Anti-APTX4869 181 Report post Posted May 16, 2011 Invitation to a Party Writers: Cure-kun (Codes, Mysteries & Wrote the whole thing) Misaki-chan (Wrote the main plots of the story) Forever Lost (Gave ideas) Aeyra (Gave ideas) Cast: ??? (i thought I should put this since it is in the story anyways) Cure-Kun Detective Kudo (Kudo) Identity Unknown (IU) Maurice Misaki-chan Aeyra Chelseaj500 (Chelsea) Kiel Forever Lost (FL, Forever-chan) Note: Chelsea is Akakata. She changed her name when I was almost finished with this. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Intro: Fancy Party ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// SCENE: Hotel room 706 *Cure-kun is typing on a computer* Cure-kun: Dear, my truly insane…(delete insane) wonderful friends……. I invite you to a wonderful party…. I want you to come to this place…… Room 706…. Sincerely….. Cure-kun. (Hits enter) and that is that! Now I just need to wait…. (Cure-kun gets up and sits on the sofa, turns on the TV and takes a sip of his coffee) SCENE: Outside the Hotel Kudo: (Checks time) Yes! Just on time… now where is… IU: Kudo you are late…. Oh wait you are on time Kudo: Huh? Whoa I didn’t see you there because I don’t know your identity *Pffft Hahaha!!* IU: (Mad face) I know you’re laughing Kudo… that’s not funny ???: Actually, IU, that is funny… however… IU: Ah! Chief! Sir! *Salutes* ???: Kudo, please don’t be rude ^^;; And IU, you don’t have to do that… IU: But, Chief Ma- Kudo: (Realizes who it is) Aaaack! M-m-m-m- Maurice: Why? Just because I’m the Admin of the DCW and being a chief of police doesn’t mean I don’t get to be fre- (Cricket sound) ah that is my phone… Ahem, excuse me… hello? *walks away* Kudo: (shocked )*Cricket sound ring tone?* Huh? Wait, did you know he was here? IU: You got here because Cure-kun sent you right? Same goes for- ???: Hey! Kudo: Hm? IU: Ah! You’re here….? Aeyra: Yes, of course, the great Mathematician Aeyra is here! Kudo: *I really don’t think we should emphasize our selves that much…* Hm? Is that..? Misaki-chan: (running and sees others) Ah! What are you guys here doing here? IU: Misaki-chan! Are you here to see Cure-kun too? Misaki-chan: Yeah, why? Detective Kudo: It seems that we’ve been all called her for the same reason. Maurice; Looks like it, Kudo. Aeyra: Do you think anyone else is coming? Chelsea: Nah! Let’s go up! OHOHOHHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHHOHO~~~!!!! Kudo: What the- When did you- huh? Is there someone behind you? Kiel: *Blushes and hides behind Chelsea* ah… Chelsea: It’s Kiel. You know how she is like… she’s shy around people except ME! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~~~!!!!!! Maurice: Ok.. I’m done with the- Huh? Were you guys all here? Well, no matter, let’s go. (everyone enters the hotel and go up to front desk) Kiel: Uhm…. could you…uh… tell us which room…. Anti-APTX4869 is in? Guide: One moment please. (opens book) He is in Room 706, our most special room in this Hotel! The elevators are over there. *points* Everyone: Thank you! (Everyone except Misaki enters elevator) Misaki-chan: Hey, what are those flowers called in the bouquet? (Points to flowers on desk) Guide: Oh, those are Wisterias. Aren’t they pretty? For each floor there are different flowers. It’s everywhere too! These were delivered from the flower shop across the street, same goes for the all others in the hotel. Misaki-chan: Wow... It’s so pretty…. Aeyra: Misaki-chan! Hurry! Misaki-chan: (Startles) I’m coming! (Runs into the elevator) IU: Hey, do you guys wonder why Cure-kun called us all here? Aeyra: A bit. Chelsea:OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH~~!!! Of course! Kudo: *PLEASE SOMEONE MAKE HER SHUT UP!* It's rather intriguing.... Maurice: Yeah… Don’t really know him very much. I don’t know why he would call me Kiel: Um… , I am.. uh.. kinda.... Misaki-chan: Kiel don’t be that shy! (nods head) Yep! DING! (exits elevator) ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Part 1 - Shocking Party ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Aeyra: (looks at vase on a table) Wha-? Lots of pretty flowers.... Misaki-chan: Yeah, the guide said that there are different flowers in every floor! Aeyra: Hmmmm... These are... Kudo: Trumpet flowers. There are 8 of them… *Hm…..* IU: Come on guys! Or else we’re leaving you behind! Aeyra, Kudo and Misaki-chan: Coming~! (Goes to room 706 and sees Forever Lost) Misaki-chan: Je-chan! (Runs up and hugs) Forever Lost: Misaki-chan!? What are you doing here?! IU: It’s not just Misaki-chan, you know. FL: Kaichou? Huh? Are you guys here to see Cure-kun too? Kudo: Yeah, I assume that you also are here to see him? FL: (nods head) Aeyra: Then why are you outside the room? FL: I’ve been knocking, but he hasn’t answered. Strange... Maurice: Is this like him? He may be sleeping. Misaki-chan: No, not from what I know. What about you guys? Everyone besides Misaki-chan and Maurice: (shakes head) Chelsea: Well, let’s go in and jump him! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~~!!