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    Special birthday? ... Been ignored!

    It did happen before, my parents were busy and couldn't remember it's my birthday as they're on about changing tires when I was 13 years old. This one is quite memorable, cos I don't have birthday party before for birthday celebrations.

    Family celebrations, yes... friend celebrations... are rare. If they did, they often make it private one to one calling or sending email. I have no complaint. :)

    Special moments, there's none. *shake head*

    I'm willing to see fiasco on birthday for humor treat, bcos every year's birthday is normal with private family celebrations.

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    Poem title: Aftermath of encounter at suana.

    Author: Artistic poet/tzswei (tzswei is my fanfiction username)

    Fandom: Detective Conan

    Characters: Haibara, Kogoro, Agasa, Conan

    Summary: A deleted scene of movie 15, after Kogoro return from unisex suana. Kogoro isn't Kogoro afterwards.

    Word association: Avalanche

    Disclaimer: I don't own Detective Conan - all the characters belong to Gosho Aoyama.

    Bring in sweater, scarf, goggles, you name it,

    down to place where kids have fun with Conan.

    Agasa bring them down and only allowed himself being hit

    by them, except one bored shrunken kid.

    Two of them, Haibara just do nothing.

    Much to her pleasure she can imagine vividly

    what happen to all including Kogoro as she was betting

    he was up to his sleeve, searching for woman to gaggle-

    One howl from somewhere at mountain can bring avalanche

    Surprisingly, it didn't. she imagine what exactly happened,

    either fall over the pond when saw pretty or met a gorilla hunch

    over the nothing but pool of sauna, likely mistook it as lady.

    Anything can happen in the wild of snow, she betting second

    option which happen at sauna where she heard Kogoro's scream.

    When saw his end-of-the-world expression, she already reckoned.

    He did run off screaming again the moment he saw girl-in-face-lift-mask.

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    Poem title: Assembled code name of B.O

    Author: Artistic poet/tzswei (tzswei is my fanfiction username)

    Fandom: Detective Conan

    Characters: Gin, Korn, Vermouth, Chianti

    Summary: Gin takes moment to dwell of his own group, to his musing.

    Word association: rhymed

    Disclaimer: I don't own Detective Conan - all the characters belong to Gosho Aoyama.

    Days weren't best everyday as we're stick to it.

    Everybody call me Gin since I'm in group long enough,

    While I 'is' predator with only words serve as bullet hit

    every day if anyone was up to sleeve they see real gun as toy gun.

    I never told Korn he was first who don't have shame

    With me whenever we were on stakeout, has purpose in group

    As he live as a sniper. Chianti had her days well dress tamed

    and fitted to live up her name serving her justice in her loop.

    Korn, guy who take leaf out of my book since he was my protege.

    Vermouth, she live to old age I suspect long ago was only one can get crap

    out of me, when she serve as boss's woman whenever she turn up or arrive

    to knock sense of anything related to special case. One with Kogoro.

    Sherry, traitor of member was worthy to be hunted and be killed personally.

    Her beauty, and essence, her work had us twirled including boss

    For her wretched eyes which was equally matched mine. Not an ally.

    Sherry is a word which rhymed with 'cherry' on the top of vanilla.

    Korn? A plain Korn has one wrath to have green face if called Corn in English.

    Humor with pun intended for boring day sitting in the train if blend in.

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    I wish I was 45! Oh gawd, I can't go to school teaching with that figure... I don't want to scare student thinking I'm anorexic teacher... Been one, but it's bad reaction of poisoning, it was long ago, I recover from it. I'm okay to be healthy skinny.

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    Congratulations! Dedication is key (:

    Yessss... I'm done being a slave :D

    Thanks!

    :V

    Don't be too skinny! D:

    Don't listen to him! D:

    Eh, why not?

    Why? A person should be physically fit, not too skinny.

    BECAUSE I SAID SO

    Because, Being skinny is just nice. Anyone would love to be skinny.

    Just as Wonder said. But actually losing weight is one of my fear. I have bad case in past because it's not weight loss. I'm not afraid of losing weight as it was past. I want to be skinny healthy!!!

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    Disclaimer: I don't own DC characters :)

    Chapter 1 - Unofficial announcement

    It was uneventful dinner after Shinichi came out from bedroom. He straightaway return to sleep, as if there was nothing to do in past time but feeling jet lag after sitting long hours in plane.

    His closed eyes had him lull as if darkness in room speak of ghosts, the memories he has locked back in his mind and brain; it is inviting. You look closer as flash of light is portal back to past.

    Over the dinner Shinichi looked apologetic at his mother; his sad smile were reserved, he blinked and his face expression changed, his eyes looked down at his plate of fried rice as he aware of stares he receiving from two sides. This moment he had not looked up as he knew the atmosphere in the air is different as he was in Tokyo, now was sitting with Mouri's family. Mouri Kogoro coughed with deliberate attention, by it Shinichi looked up to catch Ran in glance before setting eyes on his uncle.

