Kiel95

darn, sorry bud, like i said, it's only if i get around to it at 3 am in the morning, but i ended up having to do some stuff (lets just say that my parents know that i'm a night person and try to make me due stuff at night)

yup ^-^ i mean, i completely intended for this to be a shihoxshinichi fanfic, so when i decided to make it start before the downfall of the syndicate, i then realized that i would need to actually write that or else others might not be too happy... cuz i mean, a lot of people are after the downfall and less after the actual pairings..

yeah ... oi oi, we're off topic again... this is about hte end of the syndicate... -.- we really gotta stop gettin off topic shuu

woohoo! something to listen too whenever i can in school!

hmm.. you'll just have to wait and see! i think i've completed the next chapter... but i'm not sure when i'll type it up... right now i just really want to play sims 2 and don't feel like typing and editing my story... sorry, but don't worry i'm def gonna finish this fanfic! you'll just have to wait till i'm in the mood to write... like in another 3 hours when everyone in my house is asleep and i'm still awake and at full energy ^-^ i'm a night person... ^-^ i function better at night.... i got no clue why....

becuz.. i didn't feel like making it too elaborate... and truthfully, i just completely forgot about james black (lol) i have him in another fanfic and i guess i just forgot for this one now camel on the other hand.... yeah... i had forgotten him completely

she'd joke around with him a bit more, throw in some sarcasm, make him angry or embarrassed, then finally hand it over... or something... depending on how you really want the story to go...

^-^ i luvs you kaoko~chan, you're so awesome ^-^

neither did i, but the thought just sort of hit me... i thought of making her a scientist.. but i mean... shinichi could easily search for the top scientists, see her background info, put one and one together and get two.... y'know, i doubt he ever thought she would be an actress so i was hoping this would work out ^-^

whichever sherlock holmes book has some romance in it

lol, you both know i love you ^-^ anyways, thank you for the review Kaoko~chan! i love how you put in the cute lil pics.... ok sorry, not really bout the story... so let's get down to business... truth is, we can't fully grasp ai's personality since she doesn't SHOW her emotions... she never speaks her mind about some things... so i sort of had to guess, and sides, we don't know much about akai but that he says very little and is very smart and handy (with guns and weapons and such ) anyways, sorry for the little errors like the -kun added in when hattori was talking i'm human too (i think) i'm allowed to make mistakes (i hope) and i do make them (obviously) anyways, i needed akai for this because even tho he doesn't have completely major roles... i can't have ai hating him... besides, we don't even know what ai really thinks of shuu... they haven't met since shiho was an adult and her sister was still alive.... an yes, shuu is alive... i'm going with the idea that shuu was okiya, and scar shuu was bourbon... and bourbon has already been taken out... (just kinda skipped) or if you wish, you can believe that i wrote this from a viewpoint of before shuu supposedly died... but i wasn't i just forgot that most people wouldn't know my view on who was who and where i was coming from sorry bout this anyways, love ya both! *hugs* (P.S. about that longer chapter one... hehe, sometimes when i'm writing i don't stop and i don't feel like separating the 75 pages on word so i just post the whole thing in notepad and go, 'screw it, i'm through' anyways, i thought about it this time and cut it into smaller sections, much smaller than i'm used too, but i think that i cut them at pretty good places)

oi oi, don't be mean to my kaoko~chan! anyways, my turn for a review! ok so bout grammar and stuff, not meaning to be harsh, your tenses kept changing, one moment it was in the past, then the present then the past again... it was a bit confusing... anyways, it was def a good story! i luvs it so much! luckily i was able to choke back the tears... TT.TT or not... also, i think that this would have been a better story if shiho was the one to die off... even if i'm a shiho/ai fan, i really don't think that shinichi should be killed off... i mean, i think more emotions can be portrayed by shiho dying then by shinichi dying since he shows his emotions more than she does... she can act impassive about it and i just dont see her... well.... i just dont see her able to act completely heartbroken and torn up in front of others, and it doesn't really say that shinichi loves her... he never says it, even in the end... its more like a one-sided love story since we never found out whether he really likes her or not >.< it was still really really really good! i luvs you for the story! the hakubaxshiho fic should be done soon! just trying to fix it up since its so hard! i just can't grasp hakuba's personality well!!! anyways, keep writing and i'll keep reading! if you ever want me to edit your grammar and such (i may mess up on spelling, but that's cuz i'm not really going over every little itty bitty detail) but if you ever want it done, just send me the story and i'll fix it up, and possibly add in a few adjectives or something and send it back to you for review! anywas, loved it! thank you kaoko~chan *hugs*

i wanna say that's great but i think that after she fainted, conan tells her the truth, but ran also finds out that shinichi is now together with shiho and he loves her only like a sister or best friend now and cant be with ran anymore... thats more my ideal ending... lol

ah, and kaoko~chan, kaito was good at skiing, it was aoko who couldn't ski...

i go with shuu! BOOOOOxinfinity!

oh so true shuu, oh so true!

yep ^-^ thanks for the mention!!!