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    VI

     

    Aware of Conan's predicament, his father does, and all Conan's friend of Interpol,

    when Haibara was found unconscious it was clear getting to friend is difficult.

    Tokyo isn't a great pushover, and so do America FBI, they know well.

    Yusaku had taken long time to reach as hurricane as it make way curl-

    ing to deem who dare to cross way. No thanks to traitor Vermouth who make hell

    of a ride when Conan escaping. Every friend had racking their thoughts

    together rescuing, as it was their motto now when small boy's life is in stake.

     

    Conan could only see blackness where he was hold in boot

    of car as prisoner as fake Scar Akai was responsible.

    Shackled, tied up, he starting to pray for rescue.

    Hope did not diminished but Scar Akai often like being hood

    hide, Okiya reminiscing the time he spend with sister-

    as Haibara see him as enemy but did not know well.

    Hakuba was with duo of detectives, he was dragged in

    as all fault went to Kaitou, which had him splutter by his sin.

     

    Who else is despondent are no other than Sato and Takagi.

    They were aware of their limited activity and power

    they yield but it wasn't good enough to finding out-

    found Detective Boys to learn Conan has his own gadgets

    incredulously by new information.Little they did know

    Haibara was injured, could not go to hospital,

    only to be treated by Kaitou who wrapped injuries

    afterwards, they all wait for her to wake.

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    Poem title: Interference

    Author: Artistic poet/tzswei (tzswei is my fanfiction username)
    Fandom: Detective Conan
    Characters: Ran, Conan, Heiji
    Summary: Heiji never fail come in into Conan's life.

    Word association: broke
    Genre: blank verse
    Disclaimer: I don't own Detective Conan - all the characters belong to Gosho Aoyama.

     

    So sweet, she never forgets,

    to others she look naive, heart just broke.

    She never waver, so strong she figure me out,

    she just look at me when I stand stout.

    "Ran-chan!" Heiji yell out of lungs.

    Now feel like shoot Heiji into oblivion with stun gun for just a brat.

     

    A/N: Forgot the tense, now back to present tense. *edit it and done*

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    Fan fiction.net doesn't have this fiction any more, so I upload here continuing story. I'm sorry for letting it unfinished! :o Now I feel energized want to continue so the rest will write with passion. Feel free to throw me with tomatoes or anything to drive me write faster!

     

    V

     

    Day any time will pass by, Conan had let himself free.

    As much he let his leg pumping, running fast

    one could see his captor might roar with anger unleashed.

    He didn't, dropped dead to ground by gun

    which condemn him a dead fate.

    Little did they know, Haibara was on the way

    with feet could bring her to Conan's side.

    Agasa wasn't sure where she was heading,

    he possibly know where she likely been gone

    to as Shinichi's disappearance had Tokyo fallen in despair.

     

    Heiji was no where near Conan.

    Heiji and Kuroba had themselve known

    each other acquainted, but they were closer.

    Winding down the streets, as wind blown

    to their fate thrusting them forward-

    chill did not help if they were too late.

    Tension turn high for them when reached

    with horror seeing young girl lying down

     

    bleeding who left dying, they hoisted her up.

    Haibara is the girl who got injured.

    She had met Conan but did not see danger-

    was shot and had him watched horror,

    she fallen limp with him asking to stay strong.

    He could not scream, but felt terror

    and chills climbing up him, and wished he could shake

    off snake had him crippled along with muffled cry.

    Conan found himself hoisted up again, body want to fight-

    off who was holding him planning not to let one escape.

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    Poem title: Kogoro's day
    Author: Artistic poet/tzswei (tzswei is my fanfiction username)
    Fandom: Detective Conan
    Characters: Kogoro and Eri
    Summary: Kogoro need to know what Eri want.
    Word association: breathing
    Genre: rhymed
    Disclaimer: I don't own Detective Conan - all the characters belong to Gosho Aoyama.

     

    Heavy it is, they keep pushing,

    Kogoro huff and puff, Eri was beside

    him, coaxing each other until breathing

    like they going through together, side

    by side, as if Eri was in predicament

     

    Don't be mistaken if they sound like

    that, they don't mean to be gaily, 

    Eri ask Kogoro to push more to side,

    they pushing cabinet to corner sounding silly,

    having hard time pushing it with exasperation!

