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  1. ah, then fair warning, it turns into a shinshi fic
  2. no, i don't believe she whispered 'experiment' but since the way she said it gave no real indication as to what the experiment was it would only confuse the others Of course they didn't really car about their conversation, it was more that they knew each other that bugged them xD
  3. my problem is that i always want to make changes to my story, but when i send it, i just can't change it on my iphone... its like i need to retype it to make it the way i want... so i always retype xD if i'm worried i'll lose it i send it to myself in an email... but i never use the sent version, i always retype (also, part two is up)
  4. are you waiting for me to hurt you? she's hot! i think the hairstyle actually fits her better when she's older xD of course no one ever really keeps the same hairstyle from childhood to adulthood (but in anime they do xD) but i think shiho looks god with the short cut, and she looks very prettiful
  5. i'll put indents to make it easier xD and it seems slower cuz it's only the introduction xD its all typed up on my ipod in one long story... but i really didn't feel like typing it all up at once... so i just decided to go with that :3
  6. Two weeks passed and Ai suddenly disappeared. No one came for her. No one heard from her. She was just… gone. Nobody knew what’d happened. Shinichi began to wonder if she’d gotten tired of them and left, or maybe, maybe THEY were still out there. He was immediately on full alert and much more cautious than usual. The last conversation he’d had with her had him slightly on edge but prepared just in case some of them were still out there. A few days after her disappearance he received a letter in the mail. It didn’t have anything on it but his address and postage. No return address. ~Kiel95 He questioningly opened the letter and read it carefully, eyes growing wide as he did so. “Hey Kudo-kun. Sorry I had to disappear so suddenly on you guys. Something came up and I had to leave for a while. Don’t worry because I’m fine. I’ll get in touch soon. So calm down a bit. I know you’re most likely worried and becoming overcautious. Yes, it’s good to stay cautious, but don’t become like me, paranoid as I was. That’s plainly a bad idea as you’ll become an introvert like me. Anyways, I’ll contact you soon – Haibara Ai.” He let out a sigh of relief. She was safe. That took a huge amount of tension off his shoulders. He placed the letter down on his nightstand and was able to rest easy and drift off to sleep without worry. The next day he woke up with a smile and prepared for school. He met up with Ran as usual and the two smiled and talked on the way to school, their hands brushing up against each other but neither saying anything nor stopping it. As they entered the school grounds they were treated like a couple, but something was amiss that morning. People were whispering and gossiping about something new and weren’t paying as much attention to the high school detective and his childhood friend. Curious as to what it could be, he joined a group of friends and asked, “Hey guys, what’s up?” “You mean you didn’t hear?” someone asked in shock. “Of course he didn’t hear,” another guy interjected, “He has no reason to care since he has Mouri Ran!” A light blush painted his cheeks until someone else said, “Anyway… Dude… there’s this new third year who transferred in. She’s a real beauty and she’s smart to top it off! I hear it’s only her second day and ten guys have confessed and been rejected already! She’s already being called the ice queen since she does it so emotionlessly! I really want to see what she looks like, but I still haven’t gotten the chance!” The others agreed and Shinichi just shrugged it off. Didn’t mean anything to him. He didn’t care for rumors and gossip. He was more of a hard fact guy. What they were spreading had nothing to do with him. He slipped out of the group and told Ran the gist of things, who was just happy he didn’t’ have an interest in seeing their supposedly beautiful sempai. ~Kiel95 They headed off to class where they were greeted by Sonoko. Of course they