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Miss Smiles

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  1. ... I've return home, I went to department store during 2 oclock.
  2. Can't be helped.... my muse's dead.

  3. Last chance!!! Title and link of artwork must send in to get into slot!! Your message will bounce back if you didn't, but make sure you send in title and artwork. Hurry! Two days to go!
  4. Last chance for people to join in competition!! To those had not create finalized title, send in on last day to get in the slot before submission closes! Title is required and your lifeline to be official participant!

  5. (???) maybe I write wrong. my first time writing full sentence...
  6. Next chapter will coming up soon!! Keep your fingers cross.
  7. Missing detective chapter 3 is up.

  8. Disclaimer: I don't own characters as they belong to Gosho! CHAPTER 3- Shocking news One hour later Heiji was looking furiously at the person who was cowering away from his glare. The kidnapper peeked upwards at him, but jerked away his gaze and head. ‘I already said the kid wasn’t here,’ the kidnapper said with calm voice, which infuriated Heiji more to grab his collar and shoved him up against the wall. ‘Calm down Hattori!’ Kogoro said, feeling exasperated to see recent event will lead to disaster he wished not to foresee. ‘This does not help since Kaitou Kid has beat to us, find this guy; and Conan was missin'.’ When heard Conan was missing colours drained away from Heiji’s face, he let his hands slackened; the kidnapper took this opportunity yank off his hands off to make a dash to escape when he leapt forward. However, Ran wasn’t taking these chances lightly for him; she gave a swing of kick right onto his face, he stumbled as he howled in pain when few teeth flew out and lie on the ground embracing himself. At that moment they heard the silent blare and footsteps, and handcuffs locked around the wrists which responsible of Conan’s kidnapping. ‘Well Conan has escaped, is he? Where can he be?’ Ran asked anxiously. ‘I bet anything it was Kaitou Kid takin' him away to Mouri’s agency,’ Heiji replied. ‘Ran, you return home to let us know if he’s there. I stay around here as he may be nearby.’ Ran nodded and without ado, brisk away to direction where she will be heading home. ‘Mouri, Edogowa-kun wasn’t here and we will keep on searching for him,’ Megure said when he appeared beside Kogoro, receive a response of nod, and pat Kogoro’s shoulder to reassure him. ‘Kaitou Kid was the first who calls us with fake voice, does he?’ Sato said as she scribbled fast on her notebook. ‘And he beats me to it,’ Heiji growled, looked annoyed as if his look can aim to kill any person who wants contradict him. ‘This is detective’s work. What he did is cheating.’ ‘He’s Kaitou Kid-‘ Kogoro’s weak smile hovering, but he end up having his eardrums shaking like earthquake when Heiji screamed. ‘THIS IS BIG DEAL! MY EFFING BUSINESS IS NOT FER KAITOU DORK TO INTERFERE SINCE FIRST PLACE HE USE COMPASS SPEC AND IT SHOULD BE A RULE FOR DETECTIVE SHOULD’T USE FER DETECTIVE WORK! WE NEARLY SPEND ONE HOUR TO FIND HERE N NOW CONAN WAS MISSING N; NO ONE KNOWS WHERE HE IS NOW!!!’ ‘Calm down detectives! We’re still working!’ Takagi tried to calm them down, but effect was working; Heiji gritted his teeth and walked away from them, sulking. ‘We still can find him.’ ‘Easier said than done,’ Heiji said irritably. ‘Let’s be optimistic a bit?’ Takagi looked at them with his anxious look. ‘Let’s assume the Kid, I mean the Kaitou Kid, he has found Conan and did take him back to agency, it will be good news, right?’ ‘Let’s hope Ku-Conan is right beside Kaitou Kid or I make sure he screwed up when I figure out who is he.’ he sneered when emphasizing on last of the sentence. ‘Okay, it’s my confession time.’ Familiar voice was heard above them, and all detectives including police one looked up in time found Kaitou Kid glancing down at them, Heiji noticed he was alone and his fears confirmed. ‘He wasn’t with me, but this doesn’t give you right to hunt me down Mr. Osakan tantei.’ ‘Or you’re scared to have me hunt you down? Don’t forget I’m still detective, I’m capable of findin' out who yer are under my watch 'ere in Tokyo.’ Heiji glared as he was shaking his fist. ‘I have no doubt, but doesn’t it leave to Nakamori’s jurisdiction for catching me?’ ‘I have no doub' yer don’t know me better. As Hattori Heiji, I don’t care will I make my parents angry over mah stay here, but I know yer are the twit need spanking with mop.’ ‘You have bad sense of humour,’ Kaitou Kid said sarcastically. ‘No. one. Ever use the mop on me.’ Heiji can feel reproach look come from Satou. ‘Now back to topic about Conan. He’s now at somewhere we don’t know about, I have strong feeling he may return to where he was missing in case he thought you both may search for him.’ ‘I can figure that out as well, Mr. Obvious.’ Heiji crossed his arms together with bored look. ‘Then why are you here?’ he asked curtly. ‘I’m letting you know Conan may not be there if you come late. He needs you and Ran by his side,’ he said, and his tone surprised Heiji, who looked up at him with confusion. ‘You go and see, you will understand. Bye!’ In a puff of smoke, he disappeared in the air which looked seemingly impossible to Heiji, he has strong suspicion how he did to make himself disappear. ‘Is he hidin' somethin' that I need to know? I haven’t got a chance to ask him,’ he said, grumbled. And his question has answered when Megure came up to them with pale face and his lips pressed together, tight-lipped. His choking voice had let horror overwhelmed Kogoro and Heiji. ‘We’ve heard of Conan being involved in an accident. The drunk had not saw where he’s going, and from eyewitness, he- he has been run over. We don’t know how grave his injury is, but the ambulance has taken him to hospital for the checkup. Kogoro, Hattori, take the car with me, and I’m driving.’
  9. Humanize my evil side in your story. :D

