clothes on, his nose started bleeding."Hey! what are you doing! Don't take off my sisters clothes like that!" Yuiki tried to cover my eyes before I looked, but...yeah...Ran covered Conan's eyes as fast as she could. The investigators barely looked up, they didn't really care. "Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you the rest of the case." Haruna said. "Okay, on the night of the murder, it was raining and my grandmother claimed she saw a shadow outside, then lightning hit the electric lines and some other things. The power went out, so I sent my sister to go to the breaker, but she claimed that she heard footsteps other than ours and was too scared to go by herself, so I sent my husband, Jack Kintamaro with her (A/N I forgot to say the sister's name, it's Yuki Kintamaro). They had reached the breaker, but there was a scream, then the power flickered back on, then off, it continued until, there was no power. My husband came back with bloody hands and was carrying Yuki, he claims someone tried to knock him out.
  19. Continuation of Chapter 3 - Shiki's point of view Mouri, Heiji, and Conan had already left. "Wow you two! Those were nice moves, Yuiki, where did you get that staff from?" said Kazuha and Ran. "I'm not really sure..." Yuiki responded. When I looked in my backpack again, I saw something besides the IPhone, books, paper, and manga, but I was confused, when I looked through it last time, it wasn't in there. What I saw were two tonfas, both silver! "Hey, Yuiki come here" I said. "Yeah?" she responded, "look at this, I found two tonfas in here that weren't in here last time I checked it, maybe you should check your backpack again too." I said. When Yuiki came back, I saw his backpack open, but didn't see another weapon. "Hey, lets fight again, lets test out these weapons, attack me." Yuiki said. "It feels like I have used these before." I said, "well of course, not everything in DC is normal" Yuiki said. "Lets start!" I said I charged at Yuiki when I reached hem, before I could strike, from hes sleeve he brought out a weapon. (Theownerer's note, I don't know how tonfas work, I dont know how to use tonfas, I don't know how to hit someone with tonfas...I'm sorry lol) "Hey...what's with all these sleeve weapons?" I asked. "i don't know...I just like them in my sleeve because that's very cool for it to be in sleeves!" Yuiki said as she was dodging from side to side getting closer, but then she stopped...she needed to rest after doing side hops. "Um, is there something wrong with you?" I asked. I swung the tonfas at Yuiki as she was resting and it hit. She did a backflip, and we charged at each other, she missed because her weapon is horrible. "Ran, do you know where Conan and Heiji went off to?" Yuiki asked, "hey! Why didn't you ask me?" Kazuha asked, "because, I could have asked you or Ran, but I chose Ran." Yuiki said. "They went to Osaka for a case, I think they already almost solved it but...you can go if you want, I'll give you the address." Ran said, giving me a piece of paper. "Thank you" I said as I walked away with Yuiki. "Okay let's see this paper was quickly written on over and over, Yoko~ Yoko~ Yoko~ Yoko~ Yoko~ " I said.
  20. Theownerer/Shiki's POV "is there something wrong with you two?" asked Ran. Kazuha added, "yeah, there must be somethin' wrong with ya two.". I quickly called Meitantei over for a quick conversation. I asked, "hey hey...are we really in the world of detective conan?" he responded "yeah...uh...I think we are." [This is really weird...] "um...okay, so what are we doing here?" I asked. Heiji responded, "don't ya remember? I came here because I was bored back in Osaka, so I came here to visit Conan." "Yuiki can you come here for a moment?" I asked, "yeah sure" she responded. "so what should we do now, should we tell them that, we don't know what's going on?" I asked. "I think we should wait for now" Yuiki answered. "Yeah I agree" I said When we got back, I saw another figure speaking to the four friends, and saw that it was Mouri, they were talking about something and I could faintly hear it. "Yuiki I think they're talking about something, I think they're saying, (hey ................................... someone got ........ , I think the area is........................................should we go now?" Mouri asked, "Well.................it's a ........................ so it's gotta be ........................ we should go!" Heiji said.) ." "I think it might be serious, let's follow" I said. "Wait...we don't want to get involved in murders, if we solve the case and get the murderer in jail...we might be on his list!" Yuiki said "But don't you remember, even if we're on his list, we will return to the real world!" I said. "Shiki, fine, let's go to the crime scene, but ...we've stood here a long time, they already left..." Yuiki said. "oh yeah...I just noticed that...um, yeah we should probably not get involved now" I said. As Yuiki and I walked away, we heard a scream from far away. I didn't know why, but I had a backpack on me, and somehow it held a kendo sword, so I took out the sword and prepared to fight if he or she had a weapon, we rushed to where the person had screamed, when we arrived we noticed it was Ran, being held captive, but she wasn't using karate. I didn't know why she wasn't using karate, but Heiji and I got out our swords and started charging at the kidnapper, I noticed that I was extremely skilled in kendo, but didn't even know the first thing about a sword in the real world. I heard horrible singing and looked behind me, Yuiki was singing and Yuiki's horrible singing was making the kidnapper put his hands to his ears and drop Ran. So, Heiji and I charged in and started hitting him with the kendo sword.
  21. I am just going to start this back up again...uh, I like to write about murders, a lot.
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