Pretty good, but the confessions seemed to slide off a little to quickly.. So did the tension between Ran and Conan. I fully support ShinRan, but I would have pulled it out quite a bit longer. (probably until the end of the entire story. XD) Hmm... I actually do expect that kind of reaction from Kazuha, but not so much Heiji. (we're talking big HeiShin fangirl over here.) I thought your fangirl freakout was funny. (but maybe you should mention yaoi. Now that would spur reactions! But Kaito usually calls Shinichi 'Shin-chan' in most fics... Cuz is interesting, but it's not as embarrassing...) Sorry, I'm out of it. I'm in a total HakuKai mood right now. There were kind of OOC like you said... But of course, you drive them crazy, right? JK, JK. Update soon Chelsea!