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=X :/ How are you? OMM: anime.dctp.ws Have to hand it to AMV makers. How do they do it so well?

=X Yes, as in for Taken. Got it back from Uninspired Author weeks ago. Still haven't edited or published it.

One of those dreams when you're just standing there, feel out of place, lost, and confused.

Hi AiL. EDIT: Not last year I didn't.

O________________O IS THAT YOU? I wish that my projects would all finish themselves.

Nice. =X *sighs* Should get around to editing the chapter that I finished...and my essays...and my projects due after break... *groans*

Tired. Probably going to skip MiniMafia today and sleep early. Which is crazy, I know, considering that I'm on vacation, but I used up all my stored body energy last year with my stay-up-until-1-AM-and-get-up-at-5:30 habits. How're you Misaki? And... :V

Grawwfia, personally, gets me confused. :/ It's not as fun as MM either. Though it's true that it's simpler and each role has very few actions. (Anokata can only veto stuff the BO says. -__-)

:twisted: BEWARE. LINK MAY CAUSE SEVERE BRAIN DAMAGE TO UNEXPERIENCED READER. :V :V :V

Huh. Interesting. Me: I have no idea. Younger Sister: Ayumi. Guys, guys, guys, guys, guys... *shakes head* She's cute though (when she wants to be). Mom: Eri (minus the cooking). Mom's smart, though she's not a lawyer (that would be my dad) and she cooks decently, unlike Eri. She's a little like a teenager sometimes and very much in love with my dad though she doesn't always show it. Pretty strict and too busy for her own good. Also a perfectionist, which is a bad combo. Dad: I would say Eri here, but he's a guy, so... =X Dad's kinda like Yusaku. He's smart and decently funny, nor does he mind bending the rules a little. He sucks at cooking anything that isn't dumplings though. =X

</333333333333333333333 I said I'm sorry already! D:

Aeyra's covered most. I'll just add in a few notes I noticed simply by glancing at the story. First, as Aeyra said, way too abrupt of a change. Keep it in 1st person if that's the way it's going to be. Second, more description. Description, description, description. It's almost all dialogue and no description. Wife's reaction, as Aeyra noted, too mild. More emotion. Fourth, a little unrealistic in certain parts that Aeyra touched on. Odd formatting. Too fast paced. The dragon slaying took up about three sentences. Isn't it supposed to be a little more difficult? If I had time, I'd go through in depth. That's just what I noticed with a quick glance.

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Yohan, do you want to join a game of MM?

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Wonderful sub. =X

Oh, Yohan... *sighs* It's just this once. And I'm decently sure you have a good record. OMM: Should be a tad more trusting in MM. =X

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I Can Wait Forever - Simple Plan Listened to at least 20 times today. Making an AMV and getting used to the rhythm and tune.