were teased, but it ended sooner than normal since the topic was soon changed to the sempai they’d just heard about. Sonoko suddenly stopped the flow of the conversation going on in the classroom by suddenly saying loudly, “I forgot!” Her classmates looked at her quizzically. Sonoko pointed an accusing finger at Shinichi and said, “The new sempai also mentioned Shinichi-kun!” All eyes immediately turned to glare at him. He was just as shocked as them and he hurriedly said in his defense, “Oi, Oi! I’ve never even met this sempai you’re talking about! Much less do I even know what she looks like or why she mentioned me!” Suddenly a cutting voice said from the doorway in a seemingly suggestive tone, “Is that so Kudo-kun? And I thought we were closer, much closer, than that.” They spun around in surprise and Shinichi’s eyes widened. “H-H-,” he cut himself off right before saying Haibara and correcting himself saying, “M-Miyano-san?!” She smirked and said with an overly sarcastic tone, “Kudo-kun, I believe it’s Miyano-sempai to you.” He seemed flabbergasted and his mouth moved but no words came out. Shiho slowly walked into the room and stood before Shinichi with a cool gaze. Then she leaned towards him and said with a childishly mischievous smile, “Oh, you seem to be quite at a loss for words. I must say you never would’ve believed I was here unless I came to see you myself would you?” She giggled and said, “You needing to call me ‘Sempai’ after all we’ve been through must be quite a shock no?” Shinichi was finally able to shut his mouth and regain his composure, and once he’d done so he spoke as calmly as possible, “What are you even doing here, Miyano-SEMPAI?” he stressed ‘Sempai’ and had to grit his teeth through saying it. ~Kiel95 “Oh, nothing short of trying to learn a few new things,” she said with a teasing smirk. “You’ve graduated college in America, what could you possibly wish to learn here?!?” She shrugged and moved towards the window and stared up at the sky a bit before responding in a distant manner, “I figured I’d see if there was something I’d missed in school that I can learn here. Besides, I was never able to learn Japanese culture first hand in America. Also, I need to oversee my… Experiment, to make sure it’s permanent. What better way than to go to school?” Shinichi’s eye twitched. Without looking at him Shiho said with an annoyed sigh, as if playing with him had become a hassle, “Cool off Kudo-kun, it’s not like we’ll be in the same class. I just stopped by to say hello to let you know I’m doing fine.” Then she slowly turned and headed for the door saying just as she left, “See you around Kudo-kun, and don’t mind me. We don’t have to talk now that we’ve finished this conversation. It’s about time class starts and I really must get back.” She left before he could retaliate. Within moments he was crowded by his classmates, all asking him thousands of questions at once. He couldn’t answer a single one since they were speaking altogether and much too fast. When the bell rang and the teacher entered, the others calmed down and went back to their seats, still stealing glances and glares at Shinichi whenever they had the chance. When lunch came around, Shinichi stretched a bit before getting up, but before he stood, Sonoko and Ran stood above him with twitching expressions. They wore smiles, but it was quite obvious how angry they were. He pulled back slightly but had nowhere to go since he was seated against a window. “Explain,” Sonoko and Ran said in sync in a simple yet stern and angered tone. It was obvious that everyone else was waiting for an answer as well and weren’t leaving until they heard. Shinichi muttered, “Shit,” under his breath. He then inhaled deeply and calmed himself down before starting, “Remember when I was on that really long case where I had to leave school?” ~Kiel95
  7. hooo~ maybe you're right
  8. i already told you what i thought on dA x)
  9. does that mean you know what she's thinking?!? O_O what? what is it she's thinking? xD i wanna knooow :3
  10. nyeheheh xD isn't that the truth xD
  11. haha nice xD
  12. Is it sad that I almost died of happiness because I got a reply from the girl I like? xD