(turns knob) Kiel: Chelsea! We can’t jus- Chelsea: Eh? It’s open.... OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~!!! Playing tri- (Chelsea suddenly stops movement.) IU: It’s not like Cure-kun to be careless…. Huh? What’s wrong Chelsea? Kudo: (shocked, grabs knob) *Dammit Cure-kun, don’t tell me!* Let me through! Chelsea: W-w-wha- (Sees sight of empty ransacked room. Everyone looks around as Kudo kneels to the ground.) Maurice: What the heck happened?! Aeyra: Where’s Cure-kun? Is he this messy? Jeez we gotta star- Kudo: No…. (Gets up) Misaki: (eyes widen) Don’t tell me...! IU: It seems he might have been kidnapped. Maurice: Are you positive IU? IU: The way this room is set up, it’s definitely not what Cure-kun would do. Especially… (Points at coffee) Maurice: Hm? Spilled coffee on the table? Kudo: His favorite drink is coffee. He would go insane if he would spill them. Aeyra: How can you be so sure? IU: The smell. It's too strong for coffee, so it is better not- Kudo: Huh, how strong can it be? (Sips some of coffee, runs into the bathroom.) Khaaack Oh my GOD!! That- (Cough Cough) IU: *Hahaha... That’s what you get for earlier…* It looks like this is 4 shots of espresso… It must be Cure-kun’s since he loves extreme taste. Kudo: (shouts from bathroom) Ughh.. It tastes like dirt! IU: … Anyways, the coffee was spilled towards the TV, so it looks like he was watching Detective Conan. It also looks like he got hit by something, causing him to drop his coffee on the table. FL: Oh no! We got to find him! Chelsea: Oh no! Conan is in trouble! IU: (stares at Chelsea watching TV) Where is the…. Ah, there it is, (Takes the remote across the table) Ew, this is wet and sticky….*huh?* Which one is the power button… oh, this must be it… (TV shuts off) Chelsea: Hey! I was watching that… Oh well… OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~~!!!! IU: This isn’t important, Chelsea. (Places remote on the table) We need to find Cure-kun. Kudo: Well, he left us another clue, that’s for sure. Everyone except Kudo: Hm? Kudo: Look. (Picks up a flower) Misaki: It looks like... an Orange Mock? Kudo: *Why is this flower even here? After all, this... Wait, isn’t...!* (Looks around the room and smirks) I’ve figured it out! IU: Huh? Misaki-chan: Already? Aeyra: you are fast.. Kudo: Hmpf , It’s nothing really… after all, there is always only one truth! ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Part 2: One-by-one ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Maurice: So kudo… Tell us what you think. Kudo: It’s not what I think, I know it. It’s- (Blackout) Kudo: Huh? Kiel: What happened?! Aeyra: What the heck?! IU: Really? RIGHT NOW!? (Muffled noise) FL: What was that? (lights turn on) Misaki: Phew, the lights are back on! Chelsea: Where’s Kudo? (Everyone looks where Kudo was.) Kiel: He’s gone! IU: Wait, that flower is different… Misaki-chan: Ah! That is…. (Flash back) Misaki-chan: Hey, what are those flowers called in the bouquet? (Points to flowers on desk) Guide: Oh, those are Wisterias. Aren’t they pretty? For each floor there are different flowers. It’s everywhere too! These were delivered from the flower shop across the street, same goes for the all others in the hotel. (Flash back ends) Misaki-chan: Wisteria! FL: Uh… why would it change?…and there’s 7 of them… O_o Maurice: Okay guys, this has gotten more serious. This will now be an official investigation. Chelseaj500, IdentityUnknown, I’m putting you in charge of it. IU: Wait, what? Chelsea: Really?! COOL! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~! Aeyra: Chelsea, now is NOT THE TIME TO LAUGH! FL: Okay, let’s begin, okay? Kaichou, Chelseaj500, what should we do? IU: Aeyra and Misaki-chan, try and figure out the meaning the flowers. You and Kiel, go look around the floor to see if there is anyone suspicious. Chelsea, Maurice and I will look for more clues... wait, how come you called Chelsea ? Maurice: You didn’t know? Chelsea is Under-cover agent…. IU: Wha- Chelsea: OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~!! Sorry I didn’t tell you guys! It’s a secret after all… OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHHOHO~~~~!!! Maurice: A-haha..ha.. no, Now back to the position! Everyone: Got it! (FL and Kiel leaves; Chelsea, Maurice and IU walks around the room, and Aerya and Misaki-chan goes to the flowers) Aeyra: Any ideas what this means Misaki-chan? Misaki-chan: Well, the first flower was an Orange Mock. This other flowers were Wisteria…. Hey... Aeyra: What is it? Misaki-chan: I don’t know if it has to do with the case, but this type of flower was downstairs. It was in the bouquet on the front desk. (Looks around and points at a vase) See that vase filled with 7 Trumpet flowers? That flower was also in the bouquet. Same as that vase we saw in the hall. Aeyra: Huh? Really? *So many flowers… why but why 7? Wait, could it be?* (gets up and runs out door) I need to go check something! Misaki-chan: Aeyra! (watches her leave then walks up to IU) Um, Kaichou, Aeyra-san left.... IU: Eh? Don’t worry Misaki-chan, I’m sure she’ll be back soon….