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Alright, so I'm pretty sure most of you are all like "WOAH, I totally want that Schwa guy to make a fan story of how he thinks DC will end!" So I answered that request I assumed you all had. Let me know what you think. Note: This story is as cheesy as it could possibly be, also, this is likely not even close as to how the actual DC ending will turn out. What you read cannot be un-read. You are responsible for your own safety. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ok, so the final arc starts off with a lot of foreshadowing and stuff. Ran gets a fortune done that says that in the near future lots of blood will be shed. Being the person she is she gets totally freaked out and calls Shinichi to make sure he's ok and stuff, and after he plays it off cool she worries like hell. Meanwhile Conan and the FBI found a clue to the BO's hideout. Conan talks it over with Heiji on the phone. Later on... Conan, while investigating ends up stumbling into their base, without being detected. He tries to call for help... but before he knows it Vermouth grabs him from behind. When they're in another room they talk for a little while and Vermouth orders him to leave. Some dramatic stuff happens but in the end Conan ends up putting her to sleep with his watch. He then takes back his cell phone only to find out Vermouth secretly broke it for some reason. So he continues his investigation, crawling through the air ducts. Some time passes, we get to see Ran still worrying while she accidentally breaks Conan's plate... for like the third time in the series. "Conan-kun..." she says in her needy voice while looking out a window. Anyways so Gin starts hearing noises from the vents, Vodka says it's probably a mouse, but Gin tells Vodka to go take a look. Vodka finds Conan, Conan bashes him in with a soccer ball and when Gin calls Vodka's cell phone Conan imitates his voice and says something like it was nothing, and that he's going out for a bit. Conan continues for a while, searching for the boss... or evidence... or something. Eventually he gets attacked from behind and gets put in an interogation room. When Conan wakes up, Gin is there. Conan goes "how did you know?" "Vodka wouldn't of said [insert what Vodka wouldn't say here]." replies Gin. So then Conan gets interrogated by Gin for a while, saying stuff like "Who are you?" and "Where's Sherry?". All the while Conan refusing to tell him anything, so Gin starts beating him up and stuff. After he loses his patience Gin puts a gun up to Conan's head and says he will just kill him. All of a sudden an Ace of Spades breaks through the window and knocks the gun out of Gin's hand. "Don't tell me..." Conan starts to say. Kaitou Kid busts through the window all epic like and frees Conan and they begin to run away. "Why?" Conan says out of breath. "Yeah turns out my enemies are the same as yours" Kid replies. "Cool beans." says Conan. Then they exchange witty phrases with eachother as they continue to escape, when they notice a shadow up ahead. Amuro ends up being there pointing a gun at our heroes. "I should've known you'd be here... Bourbon!" says Conan all epic-like. "How did you know?" says Amuro. (Conan does his deduction show that goes on for like 10 minutes but seems to pause time) "I'm impressed, Boy. But too bad your life ends here!" As he's about to pull the trigger Okiya appears out of nowhere, knocks the gun out of his hands, and punches Amuro to the ground. "I thought it was you... Akai Shuuichi!" Bourbon says wiping the blood from his lip. Conan says nothing cuz he knew the whole time, while Kaito is just wondering wtf is going on. Okiya takes off his glasses and opens his eyes, clearly they are the same eyes as Akai. Then some more stuff happens and pretty much Akai says to leave Bourbon to him and for Conan to go capture the boss... for some reason. After Conan and Kid leave, Gin joins in the fight and Akai ends up fighting them both. When he seems to be losing Sera appears out of nowhere (she followed him) and they exchange quirky comments while fighting together. Those four end up having an epic battle... anyways back to Conan. They reach the bosses room when there's a shady character sitting in a rotating chair facing the other way behind his desk. "I knew you guys would make it this far..." says the guy in a deep evil voice. Then he turns around. "Dad?!?" Conan and Kaito say at the same time. "Wait... he can't be". "Hehe! My name is Atsushi Miyano (Haibara's dad), BO Codename: Kool-aid, and Yusaku and Touichi were my twin brothers" "WOAH I TOTALLY DID NOT SEE THAT COMING" says Conan and Kid. "That means Haibara is my cousin??" [gf ConAi fans] Anyways... they get ready to fight. Kid whips out his card gun, Conan cranks up his shoes, and Heiji arms himself with a metal pipe. What? Did I forget to mention Heiji was with them? Yeah he took a bus or something. They fight, Heiji gets owned, Kid loses his gun, and Kool-aid detonates the roof and Conan gets trapped under a heavy amount of rubble. "If only I weren't in a child's body I could get out of here...!" Conan thinks to himself. Well you all know what happens next! Conan goes Super Saiyan 4 and breaks the rubble in his adult fo- A shadowy figure breaks through the rubble, turns out it's Shinichi! Yeah he took an antidote he conveniently had on him. So... uhh... Kool-aid gets defeated somehow, and pushes the base's self destruct button. "We gotta get out of here" Heiji screams. Kid picks up Kool-aid in his weakend state. "Haha... are you really going to leave without them...?" Kool-aid mutters. He then presses a button on the tv remote for his room, and there is a live video feed of Ran, Kazuha, and Aoko all conveinently locked up in the basement. (Ran was kidnapped right after her scene in the beggining, it was cut due to time restraints) "You bastard!" They all say at once. Then Akai and Sera come in the room and say they carried out all the unconscious BO members to the outside, and that they will take out Kool-aid while Shinichi and company go rescue the girls. Epic shiz continues to happen until Conan wakes up in the hospital. Pretty much every important character is gathered around him. He acts like a kid, but then realizes he's not wearing his glasses. WOAH!!! This means they must have watched him transform from Shinichi into Conan! Well it turns out the only people who saw him were Heiji, Kazuha, Jodie, Akai, Agasa, Haibara, and Ran. So yeah 2 of those 7 people were pretty shocked. Ran only smiles at Conan... as if she understood, While Kazuha doesn't really do anything, she probably got filled in by Heiji or something. Then we go into a timeskip! Shinichi and Haibara are shown in their adult forms, meaning they magically turned back into normal. Then we see Shinichi and Ran getting married, when a little kid who looks like both Shinichi and Ran runs up to them. "Conan... go back to your seat." Ran smiles at him. (That's their son. !!!) And so them along with every other character I forgot to mention lives happily ever after. Except for the BO as they continued to rot in prison.

