tengaku squared

I honestly would like this to be longer...but it very good.

I read it over again...stil a bit confusing. I read at about 50 words/second, so maybe that's why?

Um...it's been rare since I never do this, but frankly, i give this a thumbs down. Like Kiel said, it makes no sense! And who's the knight? You even spelled Kudo wrong! No storyline, no organized plot.... With great pain, I have evaluated your story... Your score is 13%. Lower then 15% (Terrible) - Stories here...I probably haven't read to the finish because of my extreme disgust. I'm sorry, but I cannot find many positive things to say for this.

960

They are both subjected to a lover....but, Sato. Completely hungry or full to the point of barfing?

This thread must feel lonely... Besides...detective games...don't normally work out.

What if you did not have special abilities?

958...um..not 965... I counted you as 957 and went on.

Um....I do not know.... The 84 thing is a foreshadowing...watch.... What if a mod or gasp! Maurice locked this thread?

Then I would undergo identity crisis.... What if I was 84 years old?

Cats deserve to be equal too...

Kazuha cause she can fight... Sherlock Holmes or JTR?

Please (insert word that we promised not to use) that I actually want this..discussion to continue...

Takagi cause Shiratori was a jerk-face...trying to make them break up. (at least now he has someone else...) Sato or Takagi?

Bunny, cause I hate it less then dog. Dog eat or dog kill?

Oh come on...don't blackmail me... Blueberry, sheesh. 100% fat or 100% sodium foods?

It would be nice if the browser loaded the game so I can play...

American Eagle..the clothing brand, cause I do not know what is Forever 21. Chew on This or Fast Food Nation?

Ok, let's bring up a little subject: This is a message I sent to blueberry once. I will be changing my member title eventually, but do you think we should have ranks beyond Leader and Members?

WWW is still active? I thought they split a long time ago... If that happened, I wouldn't care.

That's exactly what I was going to say...just kidding. That's the concept between making it like that Carmen game. Great idea!