  10. Thank you for understanding. :)

  11. Dear me, Stop torturing the person. if you're tired drink brand essence to perk up. And you won't turn paranoid. From Miwako.
  12. Dear Miwako, What are you thinking? If you're tired of one story you had write before, do say so. Don't pester someone for sake of it. It's not nice... Sign, Anonymous.
  13. A howler comes out. *insert paper coin*
  14. Conia? I'm no longer writing SK's life. I've... added the reason in my story thread.

  15. I'm letting SK's life as HY go. The story... is discontinued. I've make the decision. I think I focus on short story writing and missing detective.

  16. To readers: This story is discontinued; I can't keep on writing as I realize it's difficult to write a novel with many ideas popping in my mind. I know the story look substantial, at first I do think of this way until I write chapter 3, I notice I can't continue further as I felt the plot I write has overwhelm me; I decide to let story go. I know I've disappointed the readers as this plot is rare online… but I can't continue… I have major writer's block. I'm running out of ideas when I know what will story roll out, what hold me back is when I look at the story, it look horrible for me that I unable to continue on with many mistakes I've seen in story. I can't continue on, please forgive me as I felt horrible when I publish before I know or realize what I'm doing. One thing is I never regret writing it, but I'm hold responsible for not writing well without grammar mistake, those are the ones which make me feel I'm writing upside down. Please forgive me letting story go. This story is first attempted novel I've write, but it wasn't come well as I expected. Please don't hate me, I believe there are many good and best writers can write this story well, and my preparation isn't enough to shape the novel I want to write to be. This plot/story idea is available for adoption. If you have interest to write this fiction and make it your own, you are welcome to send me message about it. Thank you for taking time reading my story! tzswei
  17. give up writing SK's life as HY. I know it's out of box story... *gloomy* but I like him better as Shinichi.

    1. Miss Smiles

      Miss Smiles

      The story is up for adoption.

  18. This thread is so quiet... :v
  19. Yep we usually use informal but also acquainted with formal for civility. Lesson 5 In this lesson we will learn numbers. Numbers are same as Japanese, the characters is the same but pronunciation is different. 一 yi (first tone) 1 二 er (fourth tone) 2 三 san (first tone) 3 四 si (fourth tone) 4 五 wu (third tone) 5 六 liu (fourth tone) 6 七 qi (first tone) 7 八 ba (first tone) 8 九 jiu (third tone) 9 十 shi (second tone) 10 The similarity with Japanese is numeral order in writing. 2 x 10 = 20 二 x 十 = 二十 er (fourth tone) shi (second tone) 三 x 十 = 三十 san (first tone) shi (second tone) Pronunciation is fixed as they are digits. 二十,三十,四十 and so on. 21 is 二十一 (22) 二十二, (23) 二十三, (24) 二十四, (25)二十五 and so on until 30 三十. One hundred is 一百 (third tone) Can anyone figure out what's 101?
  20. Don't take my suggestion to heart if you don't like my idea. *scratch head, then went off feeling sheepish*

  21. XD I like the idea, you'll be trump card to bring B.O. down. Yeah, that Hideo Yokomizo wasn't my best anymore. And my free editing online software has expired and I can't edit Missing detective without it. There will be a lot of grammar mistakes if it's unedited. I'm stuck.
  22. Konnichiwa! (I've tested myself with given test by self-learn book, I end up getting 75%... :v) uchi kaerimasu, depato ikimasu ni-ji.
  23. I enjoy seeing Conan react to you whenever you call him. *snigger* I get to see many expressions from him when you call him. XD Besides, I don't have stamina to write long novel and better off reading fanfics. I'm running out of 'ink', but I need a bang to continue writing fanfic.
  24. Lesson 5 This lesson focus on sentence building, take a minute study sentence structure. Exercise of this lesson, translate sentence to English using one of the words you learn from each Chinese word. 铜色 - 王叔叔书房的家具都是铜色的 瘦削 - 他的面庞异常的瘦削。 乌溜溜 - 小妹妹有一双乌溜溜的大眼睛。 口若悬河 - 他一贵口若悬河,一讲就是几个小时。 有声有色 - 华文老师有声有色地向我们描述中国的长城,同学们都听得入迷了。 简陋 - 这所学校的图书馆很简陋。 从从容容 - 他从从容容地走上讲台,开始讲演。 庄严 - 在庄严的国歌声中,国旗慢慢地升起。 便宜 - 这家商店大热卖,东西很便宜。 冷若冰霜 - 李老师对学生冷若冰霜, 大家见了她都很害怕。 索性 - 既然已经做了,索性就把它做完。 空旷 - 这片河滩确实很空旷。 平顺 - 这条乡村小路特别平顺。 清澈 - 经过环境治理后,湖水清澈见底。 底廉 - 这家超级市场的东西很底廉。 喜悦 - 我们怀着喜悦的心情参加庆祝大会。 轻飘飘 - 他高兴地走着,脚底下轻飘飘的。 傻愣愣 - 自从他脑子受伤以后,就变得傻愣愣的。 Next lesson you will learn more adjectives.
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