I am making a manga and I am trying to decide on a look for the main character to have. The story will be either a mystery manga or a small fighting manga, not a ninja story. If you have an idea of a character look that is easy to draw but looks cool please post it in this forum and the best character will be chosen by a group of 4 of my friends + myself by July 30th.

I will be deciding on the character's personality after we vote on the winner according to how they look. When the winner is chosen by my friends and me, I will be pming the winner for how they felt him to be when he/she is being drawn. The character can be male or female but the story line will be more male dominated so the winning character will probably be male but that is not a Guarantee. The age of the main character will practically decide the age of the other major characters. The age I am thinking of is between 13-17 years of age. I apologize for not posting that up above. Also another thing I did not post above which I should have is that when the winner is decided I will be pming them a lot until the mini story is over. Every chapter will be sent to them when it is roughly finished so to make sure that the wining character have the personality and act (immature vs mature) is to the liking of the contest winner. Also, when it is all said and done if they have any preference of a way to distribute it for free (a certain website or something) they will have their way in that.

Double post but ^ ^;; Progress:

I believe Akai is still alive and Conan and Akai planed to fake his death from the beginning. The body found was that of the organization member that killed himself because it would make sense since his finger prints would be on the phone as well and he is the roughly the same age as Akai. As for who Akai is currently in the show I believe it is most likely Okiya. It makes the most sense to me since Conan trust him completely to easily and allows him to live in his house without worry. He knows how to use Conan's gadgets. After seeing Conan be so suspicious of everyone he meets epically is sherry gets the BO feeling from them its hard to believe Conan would trust Okiya so easily if he didn't know who he already was. Also since Akai was in the BO as rye it also explains why sherry gets the BO feeling.

You can't just flame someone like that! Do you know how RUDE that is? Honestly people- if you don't like it, don't comment on it! And everyone gets help- how do you think you improve? Asking for help shows he cared! How about you guys try writing something? And what if I just laughed at it, told you it was terrible without a single tip on how to improve, and tell you it was BORING, terrible, and you weren't even able to complete it. Really? If you hated it that much, then why even bother to comment? And Parkur is NOT pathetic! First you flame his writing and then you insult him because he didn't fight back? How old are you? Because you're not acting like you're seventeen. You sound like some bored little kid with nothing else to do but insult people for no good reason! The point of posting a story is to figure out how to improve, and even if you don't like it, you tell them how to improve! Why was it boring? Tell him how to improve! Why couldn't you finish it? Why was it 'terrible?' JUST LEAVING AN INSULT LIKE THAT ONLY SHOWS WHAT KIND OF PERSON YOU ARE. I thought you got past that phase. I guess not. Shame really- you'd think a year would help people grow up.