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    2. Kiel95

      Kiel95

      haha thanks :) but if i tell her... i wanna tell her in person O_o... which... i don't even know if i'll ever see her again TT-TT

    3. Aeyra

      Aeyra

      Good luck from me too!

    4. Kiel95
  13. Hi plain and simple... HI
  14. thnx xD i'm so glad someone finally read it! i'll be adding more later :3
  15. SHIHO = HOT i love all shinshi pics <3 <3 <3 and the one you posted earlier = HEAVENLY ^^ that's also one of my favs ^^
  16. in truth, i used to be a total shinran... then... i met ai, and i saw all the moments they had together, their conversations and witty banter... it... intrigued me... and i felt that there were sparks there... i was really only a shinran because shinichi loved ran... but... i couldn't stand Ran since the beginning... so i was really happy when ai appeared and i had someone that i thought was better for shinichi and could make him complete simple as that ^^
  17. WHY DOES NO ONE GO TO THE STORIES ANYMORE DAMMIT!!!! (sorry, my stories been up there for at least 20 min.. usually i'd have at least one view or comment TT-TT)

    1. CarpetCrawler

      CarpetCrawler

      It takes a while for the view count to appear when a new thread is created. I'm sure the real view count will appear soon.

    2. Kiel95

      Kiel95

      ok xD sorry, i calm now ~ i just remember when the stories section was smaller, even if there was only like 2 other people on, within the first ten minutes someone was usually already reading it >///<

  18. HAPPY BIRTHDAY <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 (sorry i'm late, but i made sure to get in here :D) I LOVE YA BUDDY!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 take it easy ne? and keep in touch :)

