Kiel95
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yay!!! kill RAN!!! let ai/shiho and conan/shinichi's love prevail!!!! love it although kazuha should've come, she wouldn't let ran off that easily
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lol, ok... but just so you know... i'm considering adding in some stuff... like from her brother's point of view... it will add a lot to the story (although it won't change too much)
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WTH?!?!? i thought you were farther than that
that's only like the 6th or 7th page! oh geez... i gave away a LOT more than i thought i was O.o -
go back to the camp? do you mean the merchant camp after they save...___? or did i just give something away?
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Shuu~chan... i think it is supposed to be interpreted as... (talking about the last one here) ok... so i added a bit in there... but this is how i would interprate it and re-write it... it was a bit hard for me to understand.... i just hope i wasn't way off the mark here and yes, it is a run-on sentence... but i wasn't so much paying attention to that as what i think it is supposed to mean...
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ah, well it isn't over yet, i'm still finishing it up.... so, what part have you gotten to?
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have you started reading it? if so how far? and do you like it so far? (sorry, i ask many questions... always nervous about getting feedback)
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interesting... but do you think next time you can start a new paragraph each time the person talking switches? it gets kinda confusin otherwise... (but i can't wait for next part!!!)
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ok
but just so you know, it isn't done yet, and i need to be editing it... A LOT -
hmm, seems intersting... can you add a lil more ai to this ? XD good story though, can't wait!
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mmmk, if you ever want a reason to become shinshi/aicon, just ask me and i will give you tons of info and reasons!
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i c... if you ever want to reada shinshi fanfic, go to the stories section.... i have quite i bit posted there
still have to finish that though... i'm thinking of getting back to finishing that soon! -
try oolong tea and ginseng... they are good ^-^ i've really only tried asian tea or that sweet tea stuff ... mom's asian so yeah... and the other stuff... that's just somethin i tried cuz i felt like it...
no prob