    'I can forgive you as I promise not to pursue the case you solve in past.' Uncle looked with solemn stem in his voice.

    'Seriously?'

    Shinichi had had not a chance to pursue as Kogoro continued.

    'But Ran has her opinion to forgive you or not when she believe you so easily as she's your girlfriend.'

    His voice turned tight. Shinichi did not flinched and give tiny nod.

    'Dad! Leave it to us to settle! Please!' Ran had hand thrown on table as it crumbled in vibration.

    'Sit down. Ran...' Eri reminded her with begging stare, as it often reserved for her when knowing Ran's capability of item incapacitation.

    And Ran sat back.

    'I know whatever I said won't change anything as I'm guilty and charged. Of lying to her... Ran, I'm like a wolf. If you don't trust me in life I understand, you did so much to help me when I'm a child and forever grateful. I'll remember it as good deed.' Shinichi's voice turned surprising soft when he address her.

    'What are you leading to? Shinichi, are you planning something that I should know?'

    Shinichi took a moment to take a spoon of fried rice before replying back, 'No, in past I've keep this feeling when I was alone with my friends.'

    'You're right about it. If it isn't for me, I can't imagine what will happen to you. During first few nights I have nightmares thinking did something happen to my boyfriend, is he dead, or injured... Truth to be told, if I know you from start either, or, with suspicions, I rather thinking to solve you after taking you in.' Her words started to break. He took this opportunity to voice his thought.

    'My words are nothing more, can't be compared with yours. It's the truth.' She stared at him like she watched with unreadable look.

    'I'm guessing you want to leaving, oh gosh, do- do you really want to leave here?' Her face suddenly turned guiltstricken as if her words hurt herself.

    'Yeah, I'm planning to go to America.'

    Those words had settled in into awkward moment of silence, Mouri family stared in shock. This final unofficial announcement had him remember his last dinner with them, eating his last favorite bowl of fried rice in Tokyo, only Kogoro clear his voice again, breaking ice.

    The taste has linger in his bud of tongue, it's memory were remaining in Tokyo and even in his sleep, from Tokyo to Washington.

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    Disclaimer: I don't own DC characters. :)

    Slices of last ending - Prologue

    'Mr Shinichi Kudou!' The name was called and heard vividly over open space of home. A new home. Shinichi had moved from Japan joining his parents as he couldn't agree more with his parents after his departure from Japan.

    They all are turning Westernized. But it's not I'm blaming or something, I've been look forward to stay one day and know what it's like stay in America. Shinichi thought as he came in with door slammed closed behind him, his wane smile never leave his face. This is where I live, from today onwards?

    He looked around his new home and sighed, idled as his eyes lazily taking in description of his home. Welcome to America. This warm thoughts introducing him to think more of his parents and friends from Japan, Heiji, Ran, best friends who stay by his side but scenario has changed. He also changed. To their eyes he was the same person however Ran speak differently with coldness, her eyes never leave him the moment he knew, deep down she won't forgive with blank look, she has on her face, he couldn't blame her. This lead him feel guilty with admonishment of harshest lesson given.

    As he walked down to path he could see his bedroom, since it was right behind sofa and pathway, which is wide enough for his luggage to move through, the sound of footsteps were heard nearer, with repetitive thud.

    He knew who was coming down the stairs, confirming answer in his thoughts when the silence break, 'Do you really need my help, young man, you're old enough to heave it through.'

    His mother said with firmness edge in voice.

    'I know, I know...' he answer.

    Inpatience is his flaw but it is to his advantage.

    'Just give me a break a moment,' he said before he opened the door.

    Yukkiko looked with concern, her contemplating stare was last thing Shinichi want to see from her before closing It.

    'I see you during dinner.'

    He was off contemplating in his bedroom with silence to regard it as greeting to two person in life. One is mother, and other is Ran.

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    .... okay I give small summary 're-enact'.

    It's small excerpt, for one page study.

    Sonoko: So it's you deliberately put into predicament, isn't it, Kaitou Kid?

    Mouri: Ah?

    Mouri: Noo... it's not me.

    Sonoko: Shh!! Keep quiet...

    Masumi: ?

    Sonoko: because, I saw! Before we're wrapped you left the carpet, and that's the reason. You knew it going to happen. So you avoid.

    Mouri: No, no way!!! The moment you ask me I switch on the cellphone, when switch on the phone has no image, just black screen...

    Edogowa: So it's true? It was really that simple? Ran-nee-chan?

    Mouri: yes... and I guess it could be poor reception so I went to window nearby just two, or three steps away... before carpet starts... Speaking of it, that moment you're right behind me! With incredulous look appear on your face...

    Manga study: You can use this as reference

    In Conan's eyes he suspected Ran is Kaitou Kid and so do Sonoko. Apparently, and from Conan's thoughts, Kaitou Kid didn't steal it but someone else does. He figure out the person did not grasp fully it's not stolen case.

    pg 14 to 16 Excerpt dialogue from bottom of 14 to 15

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