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tengaku squared

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  1. A beginning without an end... 42 or 7?
  2. Google... A mild pandemic or the loss of a loved one through a deadly disease?
  3. Wahaha! Do you like my new avatar?

  4. If I must evaluate this...hmm...maybe this is the chance to try out my critic sheet: Your score is 85%. 80% to 91% (Great) - Stories here may have a few errors, but the story's a great read. My comments: The grammar is greatly improved. Your story is descriptive enough, and well told in the 1st person format. Now for some bad news: The cliffhanger is a tad...weak. Grammar errors are present; they don't effect the story too much. By the way, suggest any ideas for my critic sheet. It is not perfect. Should I add some categories, redistribute points? etc.
  5. Is it because someone else on DCTP (gasp, maybe you?) used it?

  6. I am sorry...but I prefer Kaoko-san's lessons...
  7. I would...but my vote goes somewhere else...
  8. Your information seems off...but the date of DC ending seems realistic enough.
  9. Excuse me. I am now old user. Someone who has a cool avatar...
  10. Yes! Someone who hates my profile photo (not my avatar).
  11. Yes, but it not end up the way you want too... I wish DC would never end...
  12. Rings, cause earrings are stupid. Rainbow or white?
  13. Aww...you don't like Waluigi's celebration? Me always teasing someone...cause teasing is sometimes fun! Blissful ignorance or dreadful truth?
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