It was pretty good...but a bit confusing in certain parts.
*pats Aeyra* Don't worry, you'll get there. In all truth, Silversage has some 26 reviews per chapter. I really need to go through Becky Tailweaver's stuff again, haven't read her work in a long time.
Say, has anyone read Identity Theft by Ocianne yet? I'm considering it, but dunno if I should put it in.
Oh, and Aeyra, thanks for the recommendation for my fic, but I don't know if it's good enough to go in Top 20...