*Where did Chelsea go?* SCENE CHANGE: In the hall... FL: See anyone strange Kiel? Kiel: Ah.. uh.. no…Not yet… Forever-chan… FL: (walks ahead) Well, we better be careful! The kidnapper may still be nearby! Kiel: Okay….(Kiel notices something under her foot.) Ah, what is… Huh a paper…? (She opens the paper and eyes widen as she reads…) !!! Uh… Fore- mmmp!!.... (Someone grabs her from behind.) FL: Say, Kiel, what do you think those flowers meant? ….Kiel? (looks behind.) …KIEL? SCENE CHANGE: In the elevator.. Aeyra: (panting) so, what is it? How did Kudo figure it out so quickly? I better get back to the others… (Ding!) Aeyra: Hm? Wow pretty flowers here too… Wait those weren’t the flowers…*An Oleander? Isn’t that-* Am I on the wrong floor? (checks ) I guess I am... who pressed… (Foot step) Aeyra: …huh? (Smack) Gah…*Crap…No…Who…*(Aeyra sees a shadow but her vision fades) ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Part 3: Silent Party ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// SCENE CHANGE: At Cure-kun’s room.... Maurice: Hmmm… Misaki-chan: Hmmm…. FL: Hmmm….. IU: Hmmmm….mmmm? (Looks at the coffee) *Something is… strange…* (Everyone notices IU staring at the Coffee.) IU: Misaki-chan…. Misaki-chan: Yeah? IU: What did you tell Aeyra before she left? Misaki-chan I told her….. (Flash back) Aeyra: Any ideas what this means Misaki-chan? Misaki-chan: Well, the first flower was an Orange Mock. This other flowers were Wisteria…. Hey... Aeyra: What is it? Misaki-chan: I don’t know if it has to do with the case, but this type of flower was downstairs. It was in the bouquet on the front desk. (Looks around and points at a vase) See that vase filled with 7 Trumpet flowers? That flower was also in the bouquet. Same as that vase we saw in the hall. Aeyra: Huh? Really? *So many flowers… why but why 7? Wait, could it be?* (gets up and runs out door) I need to go check something! Misaki-chan: Aeyra! (watches her leave then walks up to IU) Um, Kaichou, Aeyra-san left.... (Flash back end) IU: I see… hmm….. What about you, Je-chan, anything Kiel said? FL: No… She just disappeared. Only thing I saw wa- *Huh?* N-no way! Misaki-chan: (Has no Idea) Huh? What is it? FL: I remember something! I'll be back! (Whispers to Misaki-chan and runs out the room down the hall) IU: What? Muarice: Misaki-chan, we can’t lose another member! Follow her! Misaki-chan: Got it! (Misaki-chan runs after FL) Chelsea: Yawwwnnn…. Is it morning yet? Ohohohohoho….(Rubs eyes) IU: No… wait, what were you doing? And where were you? Chelsea: in this room… I was sleeping because I was tired OHOHOHohoho-Yawwnn…. IU: Ah-hahahha….NO! TRY TO BE SERIOUS CHELSEA!!! Chelsea: I am serious OH! OHO! OHOHOHOHHOHOHOHOHOH~~!! Maurice: So… about this Flower….. IU: Huh? Maurice: This flower… it was Wisteria was it? IU: Yes. Misaki-chan said it was at the lobby. Maurice: You figure out of something? Chelsea: Where is everyone? IU: They all disappeared except for Me, Chi- (Maurice stares) IU: *Aaacck* I mean, Maurice, you and… wait… OH NO! Maurice: Oh crap! (Maurice runs out) Chelsea: Huh? What? IU: Dammit! They went out 15 minutes ago! It’s taking them too long! (IU and Chelsea runs out) Chelsea: Whoa, Wait! I’m a catch you~~ OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH~!! IU: *Chelsea, please….* Chi- I mean, Maurice! Chelsea: OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~~!!!! I AM THE PRINCESS FROLICKING IN THE FANCY~ HALL WITH FLOWERS!!!!!! IU: NOW IS NOT THE TIME, CHELSEA! *Flowers… why?* Chelsea: Jeez, don’t be mean… OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~!!!!!! (Trips and crashes on the floor) IU: Are you OK? Chelsea: Oww…. I’m fine…OhohohohohOHOHOHOHO~~~!!! IU: Come on, we gotta find Chi- I mean, Maurice… Chelsea: Well, are we continuing our search? OHOHOHOHOHOHO~~!!! IU: *I just said that… * Come on, Ch- I mean, Maurice should be some where near by. Chelsea: Right! (Skipping) LA~LA~ OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH~~! IU: Any ideas Chelsea? Chelsea: OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO- Hm? IU: Anything strange that you have herd or seen? Chelsea: No, not at all~~OHOHOHOHOHOOHOHO~~~! Isn’t it fun to run? IU: Yea it sure does… Hm…? Ah! Chi- I mean, Maurice! Maurice: IU… IU: Huh? Maurice: Misaki-chan and Forever-chan are… IU: N-No… ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Part 4 – Flower’s Truth ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Chlesea: Is that a flower? Maurice: It looks like…a Saffron… IU: I figure this thing strange. Chelsea: Hm? What is? Maurice: Every time when someone disappears, different types of flowers are found. Chelsea: Is the kidnapper a florist or something? Maurice: But why flowers? What do they mean? …. IU: Ah! That… That’s it! Maurice: Huh? Chelsea: Oh! OHOHOHOHOHOHO~~!! Looks like IU figured it out~~ IU: I need to make sure. We have to go back to the room! Maurice: Huh? Why back