  19. This is another pairing fanfic, and it is my usual pairing (sorry shinrans) and it's modeled after this picture Miyano-Sempai now then, i have written the whole story, but its on my ipod and i'm too lazy to type it all up now, so i decided to do the beginning without much pairing and such, just a sort of background and a slight cliffhanger (tho by the title you should know what happens xD) do comment and critique (now if there's spelling errors, please don't go all, "Oh you have so many spelling errors, work on that" I do know how to spell, but my fingers sometimes slip up and hit one thing before the other or hit the wrong key and such. spelling errors are common when typing fast. now then, please enjoy ^^) Things were looking up. The syndicate had been apprehended and Ai had gained the data she needed to create the antidote. Within a month after the eradication of the syndicate the antidote was complete, and Shinichi was able to return to being his usual teen self. Ai dressed as Conan one last time to be taken away to America by Edogawa Conan’s mother. Shinichi was happily back in his second year of high school and he and Ran were hitting it off nicely. Ai on the other hand was still attending elementary school with the rest of the Detective Boys. Now, two weeks after Shinichi was back to normal, still keeping everything secret from Ran, he was starting to feel guilty and went to consult with Ai. As he headed over to the professor’s house and rung the doorbell, the Detective Boys answered with a bright, “Hello!” He smiled and said, “Yo, is the professor here?” ~Kiel95 The Detective Boys let him pass as they ran to get the professor. They looked up to Shinichi since he was an amazing and well known high school detective. They wanted to follow in his footsteps and be like him. As they left, he walked over to the couch and plopped down, straight across from the straight faced child. “Yo, Haiabra.” She didn’t reply but he saw her give a slight head nod as she looked through a magazine. “Oi… Haibara,” he said in slight exasperation. She slowly looked up and raised an eyebrow, setting down her magazine and staring straight at him, waiting for him to speak. He sighed deeply right before he said in a quick blurb, “I feel guilty about not telling Ran everything! I don’t know why you don’t want me to say anything to her, but without a proper reason it just feels wrong! I mean it’s not like the syndicate can get her anymore! They’re gone, done with, why are we still hiding it from her?” She blinked slightly at the speed with which he spoke. He must’ve been thinking about it for quite a long while. She slowly spoke in a calm tone, “There’s no guarantee all of the members have been taken care of. From what we know they have been… but we may never know if they syndicate is completely gone. I prefer to be cautious about such things. It’s your choice whether you tell Ran, but I expect that if you do, you make sure she keeps her mouth shut about it. I don’t want it to be spreading and then even more people being at a risk of being disposed of. It’s quite an unsavory thought.” He slowly let it sink in and then replied in a slightly calmer tone, though still uneven, “Thanks Haibara. I just needed to know why you thought I shouldn’t tell. I don’t want to keep it from her forever, but I don’t necessarily want to put her at risk either.” A slight smile tugged at Ai’s lips as she replied, “At least you aren’t as completely stupid as you used to be.” His eye twitched, “Oi, Haibara, what’s that supposed to mean?” “Oh nothing,” she replied with an obvious smirk, her mind wandering back to the London case where he’d been idiotic enough to take the spare pill for his return home just to talk with Ran and even confess. He glared at her for a moment and opened his mouth to speak, but he was immediately cut off as the Detective Boys came running back into the room with the professor in tow. “Oh Shinichi!” the professor said happily. “What can I do for you?” Shinichi grinned and said with a delighted tone, “I just wanted to stop by and say hey. We don’t seem to talk as often and I thought it couldn’t hurt to stop by.” He was, of course, lying through his teeth. He had only needed to talk with Ai. The professor smiled happily and they went to look at some of the inventions. A while later Shinichi left and headed home. He was in a much better mood and reassured of the reason he shouldn’t tell Ran. Something else bothered him, but he pushed it to the back of his mind. With Ran he was able to accept what Ai had told him since it did make quite a bit of sense and was very logical and well thought out. That was one thing he could count on with when it came to Ai, Logic; even if she did use an overly sarcastic tone and poke fun at him every chance she received. He plodded into his house and grabbed a cup of noodles for dinner, eating slowly and then heading off to work on homework. He was in such a good mood he failed to notice the figure that had entered his room and was sitting on his bed. Suddenly he jumped when it said, “Hmm, not very observant now are we Kudo-kun?” He spun around and stammered, “H-Haibara?! What the hell?!” “I wasn’t sure if we finished our conversation from earlier since we were interrupted. I just wanted to see if there was anything else you wanted to ask. If not I’ll be heading home.” She hopped off the bed and headed for the door after a few moments of silence. “Wait,” Shinichi started. Ai halted and turned around asking, “What?” ~Kiel95 “Aren’t you going to change back?” She smiled mischievously as she said, “Maybe I will, maybe I won’t; but if I do, I need to wait a while. I can’t be disappearing so soon after Edogawa Conan left.” “I see. Wait. So is that a yes or no?” he asked in slight confusion. She smiled cryptically and left. He just slowly shook his head. He thought he’d figured her out long ago. Boy was he wrong. He still had no clue what went running through her mind, and he wasn’t necessarily sure he wanted to know. ~Kiel95
  20. ok, i'll run you through the basics which is me.... SHINSHI/AICON FTW! i loves emoticons! GO RAINBOWS GO! (yes, i'm gay) i love to write i love to read i've posted shinshi and aicon and shinran fanfics i love everyone who is nice ;D great to meet you =^-^=
  21. woah... that was nervewracking >///< we were talking about who we liked (my friend and I) and i showed her a pic of who i fell for on the cruise... but of course that meant telling her i'm gay... O_O she's the first one of my close friends to know >///< it was so awkward for a while... ^^; but at least it got better xD

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    2. Kuroba Kudou

      Kuroba Kudou

      That's pretty sneaky XD

      But a good idea...

    3. OldJustal

      OldJustal

      you're gay i never knew.

    4. Kiel95

      Kiel95

      *shrug* i never really hid it from you guys xD it says so in my about me section :3 i'm actually closer to bisexual since i like guys and girls, but in truth i label myself as UNKNOWN because i'll fall for whoever the hell i please, and i'm not gonna let gender restrict me :)

  22. haha nice my favorite color is BLACK <3
  23. here, just read this, you'll see why pink isn't in the gay pride flag anymore xD Rainbow flag mmk?
  24. NO PINK IN THE RAINBOW! also, i've no clue when it was removed, but i've heard it from so many ppl... not only that, look at the gay pride flag! gay pride is symbolized by the rainbow... NO INDIGO (at least not in the newer flags, i dunno if there was indigo in the older flags)
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