IdentityUnknown Posted August 12, 2011 Report Posted August 12, 2011 Well, I read the first and second chapters. It seems pretty good, but a little rushed, so you might want to slow your pace down and give more detail and description in it.
Amaranth Posted August 12, 2011 Author Report Posted August 12, 2011 Ok! Thanks a lot, IU! <this just means that I'll never be able to update my other fanfics.> *sigh* <To think that I originally intended for this to be a one-shot.> But you're right. I'll try to add more detail. I'll do my best to make this story special, because it's for Chels!
Lia. Posted August 14, 2011 Report Posted August 14, 2011 I loved the first two chapters! Keep writing!
Amaranth Posted August 14, 2011 Author Report Posted August 14, 2011 Thanks for the encourgement, Lia-chan! I'll try to update soon!
hopes Posted August 17, 2011 Report Posted August 17, 2011 Oh, this is a three-shot? Didn't see that before.
Cindy-Chen Posted October 29, 2011 Report Posted October 29, 2011 Whoa! Love both chapters. I like the 2nd chapter at the end. I can just imagine him thinking about laughs. :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin:
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