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Valkyrie

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  1. Valkyrie

    *fires gun*

    BANGBANGBANG!!! x a million

  2. Valkyrie

    Alright! This is what we do!

    1. Slash him with sword

    *slash Kid with sowrd*

    2. Throw a bomb at him

    *throw bomb. Kid blasted hundred feet into the air.

    3. Shoot with any long range weapons you can get.

    *shoot with guns and bow and arrows.*

    That's our plan! XD

  3. Valkyrie

    *Throws a bomb at Kid*

  4. Valkyrie

    Yep! :D We need as much weapons and as much yoghurt as we can get! XD

  5. Valkyrie

    *battlecry*

    AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

    CHAAAARGE!!!

    @Kid: You will. Everyone dies. XP

  6. Valkyrie

    YEAH! XD We borrowed many weapons from the B.O! Cindy-chan, let's do this thing!

    *prepares bombs*

    *checks guns*

    READY?~

  7. Valkyrie

    YEAH!!!

    That's what'll happen!

    Us: Hey Big Boss.

    Anokata: *silent*

    Us: We are borrowing some of your C-4 (bombs)

    Anokata:*silent* Go ahead.

    Us: Thanks dude!

    Anokata: No problem.

    MUAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA!

  8. Valkyrie

    Goodluck fixing the story! :)

    And we want to kill Kid cos he ate all the yoghurt and hurt Cindy! XP

  9. Valkyrie

    Talking to Cindy and planning on how to kill KtPt. XP

  10. Valkyrie

    YEAH! The B.O won't mind!

    *the convo*

    Us: Hey guys!

    Gin: *jumps up pointing gun at us* Who are you two?!

    Us: Just girls who want to kill Kid.

    Gin: Oh... Kid? Go ahead, take whatever you need.

    XP~~XP~~

  11. Valkyrie

    It still has some mistakes. Correct them and you have to describe more. Like how you jump and the police got entangled in a huge mess. Every little detail is important so add it in. :) You are doing great so don't worry!

  12. Valkyrie

    Yeah! Like how vampires can get killed by a wooden stake!! XP Get ready Kid!!! XD

  13. Valkyrie

    Let's go! :D We can steal a gun or two on the way to Kid's. XP How dare he hurt you??? I'll chop him up to small pieces!!!

  14. Valkyrie

    Alright! :)

  15. Valkyrie

    Definition of immortal: Doesn't age and never gets sick. (Oxford Dictionary and yes, I remembered XP)

    That don't mean you can't get killed!!! XD

    *raise chainsaw*

  16. Valkyrie

    Yeah! XD I got a chainsaw! What weapons do you have?

  17. Valkyrie

    I'm back! XD

    *picks up chainsaw and turn it on*

    And I am hungry!!!

  18. Valkyrie

    *revived*

    @Cindy:Thanks! :) Now lets' kill Kid!!! XD

    @Kid: I'm back and I'm hungry for revenge!

  19. Valkyrie

    .....Hades wants to keep me for his pet....

    ~Messaged from Hades' palace.

  20. Valkyrie

    I'm dead. I don't need to eat and drink.

    ~Messaged from the Underworld

  21. Valkyrie

    You love yoghurt too? That's great! But sadly, Kid ate them all already...

    ~Messaged from the underworld

  22. Valkyrie
    No problen Annie-chan! It's better now so just work on the description alright. Oh yeah, a few more mistakes: I don't know what that's supposed to be but I guess it should be 'shot'. It's gasped. Add in the are. This part still have their tenses problem: The paragraphing needs to be fixed (italics) as well as the tenses. The bold 'Lucky' should be luckily. That's as much as I can pick up now. Make the story more descriptive so it adds more 'feel' to the story. Good luck!
  23. Valkyrie

    me dies

    *gone*

    X.X

  24. Valkyrie

    me vomits.

    me go to mall to look for yoghurt.

    XP

  25. Valkyrie

    me is mad. No food and no water.

    *takes gun*

    *points it at Kid*

    Gimme the food. And the water as well.

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