Aeyra

I think the conversation would be important to Sonoko at the very least. *imagines Sonoko inching forward to eavesdrop* I bet the whole school knows about the talk by that point. *rolls eyes* And I think Ran would notice some resemblance between Ai and Shiho... Perhaps in the next chapter she should mention how much Shiho resembles 'that little Haibara girl'.

Well, it suits her... And LOL about the unicorn theory. ^^ Ai's hairstyle is uncommon though... the only I person I've seen with it is my family consumer science teacher... And she is far from eighteen/seventeen. Besides, isn't manga all about weird hairstyles/color? XD You won't find someone with Heiji's rhino horn either.

Okay... But I'm not in a writing mood.

Interesting! Though even I would say he'd overreact way more if she went missing... After a conversation about the Organization a mere few days prior, he'd definitely be on edge. I find it surprising they didn't collide in those two days. It'd be more interesting if it was 'It's only been a few hours, and she's already rejected ten separate confessions!' XD It'd add more humor to it as well. Oh, BTW they were whispering when she mentioned 'Experiment', right? It'd sound quite strange otherwise... The formatting was good this time. Easier on my eyes.

You can just send the stuff from your iTouch to your computer. That's what I do. I just typed up a three thousand word chapter of my DraMione story last night on it. ;D All I need to do is some minor editing and italicizes.

Oh, I saw that picture too! Though I don't think I favourited it... I usually just favorite drawings I like even if I disagree with the pairing... ... ... Your story is interesting, but the format is kind of hard to read. I couldn't distinguish easily between one paragraph and the next. For some reason, this story seems slower than the others you usually write. Less... action I might say. I dunno. I'll be reading, even if I'm not a ConAi. (I'm not as ferociously ShinRan anymore simply because my fandom's shifted to DraMione, so I don't mind ConAi/ShinShi.)

*facepalms* I'm gone for one morning and all of a sudden there are ten new pages of stuff. How fast are we going here?! And why am I never on when it's ten posts a minute? Tell me what's going on, because I'm completely confused. Oh, and Tsukiko, I saw the drawing. It was really nice. Wish I could draw like you...

I know what you mean. ^^ But I can stand Ran, so that makes all the difference. She's... in a way, the easiest to relate to. We've all missed people in our lives, and I have a little brother too. (except mine is so much more annoying... ) I envy her work ethic (I can't study for more than five minutes at a time and my dedication to any sport is close to zero. And her willingness to do house work...) and she's a nice person. I bet I'd be good friends with her. She reminds me of my friends... I personally don't like Shiho much in looks... She's a little too similar to her younger self, and the hair style seems a bit strange when she's older. I think she's very pretty when she's little though because it suits her more when she's mini. XD I have the strangest views....

Oh great... I leave for TWENTY FOUR HOURS and there are like- five new pages of stuff. *sigh* I think I'm at the point where we're about to sneak into the base, right? I'll come up with the plan... ********** "Where'd you get this map again?" asked Sayomi, peering over Aeyra's shoulder at the iTouch with labeled dots running through the hallways. "I found it. Details can come later. Let's just go with hacking combined with sneaking around is quite useful at times. I can send us all copies and I can add us to the map easily by syncing our trackers to this particular map. Okaaaaay... Done! We're all here." Aeyra pointed to three dots clustered on the corner of the map. "I've sent it to your phones." KKLT and Sayomi took out their phones and opened the newly acquired tool. "Okay, let's go over the plans again. This is a rescue mission, but we go separately. It'll waste less time, and we don't have to lose. The locations are all here on the map, and Aeyra's got the PIN numbers as well. According to her, we need to stay at least fifty feet from others at all times, except when taking out guards." "And in the possibility we get caught, destroy the map. It'll lead them right to us. I've altered this so that the file will destroy all evidence of itself with a single spoken word." She typed it onto her phone. Forfeit "Say it, and we might still have chance of saving each other. Are we all ready?" "Ready." ****** If I screwed up, ignore this. I lost track of what happened to me.

I've always preferred pictures over rainbow words... After all, a picture's worth a thousand words, right? What about several? A mere fraction of great fanart/real stuff drawn by Gosho. Out of curiosity, to the AiCons/ShinShis out there... What scene or fanfic or fanart really got you into the couple? Might sound like a ridiculous question, but I want to know. For example, I really started loving ShinRan after all those little moments Ran'll occasionally bring up or Shinichi's reminiscences. It helps show their rich history together, how much they've shared, and how much both have lost and need to go back too. I think I like ShinRan so much because I think they need to make more happy memories together. Because they're always happy together- and no matter what any evidence points out, and no Matthew how we dissect the relationships and how the pieces of the enigma called love may fit together, doesn't it just come down to happiness? That's the greatest pointer. They are happy together, and they can be so forever. That's how I see it.

