Amaranth

You're here! *High Fives*

Kumusta? Bakit di kita nakita kahapon? O noong Sabado? O Biyernes?

Lulu all the way!!!

By the way, I read your comment on Chelsie's

(XD) profile. Of course she knows Lelouch.

Thanks

*hugs*

But I'm too busy to finish it this month. I'll try updating a couple of stories next month.

D:

Well, I can't write very good stories either...

But you know, I think one of the best times to write poetry is when you are depressed. That's when all the emotions flow.

*checks*

Umalis ka na pala. D:

Asan ka na, Pare ko? D:

You know, I want to share an experience with you. Once I gave my all to a certain story and thought it was awesome...until some reviewer said that it was a failure. For a whole week, I felt annoyed over her comment. But then I finally realized that she was correct. So I got someone to edit my stories for me, and I must say that they improved a lot.

I didn't. I can't. my internet is too slow. But I havent' finished the story I'm working on yet.

Interesting story! Actually, I've been planning to write something like it. One about TrueTears

Yeah, I know...it's hard to write in a second or third language. But if you can find someone to edit it for you--you know, just to give tips and suggestions, you can really improve your writing.

Nakakamiss daw...ows...epal lang ako dito.

Here's a review from me: It's great; although I don't know anything about love, I can say that the flow of emotions was portrayed amazingly. I do want to point out that your grammar needs a bit of work. The essence of the poem remains, but the message is a bit confusing because of this. That aside, it's a fine gem in the rough with great detail and description. Keep up the good ...

Lelouch is awesome!

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