to the room? Chelsea: Let’s hurry~~ OHOHOHOHOHOHO~~!! (IU runs to Cure-kun’s room) Maurice: W-wait! It’s dangerous if you go alone! Chelsea: Oh? Are we running again? OHOHOHOHOHOHOHO- (Crunch) Hm? (Chelsea looks at the floor, and finds a flower with its stem snapped in half) Chelsea: Aw, a pretty flower snapped in to two pieces… *Wait… Isn’t this…* (Chelsea turns to where IU and Mauric ran into) Ah, guys~~ Wait for me~~ OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH~~!! (At Cure-kun’s room.) IU: (Panting) Search the room. There might be something! Maurice: Right on. IU: (Runs to the computer and types, and searches the desk) Come on…. Chelsea: OHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~!!! You guys run too fast~~!! IU: (Looks at Chelsea’s hand) Chelsea, what’s that in your hand? Chelsea: Oh this? It looks like Bluebell. It looks pretty but I snapped it by accident~~ OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~!!! IU: (Slams on the desk) Dammit! Maurice: Well, nothing here, did you find anything? IU: No, there’s nothing… I thought there would have been some clues… Chelsea: What are we looking fo- Huh were those there before? (points at the flower on the table.) Maurice: What’s this? (Looks at the flowers) 6 Black roses with 6 Yellow Zinnias (Light turns off) IU: No.. Not again! Maurice: Chelsea! IU! Stay together! Chelsea: IU? Where are you? IU: Come to the computer! Chelsea: Where? Maurice: Bright light! Go toward the Bright Li- IU: Maurice? (Light turns on) IU: M-Maurice? Chelsea: He’s gone…. IU: D…Damit! Chelsea: Uh… IU…. IU: Huh? Chelsea: How many flowers did Maurice say there were..? IU: You mean the 6 black roses and 6 yellow Zinnias? Chelsea: There’s 1 more of each… IU: What? (IU runs up to the table and looks at the flowers) IU: But… why? Chelsea: It’s.. it’s my fault… I... I snapped… this…. IU: Bluebell? What about it? Chelsea: (Sobs) I herd that if you pick Bluebells…brings you bad luck… IU: It’s Ok.. It’s not your fault.. Chelsea: (Sniffles) What bothers me the most are the black roses IU: Huh? Why do you say that? Chelsea: Cure-kun told me before that… Black Roses…. means death…. IU: It’s ok, Chelsea it- (Looks outside through the window) *What? Don’t tell me!* Hehehe… Chlesea: hm? IU: I think I know how to solve this… ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Part 5 – Welcome Party ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Chelsea: Huh? Really? IU: I need to check… Chelsea: Check what? (IU runs out) Chelsea: Wha- Wait~! IU: Chelsea! Hurry! We need to go somewhere! (Picks up the flowers) SCENE CHANGE: Outside of hotel. IU: There! Come on! Chelsea: Huh? A flower shop? IU: When I looked out the window and saw this flower shop, I remembered what Misaki-chan said when she was telling us what the flower’s name was after Kudo disappeared! She said that the guide said the flowers were delivered by this shop so they must know something. Chelsea: Eh? OHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~!! How is this going to help? IU: It’s a flower shop so it should know- Chelsea: Ah! They would know what the flowers mean! IU: Exactly *I just said that… haha…;;;;* (Opens door.) IU: Excuse me! Is anyone here? Florist: Yes, can I help you? IU: Can you tell us what these flowers mean? (Hands over the flowers) Florist: Oh.. those? They… (10 minutes later) Chelsea: Thank you~~!! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~!!! IU: Oh and I’ll take this also… (IU and Chelsea run back to the Hotel room 706) IU: So, Zinnia means thoughts of absent friends, but since it is Yellow Zinnia, it means Daily remembrance…. But if we put them together then it becomes…. Chelsea: Daily remembrance… Thoughts of absent friends… Wait, don’t you mean- IU: Missing Friends that you think of…. Then that Black rose…. Chelsea: Black Rose means death…. OH! NO! IU: Yeah, Black Rose and Zinnia meant “Death of missing friends that you think about” or in this case, we think about them because we are worried so “Death of missing friends that you are worried about” I think the kidnapper is trying to say he or she will kill them. Chelsea: That’s Horrible! But… I’m still curious why you brought that… IU: Oh, this? I just wanted to buy one. (IU takes out the plant she bought for the kidnapper.) IU: Now I need to put this…. There. Perfect all we need to do is to wait. Chelsea: OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~!!!! HOW CUTE~~~!!!! IU: *Anyways…. How am I supposed to know when the kidnapper actually appear?* Hey Chelsea, do you see anyone outside? Chelsea: (Glance at the door with a shadow peeking in the room) Nope~ there is n- (Quickly turns back and runs toward to door) Hey! I though I saw someone… IU: *That must be the kidnapper!* Chelsea! Come here! Quick! Chelsea: Ok… (Stares at the door) *I thought I saw….* IU: Alright, kidnapper… you should show yourself. Chelsea: IU, isn’t it dangerous to talk to the kidnapper? IU: Hehehehe…. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Chelsea: OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~~!!! I guess you found out who the kidnapper is!! IU: Yes, I did. And it was the most suspicious person. Chelsea: Huh? We know this person? IU: Oh yea. We know this person alright…. Isn’t that right…? (Looks at the door) I think you should give up, kidnapper. Chelsea: So… who is it? IU: Hehehe…. Why don’t you just show yourself? Detective Kudo? Chelsea: Wha-? (confused.) ???: Sadly, you aren’t quite right. Chelsea: Th-That voice! Kudo: I’m not the one you are looking for. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Part 6 – Preparation ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// IU: Huh? Am I wrong? Kudo: … jeez, do I look like a kidnapper to you? *What are they talking about?* Chelsea: What the- what’s going on here? How are you even here? Kudo: Well, the thing is… Aeyra: Owww…. That still hurts… Well, we escaped… IU: Wait what? What is going on here? Kudo: What? What about it? IU: About you an- Chelsea: Wait, what about the others? Aeyra: We don’t know. We gotta save them. IU: How did you guys get out? Kudo: I don’t know. We were trapped in a room, but the door was open. Only thing I can remember is that Aeyra kicked me to wake me up.. Aeyra: I was tied up so Kudo helped me free…. We didn’t see the others though. And like Kudo said, we were in a room, but the door was open. IU: I see… Wait, Kudo! You solved it right? Who is was it?! Kudo: Huh? What are you talking about? Aeyra: (whispers to IU) It looks like he can’t remember anything about the case of kidnapping. I think he bumped his head hard on the floor when he was thrown in the room. Chelsea: Are you ok, Kudo? Kudo: Yea I’m fine. (sits down on the computer chair) I’ll tell Cure-kun to fix me up when he arrive. IU: (whispers to Aeyra) Ugh.. do you have any idea who the kidnapper is? Aeyra: No… I kind of saw the kidnapper but I couldn’t tell because I got knocked out right away. Chelsea: I just hope that everyone else is alright… (There was a long pause after the conversation. Kudo and Aeyra seemed like they were waiting for someone.) Aeyra: So… where are the others? IU: They were all kidnapped. Only me and Chelsea was left. Kudo: What? Kidnapped? Aeyra: I see… so even Maurice ended up disappearing too anything strange? Kudo: Whoa, wait a sec. What do you mean by kidnapped? Chelsea: All we know is that there were flowers every time someone goes missing. Kudo: *Hey, I just got completely ignored here..* Aeyra: Huh? Really? IU: Yea. When Misaki-chan and Forever-chan left the room and never came back, we found a Saffron and… Chelsea: I broke it by accident but this is Bluebell… then Maurice disappeared when we found 6 of these yellow Zinnias and black Roses. Then, when Maurice was disappeared, there were 7 of each. Aeyra: Really? Why are there so many flowers? IU: That’s because they have their own meanings. We know that Wisteria means welcome and Saffron meant Beware of success. We figured that the combination of black Roses and yellow Zinnias were “Death of missing friends that you think about” and since there were 7, we thought it meant everyone. See? ther- (IU stops her movement) Aeyra: What’s wrong? Chelsea: Hmm? Something wrong with… HUH? (Kudo turns to see what happened and finds 5 Black roses and 5 yellow Zinnias.) IU: Who.. and when,….? When I wasn’t paying attention… Chelsea: Whoa who ever the kidnapper is, that person is amazing~~~~!!! IU:*When? There were 7 of them before Kudo and Aeyra arrived, but they didn’t get close to it at all...* Chelsea, did anyone enter this room after us? Chelsea: No, only Aeyra and Kudo did. No one else before them. IU: I see…. *How is this possible?* Aeyra: IU. Should we look for the others? IU: No, don’t leave. If the kidnapper sees you, then that person would get you again. Kudo: Strange thing is, why are we targeted? Did we do something? Why would there be a kidnapper kidnapping us in the first place? Also, how did the flowers disappear? IU: I’m asking the same questions as well… (picks up flowers)… but I still can’t figure it out. Chelsea: IU, where did you put the remote? I can’t find it. IU: Why? Isn’t it on the table where I lef- *What?* (IU Notices the remote missing) I left it here… Aeyra: Huh? You mean this remote? (takes the remote placed on top of the TV) IU: Oh it was there…*Wait what just happened..?* Chelsea: Oh! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~!! This case is stressing me too much. I need a break. (Turns on the TV) Oh! Conan is still on! YAY~ OHOHOHOHOHO~~!! IU: *Anyways… this can’t be a different room… I came in through the same door as I did in the morning…* Hey is there a room 709 here? Aeyra: Huh? Why? Kudo: She thinks that the 9 and the 6 might have been switched around. But IU, This hotel only has rooms that end with 0 through 7. Chelsea: Whoa! Ran is going to solve the case! IU: Chelsea, let’s keep it down so we can- Aeyra: Kudo? Are you alright? Kudo: I’m sorry I’m getting dizzy… IU: Aeyra you should take care of him. Aeyra: Alright.. Chelsea: Oh that was fun! I can’t believe he was hiding there! IU: Didn’t we watch that already? It is quite a long time ago… Chelsea: It’s always fun to watch it again! Look! (Rewinds) IU: Chelsea, we should try and find the others. Chelsea: Ok. Since the show ended… (places remote on the table.) IU: Aeyra is Kudo alright? Kudo: I’m fine. I just need a rest. Aeyra: Cure-kun invited us to a party and what is this? Such troubles we girls have to go throught. Kudo: Hey, Maurice and I are not girls Aeyra: You know what I mean by that. Chelsea: Ew what is this sticky stuff? IU: Oh, those are Cure-kun’s coffee that was spilt… Kudo: That dirt juice? Ugh, don’t even mention it in front of me… IU: Well, he likes it really strong… He said he like them bla- *Wait, what the?* Chelsea: IU, why did you have to buy this plant? IU: It was fun to mess around so I wanted one. Aeyra: Hmmm? Isn’t this Cure-kun’s favorite plant? IU: Huh? Really? Aeyra: Yeah.. If you read his Wiki Bio page, he did mention this. IU: Well, that is not very important. We need to find the others. Chelsea: It’s getting late… (looks at the sunset.) Oh, the sunset is so beautiful. I love the mix of yellow, red, and orange color. OHOHOHOHOHOHO~~!!! IU: *Huh? Orange… something just reminded me…* (Eyes widen) Kudo! Kudo: Huh? (Wakes up with eyes half-closed) What is it? IU: Kudo! Do you remember the flower you saw? Kudo: Huh? What flower? Aeyra: Huh? Flower? You mean the flower… uhh.. what was the name? Chelsea: Are you talking about that yellowish white flower? IU: Yea… what was the name? Chelsea: Oh, you mean the Orange Mock? Kudo: Orange… Mock…? IU: Yeah. It was the last thing you were holding before you disappeared. Do you remember anything? Kudo: No… IU: Oh. I see.. Kudo: But just to tell you, Orange mock represents ‘deceit,’ if that helps. *Turns away from others.* IU: Deceit…? *But how did Kudo solve it just with that? There must be something…* Chelsea: *Yawns* This is a long case… And I can’t sleep in the sofa since Kudo is there. IU: you can rest on that chair. It is quite comfortable. There should be a lever adjust back angle. Chelsea: Ok… (Pull lever) Huh? (Falls down) Oww… IU: Are you ok? Chelsea: Yea… It looks this one was to lock tilting… so many levers tricked me… Aeyra: Hahaha.. you should be careful. (Helps Chelsea get up) IU: *Tricky huh… Wait, that’s it! That’s why Kudo figured it out!* Chelsea: (sits on the chair again pulls lever.) Ah! Perfect! OHOHOHOHOHO~~~!!! IU: Chelsea, get up. And Aeyra, wake Kudo up. Chelsea and Aeyra: Huh? Why? Chelsea: Right before I wanted to sleep…. Kudo: For your information, I’m resting, not sleeping. (Get’s up with eyes half-closed.) IU: *Your eyes tell me that you were sleeping…* Anyways. The kidnapper is a funny guy… Chelsea: Guy? It’s a he? Aeyra: How can you be so sure? Kudo: Well, I don’t know what is going on, but I’m listening… *smirks* ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Solution - Perfect Party ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// IU: Hahahaha… HAHAHAHAHA!! Oh, I’m sorry. This is just so funny. Aeyra: Huh? What is? IU: First. The room… The ones that I was suspecting were the remote and the coffee. Chelsea: Remote? IU: You found it on the TV, not on the table where I left it last. It means that some one was here. Aeyra: Oh really? Ok that makes sense, but why coffee? IU: Hu hu hu… well, I’ll ask you this one Kudo, how was Cure-kun’s coffee? Kudo: Huh? That dirt juice? Yuk. Don’t even mention that…. IU: Exactly. It was extremely bitter, but Chelsea, how did the coffee feel like? Chelsea: Huh? It was sticky…. IU: Does that ring a bell? Aeyra: *Bitter coffee… sticky…? What?* No way! IU: Yup! A bitter coffee wouldn’t be sticky right? So that means that spilt coffee is a different coffee, meaning that Cure-kun was with someone else. Kudo: What? Really? IU: Also, Kudo, you can stop playing dumb now. Kudo: Huh? What do you mean? IU: You said you don’t remember anything right? Then can you explain how you can remember the bitterness of the coffee when you said you can’t remember a thing about the case! Kudo: (Frozen in shock.) Hu hu hu…. Very good, IU. I was faking about the memory loss. Chelsea: Huh? But why? Kudo: I just wanted to give IU a chance to solve this case for once. Aeyra: Then how did you know it was Cure-kun? IU: The flower. Orange mock means deceit. In other words, trick, which Cure-kun loves to do. Isn’t that right, Kudo? You planned this with Cure-kun with the start didn’t you? Kudo: Unfortunately, IU, I’m not the one who planned this with Cure-kun. Anyways, where are the others? IU: I don’t know that yet... Kudo: Hm? What is this? (Looks down under the sofa) Chelsea: Oh! That one! I forgot to tell you IU! OHOHOHOHOHO~~!! IU: Huh? What about the sofa? Chelsea: There was a little mark between the table and the sofa. You might want to check it out. IU: Really? (Examines) Oh there is! What is… *This… there’s a gap?* Kudo: Wait. This can mean… (Pushes sofa) IU: This… A secret passage? Chelsea: Cool! Another adventure! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~!!! IU: I see. This makes sense. So the flowers that went missing were because someone took it from here. Kudo: Let’s check it out. We might find others. (Everyone goes down the stairs) IU: It’s so dark… Chelsea: I can’t see… Kudo: There should be a light switch… (Whisper) Aeyra: Hey. Do I hear something? ???: (Claps) Very good IU. Nice job. IU: Huh..? Who was that? ???: Hehehe… I’ll give you a hint… Think simple. Chelsea: OHOHOHOHOHOHO~~!!! That’s Cure-kun’s favorite line! Cure-kun: Yea it is me, Cure-kun. Do you know why I have done this? IU: No… I was trying to figure that out. Cure-kun: Well, here is your answer. (Light turns on) Everyone: Happy Birth Day, IU and Chelsea! IU: Huh? This was your plan? Chelsea: You know, you could have made this case easier for us to solve… you gave me a headache. IU: You even made her cry! Cure-kun: Whoa sorry about that. I didn’t mean to make you cry with the Bluebell… IU: Wait, but the birth day is tomorrow… Misaki-chan: Check the time… Maurice: Cure-kun actually predicted the exact time. Kiel: Oh.. uh.. here is a… uh.. clock… FL: It is now 12am. (Clock ticks) … and 1 minute… stares at clock. Chelsea: Aw! How nice of you guys! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~!!! IU: You know you could have just thrown a party without this kind of trouble… Cure-kun: Oi, I needed to write a fan fic and I couldn’t think of it. Misaki-chan: So I decided to give him an idea about making a fanfic for you girls! *Hugs Chelsea and gives cookie to IU* IU: Yay~ cookie! *Munch munch* Chelsea: So….. Everyone: …. (Cricket sound) Cure-kun: Do I hear what I hear? (His face turn pale) Aeyra: Oh dear, Cure-kun have Entomophobia… especially one of them are circkets… Kudo: Oh that was just a ring tone from Maurice… see? (Points at Maurice) Maurice: No.. not that… yea.. ok…. I’ll be there soon after this… (hangs up and turns around) Huh? Oh, sorry that was from the head quarters… Kudo: Anyways. We have to celebrate right? Cure-kun: *Phew, no bugs…* So… Who wants cake? Everyone: I do! (Everyone laughs and enjoys the party) -----THE END....?----- ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Hey guys! It's Cure-kun here! Let's talk about the story. This story was first created by Misaki-chan. She wrote the main plots, and Forever Lost and Aeyra gave us some Ideas as well. (Even a little idea can be big! ) I'm sorry if parts did not make sense. It was because I was sort of rushing it on revising. Some useless parts of the stories are there to trick you. It was not a mistake. This took me about 2 weeks to write and 5 days revising. let's talk Characters! Kudo - Yea, He didn't solve this one. Instead, IU did! That's because I wanted to tell you guys that I can make the story where any one can solve it. (Writer's power ) In the story, I made him sound very similar to actual Shinichi.... I don't know why that happened. IU and Chelsea - HAPPY BIRTH DAY, TO BOTH! This story was made for them. It was Misaki-chan's idea. so the credit goes to her. I think I made Chelsea look like a really insane person... but she would like it that way. And for IU... I'm sorry if your lines sound stupid.. you and Chelsea have the most lines through out the story. Aeyra - If you have noticed, she is similar to Ran in the story... Well I don't know how that happened. Misaki-chan - She wrote main plots and planned this together with me. So she knew what would happen. In the story, she is also the co-planner with me about the kidnapping case. Maurice - I don't know him a lot. All I know is that he is the Administrator (and creator of this site) so... Well, I had to make up stuff. (Sorry Maurice! hope you will understand.) In the story, he is on phone to show that he is busy. Kiel - Kiel was introduced in the first fan fic, but well, she wasn't properly introduced. So I decided to add her here again. In the story, the paper she read said "There is no kidnapper. It's a surprise party." Forever Lost - She is introduced in this story because Misaki-chan wanted to add her. In the story, when she saw Kiel was 'missing' was actually the part when I told her what is going on. Mohorovicic - He was going to be in this story, but I couldn't fit him... I'm sorry Mohorovicic.... ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// SPOILER for the next fan fic (the one that I was originally going to post.) The Will Left Behind - This one might change its title. It is going to take long time. This is the story with Sayomi nad Meitantei Holmes will be introduced. Mohorovicic will be introduced here instead as well as a "New Character!" *Also, a hint for the next fan fic is somewhere in the story! Good luck finding it!