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    I know this thread is sudden, let's think about it, not all people understand him and often label him stupid all times. If it's novel I have nothing to say. And this manga speak thousand of words it's easy to misunderstood we think he's lazy and if I don't interpret it it makes thousand difficult to understand it because he also is main character of whole manga throughout. Reading manga is like reading middle part of story, we often raise topic in fragment of pieces and not all people understand Kogoro well and he's being longer with Shinichi together he deserves a thread like Shinichi but he has lots and so do Ran, it's okay once in a while to mention him and sometimes we may overlook, Kogoro often mention less than Ran, only know gist of it not general picture and it's good to have short summary if no one don't know much of him; despite he is longer with Shinichi together. Yes, he is mean guy to Conan or Shinichi, and still taking him in like Uncle Vernon, from Harry Potter book, if it's not him Conan find harder to find B.O he'll be in terrible danger.

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    let's talk about Kogoro, the guy who often get in trouble with Shinichi. For once I know he's being mean not lazy that he can't get over the fact Eri is the one who left him. Before Kogoro split up he was with Eri they were loving couple. Megure wasn't that helpful as he often talk about gamble of Mahjong. I always think he's being mean to keep his image in front of familiar people and turning nice when stranger or Yoko comes, we know some people can see through his act describing he's arrogant. He's already good at karate but he don't bother to show it. How many people found him being unpredictable? I don't think he's boss, but one thing for sure about boss does like Conan and may not think much he's Shinichi as show interest. 

     

    Whether Kogoro turn blind eye to Conan is Shinichi are still mysterious, he's Kogoro I know being unpredictable. He's like another, adult version of Hajime Kindaichi from manga. I more incline to think he started to believe Conan is smart and started being observant, so I think he's being mean like first time Heiji meet Conan and I personally feel we have to observe a bit more of Kogoro, since Ran and Heiji already make progress knowing about Shinichi. I know Kogoro look aloof around Conan and may pick up fishy contact when he saw Ran saying odd things around Conan. 

     

    What I'm sure is Kogoro is no longer young, may not be active once more after Eri left, personally I feel he's more dedicated person when he live together with Eri and now he look more hopeless and scared, a bit like character I know of story, I don't think he want to know more of Conan after seeing him help or crack cases so I guess it was more type of his personality he don't want to confront Conan after what he did to him and more afraid he may break him if Conan don't come forth, because there are many times he turn mean to Shinichi it'll be twice as harder talking to Conan. Conan remind him much of young Shinichi because he often describe him as brat, and, I don't think he can handle well the news if he's that observant, or not, it's about danger.

     

    But as former officer, he may keep quiet of it as he could be learn of victims won't come forward until he or she say so. 

     

    And to you, what do you really think of Kogoro?

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    Wow, I sound way different... (sorry for the spam) I don't hate Yumi, but looking at this manga with different perception I can see inner heart concerns. 

     

    For one thing I know he's not that simple or else he won't fell for Conan's size, it seems he has sharp eye like the maid from a case. So I see from adult plot it'll more interesting he knows Yumi and return with smile then suspicious of Conan, he's much more complicated so I wonder is he being true to Yumi or Yumi has right to ditch him for reason we don't know, I conclude he's being difficult and fickle like me, one thing I'm sure of: he's dead smart.

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    But it's metaphor-ily speaking. I feel like I'm promoting detective life. lol. But in truth? No one wants more but like idea be detective, end up as police and volunteer as patrol officer. Training as detective it's like going through degree year usually no one pick that path any more. Experienced people do this, they're trained in this area. 

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    XD I can't imagine that on Kogoro... it's not like his style... lol

    But nothing impossible I thought it's Japanese pronunciation got me laughing but now I know it's not. 

    Very likely he add that as his username. But in the end he may change to suit his image when pretend be detective online using KogoroisConansensei

    Genta: LuvUnagi1234

    Ayumi: <3detectivegirl<3

    Gin: City_hunter

    Vermouth: xoxvineyardxox

    Shinichi: Holmes' apprentice

    Ran: ~Karategirl~

    Mitushiko: DetectiveMit

    Haibara: Black and White Frankenstein

    Takagi: young_lover

    Sato: Satoforfriends34

    Yumi: Officer Yumi

    Megure: Detective_guy

    Hattori: TheMadhatter

    Kazuha: Hatter's sister

     

    I couldn't think more any more! I later think more...

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    i've been here earlier but I'm not gonna to read whole thread and it's silly I agree there's certain reasons I change my mind. Whether boss show up or not I now resign to see other way because boss often make himself anonymous. Somehow it lead me thinking where he really work because I heard people like to work front line to control media or so on so he can tamper with it before it go on news. Earlier in DCTP I had a conjunction about him being surrounded by Yukkiko, Yoko, and cast, it's more like style boss might want for sake of contributing. Nobody will suspects donor. Nobody suspects nerd. Nobody suspect technician. Nobody suspect host. But usually this occupation can be find in media station? Gosho make it harder to find like finding needle in the sack in media station. Safer place is dangerous place where boss is. More dangerous for him if he's a cop. More limited power when he's teacher. More accessible moving screen of tv? Possible because the job occupation is anonymous in media station. To him it's game plan, is it?? 

