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Oh, alright.
It just that you wrote "Because of an 'accident', he loses his mind" in the description of him. 
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Oh, but perhaps you should tell us more about the accident. Or will you do that later in the story?
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Wow, I really enjoyed reading that! However, it needs a little bit of grammar editing.
Or whatever. The story was great, IMO, but I can't really say anymore than that, so I think you should ask someone else who knows more about this.
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Sure, I could try, but I'm not really good at those kind of stuff. XP