This was rushed because it was for my English assignment our teacher didn't want it to long. The assignment was to create an ending for a TV, movie, or play... So of course I pick DC . But yeah I totally agree with you it is rushed but I never planned on making it longer, but hell if
I can get some help it would be awesome to continue it.
Also, I don't know what Gosho Aoyama plans to do about Bourbon, Akai, the identity of the boss, or Okiya so I tried to not use those characters.
Thanks for the comment your totally right. It is my first Fanficton and I may make more it depends on how school goes.