     

    If we can't find him in prologue of Golden Apple case, we know the story evolve around media. Kogoro became famous. Yukkiko is actress. Yusaku is famous writer. Shinichi is famous of deduction. If from start the story is about media, I can think it's possible and safe to assume Gosho is likely making boss is part of media. He's indirectly mention of him is he? Boss is more willing to be part of end of game plan is to divert news away from world, what's the best place he could be at if he choose not to be police? He can lock away the tape. He can have alibi that he has a job at media station he could say he can take a break. He'll be the one to stop high prolific person to ensure tape wasn't in for showcase.  

     

    That's boss's job do after hero go through final round.

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    Well being a detective won't be easy, those requires hard work. But it usually questions will you able to see corpse and that's one major test you have to pass through if you seriously want to be one. Being smart is one thing, but it always boils down to one major point, are you good at piecing pieces together to understand who is the culprit with gathered references. We learn a lot from reading detective conan because we already know there are many ways and types of understanding case even difficult ones.

     

    One way to hone detective skills is always improvise. If you're not good at Maths, science, English, it does not make you bad detective! If you're observant enough and keen to do well I don't see why not to be detective, it takes hard work. Majorly cases ask you to think out of box so it usually ask your lateral thinking not only on evidence it always boil down to draw conclusion of the case.

     

    I didn't study but did practical exercise with group in past at high school, but nowadays I didn't pull my brain together thinking 'cause I'm being git for not thinking through cases I read, it's too many before I could jump conclusions Conan work and save the day. XD I become 'bystander' of the case and really try to put head together here but it didn't come out well when I 'type' theory.

     

    Recently I change monitor and suddenly had clear head I'm thankful I start to put on thinking cap on. In high school I remember teacher did provide insight of being detective, if you're lucky to have one testing you out with practical 'handnotes' you may able to work as detective if doing different exercise endlessly everyday. Conan is smart, even he's tone deaf he still can work it out, he learn long how to reach out and get things he want and he's highly intelligent we see on anime, and tv.

     

    Research is one thing, science help to draw out conclusions, but become hard-core detective like Heiji and Conan it basically it's not about knowledge any more because one has to be careful of bait culprit may put to lure detectives think other way. This sort call 'hard core' detective might exist in Japan because of security can afford for high performance in country.

     

    Hajimi Kindaichi may not be focus in study but he's smart enough to draw conclusions of case without using extensive knowledge, being detective one has to aware of pitfalls and observe fishiness of situation and location providing on spot. Cops can crack case because they won't take in evidence enough as good excuse and really put their minds together focusing on criminal minds and small evidence of evidence tamper. 

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    Came to think about it, the story is slightly slow, I'm not sure about Eisuke, I have a feeling Eisuke may take part soon, he might come back. I don't have theory, 'cause both sides aren't moving, but I'm dying of suspense here to point I wish I can take down manga one moment. I don't think Amuro knows of B.O. existence before joining academy, or else he won't disappear for nothing. If Date is preoccupied to find him, one thing means Gosho won't add in extra story for nothing as he might plan relating it to main plot soon. The story about Wataru Brothers are filler, because we learn one thing about Date has connection with Amuro on Amuro's disappearance, if Amuro is reckless, come to think about it, it could be he plan to be reckless from start he may hiding truth of whereabouts, when he was in Academy.

     

    We now know who is Bourbon, but we don't know what will be his next action; we know one thing he is capable to murder (if you spot clearly that filler you understand) and they waiting either one of them start war or planning action; I guess we have to wait for next murder which will relate to Bourbon we get to learn more story and about him. 

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    I don't like candies. I've had my sweet tooth pulled out just today :mellow: but a bucket of ice cream would do \o/

    lol didn't you say that it's about to get 12MN there when you posted your comment? :P

    hahaha okay you can smile anytime and every time you want XD

    :D

    Originally, I planned to go to Singapore in 2012's winter but had to be scrapped. Now, I'll trying to go to Singapore when my senior class was in National Exam

    Well, hope all goes well. :)

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    :) Don't forget to bring enough cash to there! Their currency digits can freak you out even there's no decimal. Going to there it's like I'm in France. It's equally expensive as France. When I was there I always take out handphone to check converter.

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