Yeah, she's a pretty nice girl. (but thankfully not a Tohru Honda...) She has her bad points, but don't we all? Who hasn't cried at one point or the other? You only see Ran as such a crybaby because Gosho focuses on it, and she has a life outside crying. If we only showed the parts where Ai was weak, than what would you think of her? (course, Ai doesn't cry, but she's going through some serious mental turmoil too. And someone needs to tell her it's perfectly okay to cry. It'd make her more real to me.) And you don't see Ran prancing around chanting 'My dad's an awesome, FAMOUS detective.' That's more of Shinichi's style. (course, he's chanting about himself... XD) She's humble, strong, but simply not strong enough. Is there something wrong with not being able to handle the emotional rollercoaster of being a teenager sometimes?

... ... .... You mean 'It could happen because the BO is strong and fears detectives', right? I don't think so... Like I said, making two characters do the same things is boring. If Heiji gets targeted, we'll have to face ShinichiXRan all over again, though mainly from Kazuha. She'll go ballistic. Heiji's either only going to do research, or he'll end up in 'the final battles'. Otherwise, it'll be boring and repetitive.

I joined DCTP too! Though I prefer DCW... I'm more comfortable here.

I wonder how Ran became Sonoko's friend anyway... They're almost polar opposites. In terms of personality at least...

Well, basically I'm saying some of the Organization members found you, led that strange guy to you, and then waited for your rescue team before they attacked. I was reading Mockingjay. 'Injure one person to draw in the real targets', one of many human snares conjured by Gale.

Well, she's been overdone, but it is still not a great situation. Parents separated- I've heard that parents fighting that much damages the psychology of young kids, and Ran can't have been that old when her parents started fighting. Imagine the four, five year old Ran crying alone in her bedroom, clutching her pillows to her ears to drown out the angry yells, curled up in her covers, scared, and without an idea of what to so. That image helps me convince myself I care. (maybe not, but whatev.) And then Ran's been the one managing her household probably as early as elementary school- have you ever seen Kogoro cook or clean or do whatever? She also has karate, high school, somewhat of a social life, and has to take care of a little brother. On top of that, the best friend who she loves and is closer than a brother has suddenly disappeared after being a centerpiece in her life, an essential piece of her foundation, for ten years. No wonder she's shaky. And crying doesn't mean you're weak. It takes done courage to cry, and in a way, Ran's crying for Shinichi to. Because she can say the things he cannot and he can echo them as she clutches him right when things become too much. And Aoko is way different. I dunno why exactly (other than the fact Ran looks like her- well, Magic Kaito came first, but I discovered DC 'fore that). I think Aoko would be as 'pathetic' if Kairo suddenly disappeared, not to mention she doesn't even have a mom to consult with. Though something tells me someone's going to use that against me to argue that would make Aoko better. ... ... But that's my defense, and Kazuha and Aoko still annoy me.

