Um...it's been rare since I never do this, but frankly, i give this a thumbs down.
Like Kiel said, it makes no sense! And who's the knight?
You even spelled Kudo wrong!
No storyline, no organized plot....
With great pain, I have evaluated your story...
Your score is 13%.
Lower then 15% (Terrible) - Stories here...I probably haven't read to the finish because of my extreme disgust.
I'm sorry, but I cannot find many positive things to say for this.