And what? Girls like Kazuha aren't? BST pairings are one of the BIGGEST, overused, and easy to spot cliches in writing. And they're NOT just in anime, but everywhere. There are millions and millions of girls with Kazuha's personality type out there too who get just as much attention as the stoic types. And they get on MY nerves. You're pulling a double standard. :-| Also, you're correct. There is nothing special about Ran. But, THAT is what I like about her. She's just an ordinary high school student innocently mixed up in something that's a little weird and unknown to her; the teenage boy she loves is once again a little kid. She's strong, not just in karate, but in character. Besides being kind, practical, and loyal, she retains her sensitivity despite so much exposure to violent death and is capable of expertly aiding Kogoro and Conan in solving cases. Basically, she's tough, yet sensitive, strong, sensible, and very human. THAT'S why I adore her character and give her my attention. It is NOT for NOTHING. That would be the equivalent of me thinking you're giving a character you like such as Ayumi or Kazuha, too much attention for NOTHING. Which is absurd because I am sure and respect that you have your reasons for liking their characters as I have for liking Ran's character. Besides that, people always have a reason for feeling the way they do towards things. Even if they don't always know what that reason is. Humans don't feel for no reason at all. Also, I'm afraid you're going to have to explain to me how the horn on Ran's head makes her appear androgynous, because I don't understand how that works at all. And you know what, while we're on that topic... So Ran's hairstyle changed? Okay... Aoyama's art style evolved and he decided he preferred drawing her hair that way. Whoop-de-doo. Takahashi did the SAME THING with Kagome's hair. Only it was to a much lesser degree because her art style barely developed at all over the course of 20 volumes. This is just a natural progression of all artists. Anyway, since I don't wish to derail this topic any further, I'm getting back on track... I find it kinda funny Yukiko's in your list. Where do you think Shinichi got his arrogance from? lol It wasn't Yusaku, I can tell you that much. All he got from him was really bad social skills and an enormous intellect. XD Is it weird that I find it absolutely hilarious Conan is more popular than Shinichi? I feel kinda bad for the guy now, haha.

I have this theory that Conan knew about Akai's fake death plan, and that's why he's being so trustful of Subaru Okiya, because he knows who Okiya really is.

I think that Akai is alive, and I think the plan somehow is similar to what happened to when Andre was driving with Hidemi. I believe, first off, Hidemi and Akai (and maybe Conan) had discussed what the Organization might do if she was to join back in (while in the hospital). Somehow, Kir somehow stuck a hidden message into either the text or in her call, or otherwise Akai was already prepared and figured something like this would happen. He went to Reiha pass and investigated. He probably did notice the Organization a long distance away, so he purposely pulled his truck over by the ledge of the cliff, just like how Andre pulled his truck over to the side. He prepared fake blood beforehand on the spots he would be sure Kir would shoot or stab, weak points in the body like the head, heart, and lungs (maybe even the throat).He also put one in his mouth to make it seem he was letting out blood through there too. Kir shot him twice, and he fell into the car. She set off the bomb with 3 seconds (30 seconds in the manga), to which I believe Akai escaped out of the car while she was turned, since the Organization was watching him via the camera on her choker. As for the dead body, I believe it was Rikumichi's dead body. We do not know what happened to him after his death, only that the FBI tried to keep this a secret from the Organization. If the police were to do a search, they would see a bullet wound to the head, where both Akai and Rikumichi were shot. The fingerprints can be explained because earlier on, Rikumichi touched Conan's phone. Plus, I find it strange the gun was shot at Akai, but he looked perfectly fine until a moment later, when he started bleeding and crouched down.I also find it strange Akai came with no weapon at all, and took the shot to the lungs and head so easily, and even made his last words sound funny. "To think you've gone this far..." with a smile on his face... plus the fact his hand stayed in his pocket the entire time seemed peculiar... also the fact when Kir turned away for a moment, then looked back, they didn't show the eyes of the person in the car, but the head was turned differently than before... at first, the head was facing to the left, but after she turned away, the head was facing forward, and we didn't get a glimpse of the eyes on the body. I'm not saying that Akai got out of his clothes and put them on the body at that moment, but maybe he had the body prepared with his clothes and his cell phone, which he couldn't use if he was pretending to be dead... he didn't tell anyone because he wanted their reactions to be realistic, plus he may not want any information to get leaked to the Black Organization... he disguised as Okiya Subaru by using a wig, changing his outfit, and wearing high powered glasses to make it hard to see and forcing him to squint, then assumed the role of a college student. He moved into Shinichi's house because Conan knew his plan probably, or saw through his disguise, and gives Haibara that feeling not because he's Bourbon but because he was once the BO member Rye. Him drinking Bourbon does not prove he is Bourbon, since Bourbon is Akai's favorite drink. Plus Akai and Okiya compare the BO to wolves. Bourbon on the other hand disguised as Akai because he got suspicious Akai was alive. He did this so he could gain more information by viewing reactions of FBI agents, and was trying to lure out Akai. Akai, as Okiya, decided to visit the bank Bourbon had been at during the robbery case, and may have noticed him entering the mall. He followed him to see what he was doing, then left a note for Jodie saying to leave because there was danger. This may have not been because of the bomber, but because he was warning her about Scar Akai, or Bourbon.