Well... I just read through about ten pages of stuff I missed... Hair Color- Dark Brown with strange golden hairs spread throughout. I have no idea why they're there. Length- Shoulder length Details?- Well, I have layers. The first layer curls a bit up at about a third of the way down my neck. The second is just the end of my hair. Height- 5'4 and1/2" Weight- Completely normal Clothes- Casual. Jeans, T-shirt, jacket, random jean pouch hanging from my shoulder. Filled with pencils, snacks, calculator and other goodies. Sneakers. Age- 13 And now I shall write... Forgive me for detail mistakes- iTouchs do not easily let you reference things two pages back. ************ "Wake up, wake up!" Aeyra felt hands rocking her back and forth, pulling her out of the foggy mists of sleep. Her first instinct was to hit the culprit and dive under the covers. But when her hand flew forward, it was caught. "Wake up, Aeyra! We have an emergency!" The last word was enough to drag her out of her foggy stupor. "What happened?" she demanded, inner panic attack getting the best of her. "Did someone get hurt? Did someone die?" "Someone's getting attacked," stated KKLT grimly, moving to wake Sayomi but found the girl already wide awake from Aeyra's sudden outburst. "Pyre says Mark's in an ambush." "And we're sure it's him?" questioned Aeyra, raising her eyebrow skeptically. "What if it was a plot? What if it's a voice transformer, and they're playing on our compassion to go and rescue him? They know we owe him- even if he's there, the attack could be a greater plan to capture us. To kill us. Pyre's heading there now, isn't she?" Aeyra's gaze darkened. "Even if it's a trap, we have to help!" said Sayomi righteously, eyes bright with determination. "We'll get out someway somehow or die trying!" "I know we have to help. It was my life he saved- and Chelsea's. Sure he got pretty darn close to killing both of us but something tells me I have to go and try, even though my mind's screaming it's equal to death. And dead people can't help anyone." "We're going right now. We're in the van. Remember, I let you two catch up on some sleep time while the coast was clear? I'm pretty sure Pyre's getting him to a hospital. Or if it's as you said, they're all getting attacked." KKLT's cell phone buzzed, alerting the arrival of a text. "It's Pyre. But we already have the location." "What's it say?" demanded Aeyra, leaning forward to try and read the black characters for herself. KKLT's mouth was gaping. The message had two words, and it was all lowercase, and it didn't form a coherent sentence. Just two words that explained everything. Just two words that told them their friends were in danger, that the danger would reach them soon. Two words. "Trap. Run."

As far as I've seen, all Heiji's done is some innocent research. And Shinichi's not going to die, Gosho promised a nice, happy ending for him. *nods* And if Heiji starts acting like Shinichi with all this secrecy, I'll probably get bored to death. One, lying, deceiving, angst-ridden, hormone-filled, desperately-in-love-with-childhood-friend-and-must-hide-evil-organization-from-her teenage detective is more than enough for me. It's hard enough dealing with just one. *rolls eyes* Since Heiji and Kazuha have to end up together, it's probably going to be through bickering. Kazuha will be arguing with Heiji over some senseless topic that doesn't matter, and then he'll ask like'Why did you <<fill in the blank with whatever crap you'd like>> for me?' and then she'll go 'Because I love you you idiotic ahou!' and they'll kiss and blah, blah, blah picture perfect ending and the story's over. Now if you excuse me, I need to dunk my head in a basin of ice water while I clear that from my mind...

Yeah, it becomes a bit... repetitive. After all, I think we've been over the key points quite a couple of times already in recent conversation alone. And I'm not quite in the mood to rant either. (nor am I in a ShinRan mood, but I'm supporting it anyways because I'm stubborn like that.) Someone needs to add some fuel to these stinking dying embers... But I'm too lazy to find gasoline.

I think it's sweeter to keep it down at a brother-sister relationship... ... ... Because that would finally make them different from Shinichi and Ran in my eyes. (they are the copycats!!! Maybe they have some variations, but let's keep it down to one childhood pairing of lovey-dovey cheesiness...)

Somewhat... But it's fun to read, isn't it? Maybe? No?

Well I didn't know there was a country called Malta... *mutters about not liking geography* And Ai will not be Shinichi's first kiss! It shall be Ran! (or Heiji, or Kaito. )

I just can't find it in me to like Kazuha... I prefer Ayumi over her, at least Ayumi is... I dunno, but Ayumi seems much less annoying now. More adorable if you imagine her as a doting bunny rabbit that's always following Conan around. *nods* I have strange ways of changing my own views... And I like Ran. For some reason, she makes me think of my friend. Strong, determined, works hard, is the main caretaker of little brother (AKA she's the strict one), cooks, responsible, but my friend doesn't like anyone at the current moment. Says she never will. But whatever, Ran doesn't annoy me either way. At least she's got some sort of imperfection in her. (unlike Tohru Honda... Most annoying heroine EVER!!! Unless you want to count Ebony from 'My Immortal') Kazuha on the other hand... I have no intention of imagining her in a fluffy bunny suit nor does she remind me of a friend. She's loud, kind of arrogant, gets jealous and possessive of Heiji despite the fact she's not his girlfriend, and is a photocopy of Ran with minor tweaks, and despite the fact I like Ran, I cannot stand two. (or three... Aoko annoys me too.)

Wait, which country speaks Maltese? >.< LOLZ, there should be a nonsense language for that translator... *rolls eyes* Oops, don't want to get too off topic here. *coughs* *attempts to restrain urge to blab about DraMione* SHINRAN FTW!!! Well, that puts it back on topic, right? I wonder when they'll have their first kiss... (seeing as some crazy murderer stopped them the first time... *throws pout*)