(not the one on the bottom)* ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// (3 hours after the party started...) Cure-kun: Oh man... what time is it? (Checks time) OH NO! Kudo: Huh? What's wrong? Cure-kun: I gotta get to work... IU and Chelsea: Go ahead. We'll clean this up. Aeyra: Oh no you don't. You girls are not going to go through any more troubles. Solving a case is enough. Maurice: Well, I'm leaving. I have a meeting to go to. (Waves hand) I'll see you later! All except Maurice: Bye! Cure-kun: I'm going up to work on something. I'll see you guys later. All except Cure-kun: ok, see ya. Kiel: Uh.. Umm.. Chelsea: Hm? What's wrong? Kiel: Akakata,... I uh... have to go... Kudo: Huh? Who is Akakata? Chelsea: Oh that is my new name! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~!!! Oh and Kiel, I want to stay a bit longer ok? Kiel: Ok... just.. a bit longer... Kudo: *man this might get confusing later on* FL: Misaki-chan I'll be going now. Misaki-chan: Already? Come on, have some fun and then go... FL: I'll have to go now. Misaki-chan: Ok~ (Hugs FL) bye~ FL: Don't worry, I'll talk to you later. Bye. Aeyra: Hey Kudo let me ask you why you did that? Kudo: Huh? did what? Aeyra: About you hitting me with something which knocked me out Kudo: Oh, that... well, it kind of slipped off from my hand... Aeyra: What did? Kudo: That vase right there... Sorry. I thought I hit someone and I saw you on the floor. Aeyra: I see... Are you- Kudo: Hm? did I hear Cure-kun calling me? I guess I better go, see ya! *Run, Run, Run away* Cure-kun: Did something happen? Aeyra: No, it's nothing... didn't have something to do? Cure-kun: I have to go to my house to do that, so I decided I'd enjoy the party as much as I can... Akakata(Chelsea): Well, I'll be leaving now. I can't make Kiel wait for me too long. IU: That's fine. I'll see you later. I have to go as well Cure-kun: Well, everyone is leaving? Oh well, at least it was fun. Aeyra: Hey, wait, where is Kudo? Cure-kun: In the restroom. He drank one of my coffee by accident. IU and Aeyra: Oh dear... *Ahahahaha... serves him right* Kudo: (Cough cough) You are mean... Cure-kun... (Cough cough) --------THE END--------- Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lia. 45 Report post Posted May 16, 2011 Cool story, Cure-kun! Can you make me a character in your next story, please? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted May 16, 2011 Haha! Happy Birthday to Pyre and Azu-chan! I'm like Ran? Hmm... I thought I was more of a Haibara.Oh well. Good job! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted May 16, 2011 *laughs* Thanks Cure-kun! This is one of the best birthday presents I've received in a long time! I suspected you from the start...*chuckles* but it was a good story! I want to read "The Will Left Behind" badly...really badly. I was gonna say "Why no Sayomi x Holmes?" but then read the note at the bottom. Cure-kun, you and your insane love of coffee... *chuckles* You guys were all planning this behind our backs... Thank you, everyone! Thanks for the amazing birthday present! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted May 16, 2011 Good job on the rest of it Cure-kun! *hugs* (Yes, Cure-kun was mean enough to only let me see about half the story... ) And I'm glad you like it kaichou! I was hoping you would. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted May 16, 2011 OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO!! I LAUGHED SO HARD!! WOW!! THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE PRESENT!! I LOVED IT!! HILARIOUS!! Wow. All to be a surprise party. I knew Kudo was faking memory loss because of the coffee's taste, but I didn't know the case was a disguise... AWESOME!! CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT STORY!! KEEP IT UP!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anti-APTX4869 181 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 Aww thanks guys girls! You guysgirls are the best at making me feel better! @Lady Irene Alder Sure. Hm.. I wonder if I can but I will try to. @Aeyra Well, that too. But if this was like manga, then you can see that you are acting like Ran. (Hmmm... nah. I can't draw...) @IdentityUnknown Sayomi and Holmes will be on "The Will left behind". They won't be like *Goosebumps* kind of romance but you get the idea. It is still under construction. @Misaki-chan *HUGS* yea I didn't want to spoil the fun! And cool! You did get the message from the last line: Kudo: (Cough cough) You are mean... Cure-kun... (Cough cough) b d @Akakata Yup! As always, you have a good observation! And yea, I made it funny because I like to make you laugh. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 O.o Message? I had no clue.... Hurray! Lucky guess! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 @Chelsea: I noticed the bitter coffee and never thought the case was real...but I didn't expect the party. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted May 17, 2011 I just read it again... XD OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO!! Well, DK kept going on about the coffee, so... That's all I knew. I DID NOT expect the party... Well, that's why it's a surprise, right? AND I LOVED THE EMOTION ICONS in the story this time!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
