Amaranth

*HUGS* *sobs* *Thinks: I want a stuffed toy version of Twin* XD

I thought you were an hour or two behind? @KKLT: Hei-chan?!!

Never mind. NO, I don't call him Kaz-chan. It reminds me of Kazuha and MM is more like Heiji. Oh, well it's 11 AM here.

Hi! I wish I stayed up later last night so I could have been around when 'kaz-chan' went online. *yawns* What time is it there?

*HUGS* Pretty much the same...writing and yawning...

I just woke up. Hi everyone!

Now that is EPIC!!! +1 for making me laugh. And I'll stop calling you that way (unless I feel like being naughty). :cool:

*hugs* @KKLT: AKA tonsostuff

Okay, I read through it. It seems that your problem with chapter 2 is that it's quite short and has a lot of 'empty spaces' if you know what I mean. Grammar-wise, it's fine. I think what your story needs is a background or something. And don't think that you're a failure. You're not. You're simply a beginner. Once I posted the beginning of a story (I think 5,000 words for chapters 1 and 2) and a reviewer said that my attempt was a FAILURE. I felt so depressed, but I learned to move on and rise from my shortcomings. Now, as far as beta-reading is concerned... @IU: Twin, could you kindly take a look at BK's story? Pleassssse~~ I just want to know your opinion 'bout it...

All you need is someone to edit it for you. Writing fanfiction isn't as easy as it seems... I suggest you get someone to help you with... Characterization Grammar Details Vocabulary/Word Selection

You're simply a person with no twin. Random Q: If JustaL is my clone, then what is he?

English Translation: I am not an online dictionary. Right! Hurray for Shamcey! Raise the flag of the Filipinos! Tear your cedulas! [Reference to Battle of Balintawak in Philippine history] @BK: Don't ask me. Really, there are SOO many ways. On my part, I'm trying to make my stories and poems as good as possible.

I wish I could see Cam-chan around more often...

Che! I lost hope after that 'major-major' incident. It was a total slap in the face for us and our countrymen. To think that I saw her IRL. Yay for Shamcey! She made up for it. But speaking of Beauty Competitions, we should do our part to beautify the image of our country, beginning here on DCW. Let's prove to the whole world that we are awesome!

@BK: LoL. Literal translation. I'm one of the hearts too!